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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
It was an awesome update. Arnav is very naughty. I'm just loving this concept.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
hey nice SS yaar...
plz give importance to maaneet also na...am really missing geet sooo much n u too now a days stopped writing abt maaneet😒...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well this is truly Awesome dear
Love it a lot
And continue soonnn...
waiting to read the next part like always =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pls add me to your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3 temperature

Geet: Maan while fixing his tie

Maan: what?

Geet: can i have the cctv video of your office

Maan: why?

Geet: i want to know what happen yesterday in Khushi's office

Maan:no

Geet: please your so sweet i know you will not say no to me

Maan: kissed her "i am sweet i know that but i will not allow you to see that as they are not kids whom you do babysitting or keep your eyes on them"

Geet: DD dashdanv

Maan: it is bad manners he just picked his bag & walk out

Geet; i will find out , she called Khushi

Khushi was still in bed

Geet : hello

Khushi: hello with a sneeze

Geet: what happen to you?

Khushi: just flu

Geet:why?

Khushi: i don't know "how to tell you i was standing in middle of night out with him?" said to her self

Geet: i need your help for tonight

Khushi i am coming in hour

Geet: ok bring your clothes too

Khushi :ok she cut the call .


At 11

Khushi: reached Geet place

Geet: how are you?

Khushi : fit where to keep this?wave her clothes

Geet: guest room

Khushi: ok

Geet: was just looking at her face she was relax as before .she was carrying a smile on her face no sign of stress like yesterday.

Khushi: why you are looking at me like that?

Geet: nothing lets start work.

Khushi:sure . she just join the team and started guiding them .

Geet: just smiled and she called Arnav "kuch tou ha i will not sit like that "said to her self .

Geet"arnav where are you ?

Arnav:" i "in weak voice

Geet; what happen?

Arnav: my sugar level increased

Geet: you dont know you are diabetic you must have at e some thing sweet

Arnav: why you called ?stop shouting at me like DI

Geet: khushi is doing everything alone i thought you could help her,but now you dont worry we will manage it

Arnav: i am coming

Geet: kuch tou ha ...just cut the call.

Khushi: why you are smiling ?what you are up to?

Geet: kuch nahi can you take care of all this ?

Khushi: yes sure

Geet:actually i want to buy a gift for Maan and i am still confused

Khushi: you go and take your time .

Geet; thanks

Khushi: keep your thx to your self.

Geet; bye she just walk to her car

Khushi: just became busy with the decorate and the workers


after 30 mins

Arnav arrived "where is bhabi ?"he just suddenly said standing under the ladder.

Khushi: just lost balance she just try to maintain the balance but could not she just slip "arnav"

Arnav: just hold the ladder

Khushi: just quickly step down.

Arnav:sorry i thought you saw me , help her in getting down hold her hand

Khushi: you have temperature

Arnav: just leave her hand"no"

Khushi: you have placed her hand on his forehead ."you are burning"

Arnav: woh

Khushi: just look at him

Arnav: just blink his eyes as he was not able to see properly( i read all the symptoms of diabetes me totally gone case now days )

Khushi: kya kaam ha aap ko

Arnav: you are doing everything alone i came here to help you . he just said he lips were all dry as if he was thirsty

Khushi: just pull a chair "please you sit here"

Arnav: i am fine

Khushi: "you are not" she asked a servant to bring water

Arnav: just look at her as it was visible from her face she was worried ..she was on call

Khushi: "why you call Arnav ?"

Geet::what happen?

Khushi: he is not feeling well.

Geet: ask him to lay down in guest room i am coming

Khushi: ok she just cut the call."utha"

Arnav: i am fine

Khushi: you are not please dont argue with me just hold his hand ...and walked to the guest room

Arnav: trust me i am fine

Khushi: just look at him in anger."you lay down "

Arnav:just did as she said .

Khushi: have you taken any medicine

Arnav: yes

Khushi:" by the way you are really stubborn " pull blanket on him

Arnav: smiled


Geet enter "kya huwa ?"

Khushi:see he is having temperature.

