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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Amy!! What an update it was..!


I remember somewhere you said, you are not good at this..!
Are you improving or is this kind, you say you're not good..!! 😉

It was more like watching a song initially with Kushi doing all seduction with all graceful actions..! But the song was hot, I should say..!☺️

Nice hot ending dear!!

Thanks for the PM😊



Haha I'm actually not, I have to take a really long time before I write something like this. I'll read through a few other people's who have already written something along the same lines, and then come up with my own 😳 And plus it seems like I'm improving each time I'm writing 😆

HAHA Thank you hun!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
The last part was Hawt... 😳 but lovely. Loved the way Khusi took the charge...

Write more n thnx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
OMG! Freaking awesome update, sweetheart! Loved it sooo much! A hot one 😃 Can't wait for more ahaha xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
A seriously hot update Amy!!!
Very sensual and passionate hun, with the right dose of tease in it.
Beautifully written.
Thanks for the PM sugar.
⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Sensous update. Enjoyed reading it😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: blah_blah03



Haha I'm actually not, I have to take a really long time before I write something like this. I'll read through a few other people's who have already written something along the same lines, and then come up with my own 😳 And plus it seems like I'm improving each time I'm writing 😆

HAHA Thank you hun!


If u say u're improving! Then I should admit, U're very fast in learning to write!!
Ur improvement gave me a nice hot update!! Let it improve unconditionally😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
I need a cold shower
Khushi is very naughty...I did not expect that
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
too good..well written..👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
so hot..i drink i bottle water reading after this OS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
I loved it
Read all parts now :)
Amazing
Great job

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