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shmhetras

@shmhetras

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#551

I really really liked the update in every sense. Very well written- lucid and precise. As for the story- I have till date enjoyed every bit of it. I like this Maan in your story.

Keep it going. :-)

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#552

update was awsome as always...congrats for being the spotlight of the week...you truly deserve that...😊 when ll we get an update of nmt??😊

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Boogle.Schiz

@Boogle.Schiz

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

These two are definately ending up together...they have notother choice heheh. Right now, they're in that 'new-crush-turned-partner-totally-adorable' kinda stage of a relationship 😆

Okay ignore my ramblings, I have just woken up and had 2 glasses of coke for breakfast.

Edited by .-Moksha-. - 13 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Hey...

I read this FF today...it is really very interesting...

I have send u buddy request...

please pm me when u update...

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

i am so not going to analyse or answer the last line Q...

coz she has to answer it herself...😆

c'mon...she knows...i think she does...that it is a case of rebound...

but then the way they come together...the warmth...HOT CHOCOLATE...😳..i am so reading NY times again...😍

he knows what he is doing...yet it seems he cant stop himself...n she cant stop him...mayb she doesnt want to...\

he makes her forget all the past incidents...he makes her alive...makes her feel that she is the one who has to make a decision...she is the one who decides...

i am so not making sense...i better stop...😳

lovely part...

seems like drama is in store...she is visiting family...well that has to mean drama...😆

as for him...dadi will figure it all out...😉

continue soon...

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charlie1950

@charlie1950

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Soothingly amazing update

The wait was worth it

Loved the way maan took her to see

the sunrise,like he wanted them to belong

To each other and the morning to belong

to them.

Will patiently wait do the next update.

Is there more to it to the Pooja as abhinav

have spoken to geets mom and now mom is

askin her to go to this pooja.

Well I hope or rather I want maan and geet to

spend the evening together though they both

have said that they both r busy still why not surprise

each other.

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Princess DD

@Amoureux

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Okay so i expected some drama in this part for the way he left her and went out in the last part...

A fear or some confusion, something but you surprised me... Now i'm confused. May be i need to wait to see how and where this is going 😳 Oh yeah but he did kiss her before leaving... So ... 😕

But enjoyed the update loads... I hope things remain as lovey dovey for them... but is that even a possibility 😳

Edited by Azmatazz - 13 years ago