Geet; sugar level control huai

Khushi: sugar she just look at him

Geet; yes his level increased that why he is having temperature . what you had ?

Khushi: just walk out in anger ..

Geet; iss ko kya huwa

Arnav: you ruin it ...

Geet; kya

Arnav: kuch nahi he just closed his eyes ...

Geet; yeh kya ..she walk out of the room look at khushi who was standing in the corner of the corridor"kya huwa"

Khushi: he is totally unbelievable.

Geet:yar you both are getting mysterious, he said i ruin everything and you are saying .

Khushi: what he is doing ?

Geet: pata nahi go and see . she just walk away..

Khushi: i will ask him why he took chocolate...she walk in the room he laying ."let me take you hospital"

Arnav: open his eyes " no need i will be fine"

Khushi: i am annoyed from you"

Arnav: "i know"

Khushi:could not you use your tongue ,wasie tou you use it a lot. ..shit ...she just shyly look at him

Arnav: smiled" i use at it right place "

Khushi: just blush ."you rest and dont move call me if you want anything"

Arnav: any thing

Khushi: "do you flirt with everyone like this ?"

Arnav: no you are an exceptional case ... he again blink his eyes ..and took a deep breath

Khushi: rest please.walkout of room as she couldn't see him like that.

Geet just look her coming out with long face "what happen?"she was coming with ice water and bandage

Khushi: he is not well at all .

Geet: he will be he is a fighter.let him sleep ,i have seen him in worst conditions.

Khushi: eyes became watery

Geet; why you are getting so upset ?

Khushi: i touch his forehead it is

Geet: take this , keep on his forehead he will be fine

Khushi: me

Geet; i cannot do yar i have to guide the cooks

Khushi: ok she just took ice water and bandage and walked back to room he was still awake

Arnav:kya huwa

Khushi: you are awake

Arnav: i think i should go home

Khushi: seated next to him on bed " i will keep this you will be fine " she just dip one in chilly water and squeeze it and placed it on his forehead

Arnav: look at her

Khushi: sleep

Arnav: just close his eyes ."thanks to the chocolate "

Khushi: if you will talk ,then i will go

Arnav: ok ok he just closed his eyes ..he was feeling weak and dizzy he slept .



after hour

Geet:Khushi

Khushi: shhh bohat mushkil se soai ha

Geet;look at her face she was looking at him while talking to her ."ok if you need any thing tell me"

Khushi: ok she just walk back again check his forehead

Geet: just look at her ,why she is so concern ? yesterday they met for the first time in life and today she cannot take her eyes off him, does not want to move away from his side ...she just walked out .


Precap

Khushi: Arnie will you stop looking at me like that or i go and get ready some where else?

Arnav: what you said ,he just sat on bed ?

Khushi: Arnie ... oops bit her lips


this story is basically about Arnav and Khushi , Geet and Maan are just cupid . please guys comment bit long as when i write a story other than track i want to know what are you guys liking and what you guys are not .



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Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update.loved it every bit..it was awsome..loved that caring,and concerned arhi.
it was really so sweet and cute and lovely too..loved how she took care of him with a right and how she was ordering him with full right.and precap seems good too.really good..Arnie..my fav name of him.i love Arnie
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Edited by sarach - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
loved it!!!!
it ws jst awesome!!!!
aftr a frustrating episode...this ws much needed!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well this is truly Awesome dear
Awww fantastic dear really like it
Love it a lot
And continue soonnn...
waiting to read the next part like always =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃⭐️i want a dance scene for arnav and khushi di ❤️
her caring for him so cute and loving...😉
geet nicely making them come closer and thank god maan did not show the cctv out of love for her👏
show arhi scenes where arnav cares for her😳 and want a dramatic confession for them👍🏼 and some fight plzzz that too childish⭐️ so that maaneet will be handling their fight and cant control them...plzzz di include all the beautiful moments of them ...👏 and wanna make hilarious scenes too😆
update soon di
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
nice update..i was laughing at arnav who s flirtin wid kushi instd of ths ill condition...nd wow kush s callin 'arnie'.want to read more.cont soon.

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