Originally posted by: Azmatazz
😳 Well i seem to be on target here 😉 Here's the reason for the reserved... i just did not want to say nice update and waiting for more... since i just went through the chapter in a hurry... I was wanting to read it back again and make sure what i was thinking or understanding from the chapter is what it was meant to be... and come back and comment on it...
As to just to give you a hint of how close your stories are to me... I was in San Francisco last weekend for a holiday and I specifically wanted to visit Sausalito just to see why you picked up the specific place in your story or i was jumping with joy watching Pete's cafe in downtown only to realise it was in SF and not in New York... but yes the name got me excited 😉 and i was also searching for the blue bottle coffee comapny 😳(These are just a few that were mentioned)
lets say, I was trying to live your stories in my visit...
Coming back to the reserved, you deserve a better comment but for that i need to read the chapter once again so bear with me until i come back 😉
Thank you and trust me it means a lot.
Here is the link to
Blue bottle Coffee co. Its a local one unfortunately.
As for the locations I choose, it might sound weird to you, but in the workshops I have taken, they ask you to think of specifics about characters. And that is why I keep saying that the skeleton of the narrative is always the same and the details is what any writer/author keeps working on.
In my head Maan & Geet are living close to Van Ness and Sacremento - the upper middle class living in SF.
Sausalito - More suited for M&G from NY times, since we were going for the Khuranas to be Indian blue blood et all and Sausalito is more for the elite here.
I'm hoping you walked all these places, instead of driving through. Trust me there is a huge difference.
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