Maan and Geet FF-Hameshaa **NOTE** - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51


Maaneet kiss so soon...but it was lovely...

now villian is coming in between...

awesome update...thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
loved the update...
omg he said he loves her at the second meet itself...
and had their 1st kiss too...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
😲.😆...😉...maan babu you are too smart...😉...
loved the update please continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
awesome update loved it so sweet maan ki thanks for the pm misty
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
part 2
wow!
maan is sooo funny 🤣
loved the update
omg the precap!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
part 3
wowiie they kissed heheheh and omg he bought the dupatta for her =)
loved the update
precap looks interesting
cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awsem update sunset point waah prec ap ius bad vickram going to meet geet haye
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
amazing part...

merry chirstmas n hapy new year dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Part 4

It was raining very heavily and Geet was getting dressed to meet Maan at the Sunset Point.She put the duppata at her neck which Maan had given to her at the Mela.She smiles seeing that duppata around her neck.it was a token from Maan for their love and she valued it so much.
Geet:''Maan'' she blushed by just saying his name and now she was going to meet him alone.She took her bag and books and came out from her room.She saw her father ''Good Morning Papa'' Dr Mohinder Handa was preparing for his clinic which he ran from home.
Mohinder Handa:''Good morning Beta...Where are you going?''
Geet:''College''
Mohinder Handa:''In this heavy rain''
Geet:''Papa...its only the second day of college and you always know that I don't bunk college...so I have to go''
Mohinder Handa:''Geet...cant you wait till the rain stops''
Geet:''No papa and besides I know that this rain will not stop...and I have to go to college...bye'' she said as she took her umbrella from the stand.
Mohinder Handa:''okay...bye...take care of yourself''
Geet;''I will'' she said and she left her home.The rain was not stopping...instead it became heavier.Geet was having trouble with the umbrella as the wind was very strong.A car was approaching towards her and seeing her the driver stop the car.Geet's umbella flew and she was all wet.Geet saw the car and went towards it.
Geet:''Excuse me...I need to go to Sunset Point...can you pls give me a lift...pls''
Driver:''Sure''
Geet:''Thank you'' she entered the car
Driver:''by the way...the name is Vikram''
Geet:''Thank you...Vikram''
Vikram:''Sorry but where are you going in this heavy rain?''
Geet:''Sunset Point''
Vikram:''In this heavy rain?''
Geet:''Yes...there is someone...whom I need to meet''
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Maan was getting dressed to meet Geet at the Sunset Point.He wanted to look his best and besides he always does look his best.Dadima came to his room and saw him getting dressed.She smiled.
Dadima:''Where are you going?''
Maan:''I need to go to Sunset Point''
Dadima:''Are you meeting someone?''
Maan:''No...No Dadi...just like that''
Dadima:''Oh!!!
Just like that...Maan...I know you since the day who were born...so don't try to lie to me...so you better tell me...Who are you going to meet?'' She went and sit on the arm chair.
Maan:''Dadi'' he said and went to the arm chair ''How do you always know what I am feeling?''
Dadima:''Maan...I am not only your Dadi...I am also your mother and father...so tell me...Who is this girl?''
Maan:''Her name is Geet...Geet Handa...she is a new student in the college...she is very beautiful and good girl...Dadima...she is very special''
Dadima:''of cos...she is special...she made a place in your heart which other girl could not...So when are you going to let me meet Geet and her family to discuss for your marriage?''
Maan:''Slow Dadima...I am going to meet her...to propose to her properly...after that we can meet her father...she only has her father...Dr Mohinder Handa with her''
Dadima:''Okay...Maan...I am so happy to see that you are happy and before you go and meet her'' she took out a ring from the box
Maan:''Whose ring is this Dadi?''
Dadima:''Your mother's...I gave this ring to her when she came into this house as a daughter-in-law...now I want you to give this ring to Geet''
Maan:Thank you...Dadima'' they hugged

Dadima:''Maan...I am so happy for you'' Maan took Dadima blessing and left the house ''Babaji...pls let any evil eye cast on my Maan and Geet'' she prayed
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Geet was still in the car as Vikram was driving very slowly.At first...she thought that it was because of the rain but now...when the rain and stopped...he was still driving very slowly
Geet:''Vikram...if you don't mind...can you drive a bit faster...as that person might be waiting for me''
Vikram:''I don't like speed''
Geet:''That is weird cos you own a sports car''
Vikram:''Yes but I don't like driving fast...You seem that you are in a hurry''
Geet:''Yes I am'' she was not convince with his answer.She felt like he kept looking at her.She covered herself with her duppata properly.She just wish that that the Sunset Point comes faster.''Maan...pls wait for me...Pls wait for your Geet''
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Maan had reached the Sunset Point but he saw that Geet was not there.
Maan:''She will come...I know that she will but where is she?'' Geet reached the Sunset Point at last.
Geet:''Thank you babaji''
Vikram:''So...here we are''
Geet:''Thank you'' and she got out of the car quickly
Vikram:''Hope to see you again...Geet'' She smiled and walked towards the Sunset Point.
Geet:''and I hope that I never see you again...Vikram''

Precap:Maan and Geet



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Edited by KTPROCKS - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
I Started to hate vikram already...

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