Pyaar keh rang!.a fanfic(sujal n kashish) - Page 23

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Posted: 19 years ago
farahji aap please jaldi se continue karo na.. aap ne kaha ki agla part coming shortly par ab thak aap ne post nahi kiya..... 😭
please jaldi se karna..... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok guys..so herez pyaar keh rang....thank you areej, rs, golu, surya, aisha, and kulbin...for your comments. 😃 😃

recap:...sujal and kashish have some ghusa come pyaar confrontation..and kashish runs away crying...lol...(aur kar bhi kya sakti hai bechari)

Its evening now..
piyush:...kashish plz..ab rona bandh bhi karo.....
kashish:....mere saath aisa kyun ho raha hai...jitna mein usse dur jana chahti hon uthna hi woh mere pass araha hai.....
piyush:....yehi to tum chahti ho na......sujal keh pass rehna....you love him...
kashish:...par woh kisi aur ka hai piyush....yeh baat tumhe samajh kyun nahi arahi.......mein...mein kisi ka ghar tor kar apni khushiyon ka mahal nahi bana chahti...

piyush:...tum uske pass nahi jana chahti..use dur nahi jana chahti.....kashish.....pehle tum khudh soch lo tumhe karna kiya hai....
kashish:.(wipes her tears)...muje waapis ja kar yeh nokri chorni hai...
piyush:....(thinks to himself)..yeh plan to ulta para...ab kya karun.......kisi na kisi tarah kashish ko sujl keh pass lana hi hoga....warna
kashish:..tum kya soch rahe ho?
piyush:...woh....mein soch raha tha...keh...tum ab tak tayar kyun nahi hui.....
kashish:..mera dil nahi kar raha
piyush:...oh come on kashish....hotel walon ne itne pyaar se bulaya hai apni 50th anniversary par....plzz...unka sara khana zaya ho jayega...
kashish:...to kya sara khana mein khane wali hon?
piyush:....nahi mein....par agar tum nahi jaogi...to mein kaise ja sakta hon.....you know...couples allowed hain.....
kashish:..piyush....tum chale jao na kisi aur...
piyush:..fine.....muje nahi jana...(he turns around)
kashish:..hm...naraz ho gaye...?....acha chalo baba...mein tayar ho kar ati hon...
piyush:....yeh hui na baat...
......................................................

archie:..sujal...tum ab tak tayar nahi huwe
sujal:...kyun?
archie:..abhi to bataya tha...aaj yahan party hai...chalo na....maza ayega..
sujal:..tum chali jao..mera mood nahi hai...
archie:...(she puts her hand on his shoulder)..kya baat hai....tum pareshan ho?
sujal: (backs her hand off)...archie plz.....muje....muje yeh sab pasand nahi....
archie:...(feels bistified)..i ..i am sorry....(she turns away)
sujal:...(realizes his mistake)...archie.....party kab start hogi?
archie (smiles)....8 baje...
sujal looks at his watch:...to chalein...
archie's smile gets wider.....

all the couples are entering inside an enormous and amazingly decorated hall......the music is on and people are dancing....while sujal and archie are sitting near the corner on a table of four... 😉 ..

archie:....Aray....PIIYUSSH! (she waves at him)
piyush and kashish had just entered..and kashish as usual was looking mind blowing..uska baal hawa keh saath saath ur rahe the...uske chehre ki masumiyat aur bhi bahut kuch etc etc..lol...

sujal:...tum....janti ho isse?
archie:..haan...bataya tha na..meri gari kharab hui thi to...piyush hi muje yahan le kar aya...
sujal looks ar piyush and kashish who were walking towards them....

kashish:..piyush...hum udhar kyun ja rahe hain
piyush:..kyunk..woh khoobsurat larki muje bula rahi hai..
kashish:..woh khoobsurat larki ..sujal ki fiance hai..
piyush:..pata hai
kashish:..tumhe kaise pata?
piyush:..yaar..sujal keh saath bheti hai to..usi ki fiance hogi....tum bhi na kashish...

they had now reached the table...sujal stands up and constantly stares at kashish....while kashish is felling awkward....kabhei suajl ko dekhti to kabhie nazrein chura leti...

archie:...piyush...kahan gayab ho gaye the tum..mein ne tumhe sujal se mil wana tha
piyush:...(smiles)..waise hum jante hain keh dosre ko...hain na sujal
sujal just smiles and looks at kashish...
piyush:..by the way archie..yeh meri doost hai....kashish....
archie:....hi....waise inke naam se waqif hon mein...(she smiles at sujal)...
piyush:..(pulls the chair and sits)..i hope we can join you...
sujal:..sure...
sujal pulls out a chair for kashish and she sits down...right next to sujal...
sab log khamosh the...
arhcie sujal ko dekh rahi thi..sujal kashish ko...aur kashish idhar udhar..while piyush was thinking of something..

