Kuch to hua hai 4 A-K - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

120

Views

18.1k

Users

18

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

cute_angle92 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#31
I just read ur fan fic and it was great plz cont. as soon as possible
Cut Angle 😛
shahidlover24 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
#32
Hey....just caught up with ur fan fic!....ur doing an awesum job!...keep it up!
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#33
Part-13....Angad-kripa on a disco floor dancing 2
Bandh…{koi aap sa}.Simon cums there & sees it with
irritation & drinks liquor.Simon cries & hugs Angad.Kripa
was shocked.S:don't leave & go angad.
She hugs him tightly. A:simon..plz…
K becomes upset & runs away. A:kripa,listen 2 me.
K does'nt care & she goes.A becomes sad.Simon falls
unconscious on A' chest.A becomes irritated.
Kripa is at home with tears.she sends her x'mas uncle a
message:uncle,where r u?I need ur presense as a
comfort.I'm really depressed.the person whom I luved
most cheated on me.

Bajaj laughs:Parvati,all these days,u were trying 2 hide
from me no?I new that U'LL DO SO.i cud've caught u b4
itself so easily,when I dropped kripa 2 her house..in
the shopping complex tho u hid urself from me,I'd seen
u.but I waited 4 a situation where only u & me r
there.so that I can open my mind 2 u.
P:why r u after me Bajaj?why r u taking my peace?
B:not purposefully,but…my circumstances make me do that.

P:this is cruel.
B:how can it b cruel?bcoz 4 me what I'm doing is right.
P:u r purposefully becoming close 2 kripa 2 destroy my
peace.
B:u r right.i'm purposefully becoming close 2 kripa.its
my right.
K:I won't allow her 2 go 2 ur office anymore.thus that
relationship will end.
B:never,bcoz b4 kripa joined my offce itself,I was close
2 her.u'll no everything later.let the right time cum.u
can't run away from the truth parvati.
P:what do u want Mr Bajaj?
B:u no what I need?I want kripa.
K:what rubbish!that'll never happen.
B:why not?
P:bcoz I'm her mom.
B:don't 4get that Om is not kripa's dad.Kripa has
only 1 father & that me.None other than Rishab Bajaj.
insia12 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#34
WOW meanz kripa is Mr bajajz daughter cool!!cont soon!
muqualp thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
#35
gr8 part! cont soon! see i was right! bajaj is kripa's father!
shahidlover24 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
#36
awesum part!
awe...poor angad....kripa should've heard him out

is bajaj kripa's x-mas uncle 😕
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#37
Part-14....Parvati felt that she'll faint.B:I'll get kripa
back.
Bajaj goes.P gets depressed.K thinks:the truth I tried 2
4get is haunting me.oh god!

Bajaj goes home.Apo*na stands there with burning
eyes:Mr.bajaj,what r u upto?I'm talking about ur
relation with kripa.how cud u trap a girl who must b
seen as ur daughter?that girl is not bad.she is after u
4 money.
B gets angry & slaps her:stop talking nonsense again.
A:u beat me
B :I'll again slap u if u talk bad about my daughter.
A:u r daughter?
B :yes,u r doing a sin by gossiping about me & kripa
.bcoz she's my daughter,my own blood.
A was shocked:kripa is the daughter of the famous
business man Om sharma.
B :no,b4 the public Om is her father.but the truth is
that I'm her father.
B goes. A cries:parvati..so my real enemy is u?

A po*na meets Parvati at a place. A:Mr.Bajaj told that he's
kripa's real dad.i want 2 no whether he's lying 2 escpe
from the rumour of having affair with kripa.tell me
parvati,was he telling the truth that he is k's real
dad?
P weeps:yes,
A was shocked:enuff.so u both were lovers?then why
did'nt u both get married?u married Om with
Mr.Bajaj's baby?
P :u r misunderstanding us.
A :what misunderstanding?
P :plz listen 2 me.
A goes.P cries:whats happening 2 us?

A po*na arranged sum ppl 2 2 kill kripa:I don't want
kripa 2 b an obstacle 2 our family.so kill her.
Those guys go.Rishi hears it. R:mama,why did u tell them
2 kill kripa?was the rumour correct about kripa & papa
that they r in luv?
A :no,the truth is that kripa is Mr.Bajaj's & Parvati
's daughter.
R:what?then Mr.Om sharma?
A cries.R becomes angry with bajaj ,kripa,parvati.

Rishi goes 2 Om's office room. O:I did'nt recognise
u.
R:I'm Rishi.Rishab Bajaj's son.
Om was shocked.He thinks:oh god!bajaj's son..the
terrible thing I did'nt want 2 happen is going 2 take
place?
R:do u no my dad?
O was speechless. R:I'll tell u if u don't know.bcoz I
think u r innocent & u r getting cheated by ur wife.my
dad is ur wife's ex-bf.
O is shocked. R:I hope u'll digest another horrible
truth that kripa is not ur daughter,but my dad's
daughter.that's why my dad appointed kripa in his
office.
O is shocked.he thinks:kripa is working in bajaj's
office?oh!I did'nt no.if parvati nos that …how can she
tolerate it?
R:1 thing u make sure.kripa will b sent 2 another world
soon.
O was stunned.R goes.
Kripa's cell phone rings.K sees Angad's no & she
switched off the ph.A who was standing on the opposite
direction becomes sad.The ppl sent by Apo*na cums near
k& grabs her hand.K screams.A gets shocked.

Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
Supernatural_10 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
#38
its great I think Kripa will get saved by Angad 😊
shahidlover24 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
#39
awe......Angad's gonna become a hero 😳 😆

hehe....u forgot to change some of the names 😛...(kumud to kripa, kkusum to parvati) 😆

good job! 👍🏼
CrazyChatterbox thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 19 years ago
#40
yur fan-fic was gr8 as always..... please continue it soon.....

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".