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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Awesome update
I just loved it

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Y did he just leave her like that. Hope she does not take it in the wrong sense.

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sakshi

@tanvi04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

superb but i really hope ki maan ka is tarah ke behavoiur ko geet misunderstand na kare maan ko maaf karna itna aasaan to hai nahi par fir bhi i hope ki maan geet ka trust jaldi hi jeet le continue soon ut take good rest n then continue

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#344

Luved the part soo very much!hope to reda more development in their relationship in the next part!

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pritm

@pritm

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#345

nice update
aniverssary
so the starting of love and trust can be started on this ocasion
waiting for it
story is progressing in a positive way
maan is totally trying to comfort geet in every way
continue soon
don't delay update of this ff plz

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#346

wow sweet..awesome update Anu

so beautiful.. some sexy scenes to be added to please dear

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#347

awesome...beautifully described der thoughts, apprehensions...he wants to make her comfortable and she has decided to go vd her heart...they just need to talk...

feeling bad for both of dem

beautifully written