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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1011

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

true...to some extent...
but then...there is a mystery surrounding leher...n naina is the perfect one...
in order to save her...they can do this...
n moreover...leher can turn out to be negative in the end...😈
like naina's relatives r good...but leher separated them...

PS -- how r the kiddos hima...its been long time...😳

Long time jyo
Kiddos are good they are growing in leaps and bounds
i am not able to keep pace with them though
How is your college going??

You made Leher evil 😲
That would be one awesome twist

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1012

I don't know if making her Evil would work out...

Read this from wiki...

"Excitement and intrigue alone is what the audience feels toward a focal character, while a sense of empathy about the character's objectives and emotions is what the audience feels toward the protagonist."

Leher is the female protagonist.

You think you will still choose for Dhruv to end up with Leher, if her intentions were evil to start with.

How about casting her as someone on the run? Owing to having done something illegal at her end - That being the secret 😉 - for Naina's sake. And Dhruv abets the crime once he learns of the details.

What say?

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1013

Test post

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1014

May be Leher separated Naina from her relatives for her own good.
Though Leher being evil sounds interesting i would want her to be good.
And i always love happily ever after
So hope they end up together
Its upto you though H

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1015

Hasini 🤗...u gals have been busy...page 150...in one day so many pages and ideas to catch up...loved all the different themes for the story...beautiful song for Dhruv and Naina...part 1 was awesome...want Leher to be on the run with Naina like u suggested...how about a new thread now...plz give me the link when u start it...thank u so much for this new story...love u...TC 😊

Jyoti and Avi 🤗...thank u for the awesome suggestions for the story. ...really enjoyed reading them 😊

Hima 🤗...thank u for the lovely themes u suggested and for the video u posted...really appreciate the effort 😊

Sorry if i missed anyone 😳...all the ideas were awesome 👍🏼

Edited by --Ratna-- - 13 years ago

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Tyro

@Tyro

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#1016

Originally posted by: Ramhari

Long time jyo
Kiddos are good they are growing in leaps and bounds
i am not able to keep pace with them though
How is your college going??

You made Leher evil 😲
That would be one awesome twist

they r keeping u on ur toes...😆

college ..finally over...got rid of cruella ...😃...now awaiting results...

i was just trying a new angle...😛

guess i am reading too much stories where the female protagonist's nature is not what u imagine it would be...😆

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Tyro

@Tyro

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#1017

How about casting her as someone on the run? Owing to having done something illegal at her end - That being the secret 😉 - for Naina's sake. And Dhruv abets the crime once he learns of the details.

now that is y u r the writer...😳

for them to get married...there has to be something on both the ends...n will make them get in the bond of matrimony...

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#1018

Had you changed the character's name. To Leher and Dhruv. Or did I missed some portion.

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1019

I was just thinking, how bout making Naina as Leher's own sister.
But cos of some event she had to keep it secret.

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1020

Brilliant twist...

Now putting this into the story is going to take some skill. Yeah! but this is just it...😊 I was going for something a little more complicated, but this will do it.

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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