piyush:...(to himself)..kisi tarah archie ko hataoo.n....hmmm....
piyush:...may i...
archie:...dance?
piyush:...obviously yaar...i am not proposing to you...
everyone gets serious while piyush laughs:...joke tha guys..
archie smiles and takes piyush's hand:...mein abhi ayi sujal...
sujal doesnt even bother to reply....

after a while....
kashish is fed up of sujal staring at her...she gets up to leave..
sujal:..kashish...
kashish stops and truns:...kya baat hai...
sujal:..mein ne kuch baat karni thi...
kashish:...ab bhi kuch baqi hai...
sujal:....bahut kuch baqi hai kashish...
kashish looks at him...
sujal:..mein....apne subah keh behaviour keh liye....i mean....i am....
just then a man comes there
man:..aray ap log yahan kahre kya kar rahe hain...aise nahi chale ga.....everyone has to join the floor....come one...(he pushes sujal and kashish towards the dance floor)
kashish:..par mein..(tries to hesistate when sujal holds her hand.....and takes her towards the dancing floor)

song time....
pyaar keh liye ..char pal kaam nahi the
kabhie tum nahi the..kabhie hum nahi thee...
kabhie tum nahi the kabhieeee hum nahii thee...

sujal was holding kashsih really close and both were lost in each others eyes....(while piyush was observing all this)

..(song cont...while sujal thinks)....agar tum yeh dil mangle te...janeman hum tumhe jaan dete...

(kashish thinks)...tumhe kaise hum bhool pate...mar ke bhi tum humein yaad ate...

(sujal)...tumhe hai pata...bewafa hum nahi thee...
...........tumhe hai pata...bewafaaa hum nahi thee...

kashish had tears that were almost about to drop....when the song ended....everyone left their patners....except for sujal and kashish...who still stood their,,,looking at each other with love and hope....

archie:...sujal...
but sujal didnt respond...
archie shakes sujal...
archie:...um...khana kha lein...?
kashish leaves sujal at once and walks away...

sujal too leaves while archie gets an evil thought....

back at the table:...
archie:..so..kashish....tum simla ki rehne wali ho
kashish:...(who didnt wanted to talk)...haan...
archie:..tumhare parents kya karte hain...
kashish:..mera is duniya mein koi nahi....
sujal looks at kashish with sympathy...
archie:..oh...i am sorry....to tum anath ho? (she says teasingly)
sujal:.archie...(snubs her)
kashish feels really bad
piyush:..nahi..mein ho na...is ka doost....is ka best friend..(he smiles at kashish to comfort her)
archie:...haan..woh to hai.....waise tum apne jaisi middle class larkiyon se kafi muqtalif ho...

everyone is quiet.....waiting for archie to throw the bomb...
kashish:..matlab?
archie:..mera matlab....aj kal ki larkiyon ka bus ek hi kam hota hai..ek ameer larke ko apne pyaar keh jal mein phasalo aur phir sari propertyyy...
sujal:..archie can we plz eat...(gets really angry)
while kashish feels extremly degrading and gets up...
piyush:..kashish..kahan ja rahi ho....
kashish:...muje bhook nahi hai....(she qickly walks away)
piyush looks at archie....who suddenly feels a bit guilty)
sujal too pushes his plate and follows kashish...jo keh hotel se bahir ja chuki thi........

ok. kafi lamba ho gaya..lol.....ab agaye...hhehehaha...truck keh saath accident kis ak hoga?...kon mare ga.?...aha..lol..just kidding...guys will be back shortly.... 😃 plz comment
love farah

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Posted: 19 years ago
😃 ..and thank you shurti and ana...luv u both 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah good part par kab sujal kashish ko i love u bolega
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Posted: 19 years ago
wahhh..!!! Nice Part yaar Farah....lagta hai china town dekh ker kuch zyada hi ideas mil rahe hain 😆 😆 😆
waisay zabardast story hai ...gr888 👏
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ab dekhtay hain aap ka yeh break kitna short hota hai ..hehehehe
Continueee soooon..!!!!
luv
Iman
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Posted: 19 years ago
Kiya part likh hai farah ji zabardast
Ye archie ka to kuchh karo wapis bhej do
lagta hai k aap ki logon ko marne ki
aadat abhi tak chhoti nahi 😆

& will be back shortly means SHORTLY 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah jiiii
gr8888888888888👏
sujal ko tau archie ka band bajana chaiye
or yeh piyush ka bacha............hamesha galat waqt pay bolta hai
song kobhi abhi khatam hona tha
likin abh agay kia hona hai............lagta hai maza aaye ga
love u too jii 😳

lol
ana

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Posted: 19 years ago
excellnet part!!!!!!!!111 😆

and u better be back shortly 😉
cont soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
frah just tooo good........ ab chalo sujal ko jaldi se kashish ke pass bhej do aur ghalatfaimiyaan durr karo & ya be back soon......me will be waiting.........
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Posted: 19 years ago
nahi lambi nahi hay!!this is so sweet!!Humne iss se bhi jyada lambi part parne main koi aitrazz nahi hay 👏

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