Pyaar keh rang!.a fanfic(sujal n kashish) - Page 21

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haan yaar Farah bauhat din ho gaye ...jaldi post keroooo na intezar ker rahe hain sab ...
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Posted: 19 years ago
farahji yeh kya aapne ab thak story continue nahi kiiiiiiiiiii..............me will cry............. 😭 😭
please continue sooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.................me waiting.. 😃
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hey guys..sorry i know its been ages..par kya karun exams ne bara tang kiya huwa hai..lol..anywayz herez the next part to pyaar k rang.....thank you everyone.. 😃

recap:...archie and piyush arrive at the hotel while sujal and kashish also come back after attending their meeting....

piyush aur archie khana kha rahe hote hain when piyush's cell rings..
piyush:..just a sec...

piyush walks away..
piyush:..hello uncle..
lalit;....kaam ho gaya?
piyush:...yahan to sara kaam kharab ho gaya hai
lalit:...kyun...ab kya huwa?
piyush:..uncle woh....mein aur archie is waqt dono....hotel pohanch chuke hain...sujal kashish bus ate hi honge
lalit:.WHAT!....ek number k bewaqoof ho tum..mein ne tumhe bheja tha archie ko kahin aur le jane keh liey aur....piiiiiyushhh.
piyush:..uncle...ap fikar na karein....mein ho na..
lalit:..isi ka to dar hai.....ab kaam tumne kharab kiya hai..tum hi sambhalo....(he disconnects)

here sujal and kashish enter the hotel..
sujal:..(To the receptionist)...hi...umm...meri keys yahan hongi..sujal..sujal garewal...
archie:...suuuuuuuujal!..(she comes running and hugs him)
kashish takes a step back....she isnt happy to see archie..lol
sujal:.aa..archie...tum yahan....yahan kya kar rahi ho
archie:..surprize!...?..(she smiles)

receptionist:..sir,....apki keys...
kashish quietly takes her keys and turns around to walk away...

sujal:...(pata nahi kyun woh kashish ko jate dekh achanak bechain sa ho jata hai....he doesnt want her to leave him.....)....kaashiiish

kashish turns around...as if waiting for him to call her...
but before sujal could say something archie speaks up
archie:.aacha....to kashish.....right....tum bhi ayi hui ho....(she looks at sujal)..
kashish apni nazrein churati hai
archie:...chalo na sujal....mein ne tumhare liye tumhari favourite dishes mangwai hain....lets go...

sujal hesitates a bit ....while constantly looking at kashish......:....chalo kashish.....khana khate hain...
kashish looks at him:...muje bhook nahi hai....sir....(this time she walks away quickly.....leaving behind sujal.....who was feeling an incompletness....

in the lift....kashish wipes her tears...
voice:..ro rahi ho
kashish turns around to see piyush there...
kashish:..piyuush!..TUM?...yahan kya kar rahe ho?
piyush:....pehle tum batao keh tum ro kyun rahi ho
kashish:..nahi to....shayad ankh mein kuch chala gaya....
piyush:...ya...shayad ab tak sujal ko bhoola nahi payi.....uski yaadein to nahi chub rahi kahin??
kashish:...piyush plz...mein is bare mein baat nahi karna chahti....
there is silence in the lift for a moment
kashish:..tum ne bataya nahi....tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?..(smiles)....is bar kis larki keh peeche aye ho?
piyush:..tumhare..(he mumbles)
kashish:..kya?
piyush:....mere matlab....mein ne socha keh kyun na dehli dekh lo...aj tak aya nahi na yahan....
kashish shakes her head:....you are impossible piyush....
(the lift opens and both fo them get out..the lift closes)
kashish:..isi hotel mein reh rahe ho?
piyush:..haan....room 509....
kashish:..really...mein 510 mein...
piyush:..pata hai...(mumbles again)
kashish:..yeh tum kya burbura rahe ho?
piyush:..kashish....tum... (but before he could finish..achanak se lift ka darwaza phir se khulta hai and this time around sujal comes out....)

sujal, kashish aur piyush ko dekhta hai....and gets frustrated....and jealous...
piyush:..hi ..sujal...
sujal:..hi..(he shows a cold shoulder and goes on staring at kashish)
piyush:..tum bhi isi floor par?
sujal:..kyun...mein nahi asakta?
piyush:..nahi mera matlab...um....kashish mein room mein hon......khane ka order kar deta hon....(he walks away)
ab sujal ka para bahut high ho gaya tha..
kashish truns around when sujal grabs her by her arm and pushes her towards the wall....
kashish:...sssujal...choro muje....
sujal:....kya samjhti ho kuhd ko....
kashish:..what?
sujal:......i am your boss dammit....
kashish:...to phir apni haad mein raho...
sujal:...meri haad?...ha....(grabs her shoulders and comes reeeeeeeally close to her)....meri haad tumne abhi dekhi kaha hai...ms kashiiish....
they both look at each other......
kashish:....naf...nafrat karti ho mein tumse.....tumhare ehsaas se........tumhari maujodgi se....(she pushes him back)...i hate you....
she starts to cry when sujal comes near her again...lifts her face:.....(smiles)...nafrat karne keh liye bhi ehsaas ki zaruurat hai.....kisi rishte ki zarurat hai......kya rishta hai humara ?.....kis haq se nafrat karti ho mujse.....jawab do kashish.....

kashish looks at him again....this time..sujal ahista se haath agaye karta hai and wipes her tears.....he holds her from her waist and brings her closer....they were about to kiss each other when kashish comes back to reality....

kashsih:..nahi....nahi ...(she gets out of sujal's grip and runs away....still crying....)

sujal stands still leaning his hand on the wall.....thinking keh kya kashish ki nafrat ko woh apne pyaar mein dhaal payega.....ya yeh pyaar hi hai jo nafrat keh roop mein zahir ho raha hai....umm..lol....pata nahi..hehe

ok here was teh next part....hehe hope zaida pakao na ho....will come back after sometime...with some fast pace stuff happening 😉 ..plz comments 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 awesomee part diii.........kya part thaa waah waah 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
😃 😃 ..thank you surbhi ..youre a sweet heart

😃 😃 ..you too jyothi 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Lash part Farah 👏
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jaldi likhna intezaar nahin hoga.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wah wah!
fara pehli baar mujhey um per pyaar araha hai...aala part likha hai...too good
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Posted: 19 years ago
too gud 👏 👏 awesome....teh last part bet sujal and kashish was awesome.. 😉 😳
write soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
zabardast..!!!!!!!!
eik sitting main pure 30 pgs parh liye maine....
cont again soon....
waise yaar.... u should think about joining balaji's creative team....
😆
Edited by destinyz - 19 years ago

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