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Posted: 13 years ago
Part-11

Vicky and neha are back home with Viha after an amazing dinner with their old friends...
but Rey and Kria are also back home and thinking about sharon...

At night

Rey : kria tumhe kya lagta he sharon ke saath kaun ho sakta he???
Kria : pata nahi rey par kaash sharon aur me fir se ache friends ban jaaye...
Rey: ya kaash aisa ho...
Kria : tumhe kaisa laga aaj shaam mere saath dance karke ?? universeji ko thank u bolna hi bhool gayi ek minute

Kria gets up and closes her eyes and wishes something

Meanwhile rey hugs her and pulls her down...

Kria: Rey mujhe apna wish toh complete karne do ... ye sab baad me kar lena...

Rey doesnt leave her tight hug and they cuddle and fall asleep...

Next morning at Swaron 's home

Sharon : Swayam jaldi utho please tumhe office bhi jaana he na

Swayam: ofooo sharon sone do

Sharon smiles and opens the curtain with full of sunlight...

Swayam gets up yawns and streches his arms...

Swayam: idhar aao sharon...

As sharon comes near him he holds her hand tightly and kisses her hand...

sharon feels shy and then swayam asks her: kya me tumse ek baat puch sakta hoon????
tum boora mat manana...

Sharon: nahi

Swayam: kal raat tum kaha chali gayi thi...

Sharon: how could u??? tum mujhe aise kaise questions kar sakte ho...

Swayam: ohh sharon i m sorry

Sharon gets and angry and is about to leave the room ...

Swayam holds her hand and hugs her...

Swayam: i am sorry dear...

sharon smiles and says ok... tumhe waqt aane par sab bata doongi... ok

Swayam gets ready with his sweet daughter tanya and drops her to school and is about leave and he meets rey...

Rey gets down of his car along with kriyansh...

Swayam: hello rey !!!!!!

Rey : hey swayam !!!!!!! mujhe tumse ek zaroori baat karni he

Swayam : toh kaho na???? aaj me bhi zara free hoon... if u wish we will go for drive

Rey : ummm... drive toh aaj nahi lekin chal coffee peete he???

Swayam: dude coffee ok...

Rey and swayam go to coffee shop...

Swayam : acha ab bata kya baat he

Rey : kal me , kria, vicky aur neha hum sab dinner gaye the

Swayam: acha toh mujhe nahi bulaya tune??

Rey: arrey woh sharon ki wajah se

Swayam: haan woh gussa he na

Rey : humne waha sharon ko dekha...

Swayam: What ????? ye tu kya keh raha he???

Rey : haan aur woh kisi ke saath baat kar rahi thi... i dont know par woh kaun tha...

Swayam: ok...

Rey: kaun ho sakta

Swayam: i think i must leave mujhe kuch kaam he

Rey: sun sharon se kuch mat kehna ok...

Swayam : nahi dude me chalta hoon

Swayam leaves... and kria calls rey

Kria: hello rey aap kaha ho...

Rey : me coffee shop me...

Kria: kyu aapko toh aaj kuch kaam tha na

Rey: haan woh swayam mila tha aur maine usse sab bata diya

Kria: rey ye aap ne thik nahi kiya ... sharon ke saath kaun tha ye sab batane ki kya zaroorat thi swayam ko

Rey : i know woh upset tha aur chala gaya...

Swayam returns back home...

Swayam knocks the door... sharon opens it with smile

Swayam sees her but doesnt smile...

Sharon: mujhe aapko kuch dikhana he chaliye room me kuch surprise he

Swayam: please sharon leave me alone for sometime...

sharon: kya hua swayam tum itne hyper kyu ho rahe kuch problem he???

Swayam: mere liye toh aaj ka din hi aisa he

Sharon: kya hua???

Swayam gets angry and says : sunana chahti ho????

Sharon : kaho bhi...

Swayam: mujhe rey mila tha aur hum coffee peene gaye the

Sharon: ye toh achi baat i hope kria bhi aayi hogi ...

Swayam: nahiii par usne mujhe bataya ki woh aur kria jab kal raat dinner ke liye gaye the vicky aur neha ke saath tab unhone tumhe kisike saath dekha...
😡

Sharon is shocked and in tears runs towards her room and then swayam realizes that he had made a big mistake and he follows her to the room...

Room is fully decorated with roses and flowers and candles... but sharon is standing near the window and crying...

Swayam: Sharon ye sab...

Sharon: haan ye sab aaj humari anniversary he aur kal me jise milne gayi thi woh yaha par aaj shaam ke liye party arrange karne aur decorations karne ke liye aane waala tha...

Swayam: what aane waala tha...

Sharon: haan aur maine uss party me sammy aur neelesh ko bhi bulaya tha aur ye ek surprise party thi isliye me tumhe bina bataye waha chali gayi...😭

Swayam: oh no i m sorry

Sharon is very furious : what do u think of yourself swayam shikhawat ????? 😡 pleaase ab ye party cancel...

Swayam: nahi i am sorry...

Sharon: me kuch nahi sunana chahti... and she leaves the room...

Swayam calls rey and rey gets to know everything... in order to apologize for creating misunderstanding between swaron rey tells swayam that he would attend the evening anniversary party along with kria...

Swayam gets tensed as sharon will be more furious to see kria and he keeps thinking...

in the evening Neelesh and sammy arrive ...

Sharon acts as if she is very happy and welcomes them...

but at the same time she sees rey and kria...


to be continued


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Posted: 13 years ago
hope u remember this ff which i had written on 14th january and now today is 2nd july i think 6 months gap 😔... i m really sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for continuing and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Himaniahir

Thanks for continuing and thanks for the pm

Coming to the update it was amazing😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey such i will read the entire ff and then comment once im done res

finally read it!! wow its amazing!! i didn't realize that this was ur ff i was wondering what had happened to it!

loved it and im glad ur continuing and thanks alot for the pm 😊
Edited by desigirlx5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

res

Such, plzz remind me if i forget to unres...

in a rush, will read n unres later😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally u updated...
I to thought u forgot about it...
Anyways...nice update...
Loved it...
Hope swayam sharon ko mana le n krisha become frnds again...
Waiting for next part...
Update soon...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for update after long tym... supeb update dear !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazinggg update,,,,,,,,,,,thnkx 4 continue n pm 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
mai to dhanya ho gyi ye update paakar par ye kya itne dino ke baad update aur usme bhi ladaayi aur fir cliffhanger ufff update soon this time waiting ps love this ff

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