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Posted: 13 years ago
Me back :)

Coming with my own inputs soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement

A...Let me answer your first question.

The reason Maan didn't want to name their relationship, because he didn't want her to be confined to the emotional framework that comes with christening their relationship.
He could call it friendship, but there is certainly attraction as well. So there is leeway for creating an internal conflict in her, when she is ready to acknowledge or wants to express her affections...even attraction physically . And the same restrain can come with different levels. Think about this: what if they go different ways after they find out it was only enjoyable until they were having coffee and nothing more? Calling it a relationship, will make this time count when it turns sour. Either ways its too soon to call it one, when they still have no idea about their backgrounds or personalities in entirety. For all you know, he could still be a serial killer...:)

The second question about directing all of one's love and affection towards one person...Well it comes into picture, when their attractions are acknowledged and matures enough to be called a relationship of some form. At the moment, they like each other enough to not mind spending around time around the other. I think its pretty embarrassing and ingenue of them to call it a relationship, (let alone approach this as a open relationship), when they have only really known each other for a few hours.
Don't you think?

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Oh!...the most important of all: its she who questions if Maan is proposing a open relationship. The update is all from Geet's POV, except for the last para.

I always give a double space when the POV changes. :)


All the more a reason for my confusion regarding the title for this update. The entire thing is from Geet's POV but it is Maan who believes that there is no need to name their relationship yet. I re-read it 2 times to make sure it was actually Geet's POV because the title made me think that it has to be Maan;s POV. 😛

And yes, I read ur reply to my earlier comment and agree that it became necessary for Maan to talk to her since he knew he was affecting her in some way and she was beginning to avoid him because of it. Great thinking. Love it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun


All the more a reason for my confusion regarding the title for this update. The entire thing is from Geet's POV but it is Maan who believes that there is no need to name their relationship yet. I re-read it 2 times to make sure it was actually Geet's POV because the title made me think that it has to be Maan;s POV. 😛

And yes, I read ur reply to my earlier comment and agree that it became necessary for Maan to talk to her since he knew he was affecting her in some way and she was beginning to avoid him because of it. Great thinking. Love it.



Now I get the reason...I generally go for the essence of the update, than the POV. If it helps, think of Geet frowning and mumbling "What's in a name?...Yeah right...Like Shakespeare" And making a face at him 😛

Well, we will see what Geet makes of the way Maan has put forth his point, within hours of knowing her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet was contemplating so much.
She was avoiding him but wanted him to give her all the attention.
Finally when Maan did come and voice out his feelings she was so silent.
Maan was the best he waited as long as he could and gave her more brooding time.
Wonder what her response would be.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update...amazing writing...very good exposure of their feelings...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... A beautiful update
Fabulous
Luved Maans n Geet pov.
They had a beautiful conversation.
They have a great effect on each other. Their feelings are slowly cuming out. That why you named this chapter " Exposed".
Maan by this time knows eveything about her.
Now wat will happen next. How these two will behave.

Continue soon. Will be waiting.
Keep writing.
Thanx for pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh.. Wow.. U updated!!!!

Now as it is I was thinking that everything is happening too fast..Their emotions.. feeling towards each other.. is changing or evolving at a fast pace... n here.. Maan directly confronts Geet..

I feel that its very early for them to go in any kind of relationship...I mean its just been few hrs..
Maan says that he likes being with her.. it cud b bcoz rite now there is nobody else in d coach except for Geet...😆😆 May b he just plain bored!!!! 😆
Sorry..What shud I say.. I m confused like Geet...😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
spell-bounding update hasini..
it was so enthralling..
and while many may think the developments are too early, i think they are just fine because they are just attracted to each other..and while love can take a lifetime to educe itself, attraction just needs a mere glance, a little company and a slight tug from the other person...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .Stuff.

Americans...why is everything opposite for you people? I saw the 01 and assumed you updated on the first of Jan...and this was a old update. Only when I looked again did I realise it mentioned the third.


You know, am just glad he got it over and done with...well partly, if not giving their relation 'a name' at least they've acknowledged they feel something for each other. Though even I'm starting to wonder what that really is...they seem to enjoy each others company, but that's it...well for now. I guess a relationship is like a flower, it can either blossom into something for beautiful or just whither away.

I'm just rambling...saying stuff like that really doesn't suit me 😆😆

Edit: Ooh...this was 33rd post...I love palindromic numbers 😆



😆 I just noticed this...I'm used to this date format. See the thing is, if we don't have country specific formats, we won't have many jobs out there ranging from transportation to IT.

THANK YOU...The point here is that its only something. It could turn out be only enough to have coffee and walk away to their own apartments after that.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sia221

Oh.. Wow.. U updated!!!!


Now as it is I was thinking that everything is happening too fast..Their emotions.. feeling towards each other.. is changing or evolving at a fast pace... n here.. Maan directly confronts Geet..

I feel that its very early for them to go in any kind of relationship...I mean its just been few hrs..
Maan says that he likes being with her.. it cud b bcoz rite now there is nobody else in d coach except for Geet...😆😆 May b he just plain bored!!!! 😆
Sorry..What shud I say.. I m confused like Geet...😆😆



😆 Or he could really be the stalker she made him to be.
Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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