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seshatree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

loved kurban hua...now waiting for the 'CLAIM'...

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

muskaan, I was so stunned, i couldnt even swallow. The tension in this part was so rife, the pull between them so strong, and that song ,so sensual,I have been feeling breathless with some tightness in my chest.

The whole setting.. with him feeling jealous, heartbroken, in pain, yet unable to let her go.. the haunting strains of the song hitting outside, in the garden area, and she too, helplessly drawn to him .. ❤️☢️

his words in the end , his simple words.. just .. huh.. cant describe.

I just lovedd this one. lovedd it to the core.

Dont know what more to say...

Please update soon muskan !

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Bracelet ke bare kya kahoo di maan ka wo ese kehna bilkul acha nahi laga waise maan ne kitni baar geet ko pakda hoga wo nahi deka kya
he angrily looked her wrist.. she was wearing the bracelet.. he snatched it away from her hand..
kaha tha na Daadi .. yeh har kisi ke haat main suit nahi karega
Daadi tried to tell him to stop.. but he was too violent & rough. He took it from her & went to his room.
Daadi tried to explain to Geet.. but she looked too lost in a different world.

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honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

omg lovely lovely...👏

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: Water.
Is Maan going to confess?

Or is the story going other way?

Maan is going to say he is happy for Geet n Dev

he will die before he says that

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

oh and totally bowled over by his 'na.. just had two'.☢️

completely FIDA.

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#367

part 107:puchki ho ya maan gussa ke alava aata kya hi

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puchki also gussa & u thought.. pucki won't

wo tho aur bhi haaq se gussa karga

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Congrats on new thread!!!

wow ...Kurban Hua ...can't waait for next part ...cont. soon

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#369

here i goes to part 108: geet jab use pata chala ki puchki hi to geet bina jijak chal padi Her heart just was beating only one thing.. her puchki.. was he really puchki. She fluttered her eyes standing at the frame of the door to his room
puchki ? She questioned walking into the his room.. every moment they spend together played back in her mind, with a difference it had a face now a face that ran butterflies down her stomach. He raised his hand.. facing his back to her.

her voice was filled with anxiety.. restlessness.. so much of passion.. breathlessness.. heart ache..

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#370

part 108: jab itna miss kia to gussa chodena tha na Oh god the word puchki.. how much he was longing to hear it all this days..months..year now. He would have repeated it a million times all these days but when she said it .. oh god..his heart just missed a beat..
she is his mistimia.. Geet is mistimia.. he closed is eyes painfully. He actually hurt his mistimia.. he clenched his hand that was already hurt.

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