Dhadkan *Sujal And Kashish*

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Posted: 19 years ago

#61

Iman kahan ho yaar continue sooon????????

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#62

iman dear continue........please......... 😭

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Posted: 19 years ago

#63

yaar continue soon cant wait anymore.............. 😭

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Javeria

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Posted: 19 years ago

#64

story aaj shaam mein aa jaaye gi ...tab taq intezaar ...perhna bhi to hai mujhay ..waisay meray papers 22nd ko khatam ho rahe hain ..phir story hi story ho gi ..aur haan mein ek aur Story likhnay wali hoon lekin exams k baad ..perhna zaroor sab log ...
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Iman

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Javeria

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Thanx for all ur Comments ...

Angad : acha ab ghar chalein ..??
Sujal : meine to nahin roka hua ...tum hi log nahin chal rahe ho ..
Kripa : bauhat bolnay lagay ho ...
Sujal : kya keroon aisay logon ki company mein jo rehta hoon
Kripa : yeh tanz mujh per tha ya ..Kashish per ..
Sujal : jo samajhlay ...
Kashish : acha chalein ..mama intezaar ker rahi hain
Kripa : haan haan chalo
Kher phir sab ghar pauhanch jaatay hain
Parvati : aray aaj tum sab ek saath kaisay gaye the ???
Kashish : mama hum to kisi ko dhoondnay gaye ..the ..lekin wahan gaye ..to dekha
k woh log apnay romance mein masroof the ...
Parvati : kis ki baat ker rahi ho tum
Kashish : mama mein...
Angad Kashish k moon per haanth rakhta hai
Angad : pata nahin aunty Kashish ko kya ho gaya hai behki behki baatein ker rahi hai aaj
..ap let jaayein mein isse doctor k pass le ker jaata hoon ..
Parvati : mujhay to kuch bhi samajh mein nahin aa raha tum log kya keh rahe ho
Angad : mama aap so jaayein ...baad mein batayein gay aap ko
Parvati : acha theek hai
Parvati apnay room mein chali jaati hai ..!!
Angad : Kashish tumhara to abhi bata ta hoon mein ...
Angad Kashish k peechay bhaagta hai ..Kashish Sujal k peechay chup jaati hai
Kashish : haan sach bolo ..to sab ko mirchi lagti hai
Doosri taraf Kripa muskura rahi hoti hai...
Phir sab apnay apnay room mein chalay jaatay hain
Aur Angad apnay ghar chala jaata hai
Kashish Kripa k room mein jaati hai
Kashish : may I come in
Kripa : aray Kashish ..!! aao na ander ..
Kashish : Kripa ..!! woh mein tumse kuch kehna chah rahi thi
Kripa : haan Kashish bolo..!!
Kashish : woh jo mein tumhein Angad k naam se cherti rehti hooon ..tumhein bura to nahin lagta
Kripa : kaisi baatein ker rahi ho ?
Kashish : matlab acha lagta hai ..
Kripa : haan ..nahin meine aisa to nahin kaha
Kashish : bas mujhay jo jaan na tha ..woh meine sun liya ab baaqi ka kaam Sujal keray ga
Kripa : kya matlab ?
Kashish : oh yeh meine kya bol diya ...
Kripa : saaf saaf batao baat kya hia ???
Kashish : asal mein woh..
k achanak Sujal aata hai
Sujal : Kashish tum idher ho...mein tumhein pooray ghar mein dhoond raha tha
Kashish : kyun??
Sujal : woh tumhein Charu bula rahi hai
Kashish : acha ....Kripa mein chalti hooon ...
Kripa : lekin Kashish
Kashish : baad mein baat kertay hain
Kashish jaa rahi hoti hai aur Sujal ko dekhti hai aur halkay se bolti hai
Kashish : Thanx tumne mujhay bacha liya ..warna aaj hum donon ka pole khul jaata
Sujal : is ka matlab ..tumne Kripa k saamnay bol diya k hum donon ki plaaning..
Kashish : bolnay wali thi ..k tum aa gaye ...
Sujal : chalo shukar kuch bataya nahin tumne ...warna meri shamad aati
Kashish : chalo mein tumhein bacha liya
Sujal : phaswanay wali bhi to tum hi thi ...
Kashish : lekin ab to bacha liya na
Sujal : ji nahin meine apnay aap ko khud bachaya ..!!
Kashish : acha ab mein chalti hoon ..warna Charu yahin aa jaaye gi
Kashish Charu k paas jaati hai
Charu : Di aap nay itnee der kyun lagadi aanay mein ?
Kashish : woh mein Sujal se baat ker rahi thi ...
Charu : chalein phir theek hai
Kashish : kyun..yeh kyun kaha tum ne ???
Charu : Sujal bhaiya se baat ker rahi thi ..to koi zaroori baat hi ker rahi hongi ..
Kashish : acha ..abhi batati hoon tera ..
Kashish Charu k peechay bhaagti hai ...
Charu : waisay ager Sujal aap ko mile na ..to usse bata diya ga..k kisi Diya ka phone aaya
tha us k liyeh
Kashish : Kis ka ???
Charu : pehli baari mein sunai nahin deta kya ??? Diya ka phone aaya tha ..
Kashish (jealous) : yeh Diya kaun hai ?
Charu(teasingly) : hogi koi Sujal ki friend ....Ya phir girlfriend ..waisay mujhay nahi pata aap
unhi se kyun nahin pooch leti ??
Kashish : mein kyun poochon..
Charu : theek hai mat poochiyeh ga ...lekin unhein bata diyeh ga ..k Diya ka phone tha
Kashish : haan haan bata doon gi ...
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Bas abhi itna hi likha hai aur jaldi mein Likha hai ....kal bas papers khatam ho rahe hain
phir bare parts likhoon gi ...okay ...waiting for ur comments ...
Luv
Iman

Edited by beauty_queen - 19 years ago

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 19 years ago

#66

wow Iman gr8 part yar 2 gud
👏
Per ye diya kon hai?

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group_1223

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Posted: 19 years ago

#67

nice part iman...gud job..can't wait 4 ur examz 2 finish....best of luck newayz

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#68

iman dear just zabardast , rocking ,mind blowing , mind blasting...teri story padke har baar mera dil khush ho jaatha hain.. ur writing is damn good... 👏
iman ab yeh diya kaun hain anyway woh joh bhi ho koi farq nahi padtha kyunke main jaanthi hoon ki tum sujal aur kashish ko kabhi judaa nahi karogi.... 😆 shayad jaise sujal kashish ne milkar angad kripa ko ek kiya ab yeh angad kripa aur charu ki khichidi hain sujal kashish ko milane ke liye.......kyun kya main sahi hoon ??? 😉
dear apni nayi story jaldi start karo & continue this story too...... 😃