FF on Years Later Kriyansh with Swaron entry

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Posted: 13 years ago
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(Kria and Rey fall in love and get married after facing all family problems now they are blessed with a boy who is 6 yrs old and they are living happily)
Kria sends her son to tuition on sunday and rey is at home as it is Sunday... Its morning 10 a.m
Kria in kitchen preparing some delicious recipe for her sweet hubby...
Rey enters the kitchen and without knowledge of kria hugs her ...
Kria: aap... yaha pls ...ab nahi
Rey: ssshhh...
Kria: Dekhiye abhi kriyansh tuition gaya he agar wapas aa gaya toh???
Rey: (slowly whispers in her ears) abhi koi nahi aayega...
Kria: arrey Kriyansh!!!!!!
Rey: (leaves kria's hug) arrey beta tum... kaha??? o hooo tumne mujhse jhut bola is ki saza toh tumhe milegi
Kria :(laughs and runs away in hall)
Rey also runs behind her in hall




Part-2


Kria runs and rey chases her... kria steps back and rey catches her.
Rey: Ab??
(he looks into her eyes )
Kria nods her head
Rey comes closer to her lips
kria shuts her eyes
Rey smiles at her
Rey: har din tum aur bhi khoobsurat lagti ho, tumhare hot
and rey touches her lips with fingers and kria breathes faster ...
Rey is about to kiss her
Kria: arrey nahi !!!!!!! sabzi jal rahi he and she runs to the kitchen
Rey sighs
Kria switches off the stove and feels sad
Rey: Kya hua???
Kria: ab kya kare... sab kuch bigad gaya...
Rey: bass itni si baat ab toh aur bhi acha hua
kria: KYA???
Rey takes his mobile and orders food from near by hotel
Kria: arrey iski kya zaroorat thi mein fir si khaana bana leti
Rey: Sunday ek din he jab me tumhare saath kuch pyare pal beeta sakta hoon
Kria: Rey aap mujhe itna pyaar karte he itne saal beet gaye
Rey closes her mouth with his palm
Rey: humara pyaar aur hum humesha saath saath...
Suddenly it starts raining with thunder lightning and kria hugs him
Rey: Kria daro mat jab me tumhare saath hoon
Kria : chaliye sab khidkiyaa band karte he warna paani andar aa jayege
Rey: thik he chalo

Part-3

Rey and kria go to close the room's windows and they come near their gallery. Their house is like a villa with garden full of flowers such as lily, carnation, jasmine, rose and gulmohar. Kria and rey both feel so happy to see the pleasant garden. They go outside in the drizzle . Kria wore pink gown and rey wore light pink full sleeve shirt and black jeans (since college they used to wear same colored clothes as a couple). Then the background music which only rey and kria could hear and dance in the rain.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'



Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'



Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara



Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera
Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua


Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila
Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'



Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara



Choolon Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho
Hum Hai Re Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum
Both get into a romantic world of their own. Rey comes near kria's lips and kisses her. Kria shuts her eyes for five minutes as its deep long kiss. And then they slowly hold each other and get inside.They sit on their sofa staring into each other's eyes and suddenly there is knock on the door. Rey sees the Hotel delivery boy with lunch packet. Rey pays him and closes the door. Meanwhile Kria changes her wet dress and both get ready for the lunch. Kriyansh Come home.

Kriyansh: maa me aa gaya !!!!


Kria: arrey beta chalo jaldi chalo khaana khana he

Rey: tum jaldi se fresh ho jao beta.

Kriyansh: maa papa mein aap dono ke liye ek surprise laaya hoon

Kria and Rey: kya???

Kriyansh: Dekho meri frnd aayi he !!! ye meri tuition me nayi frnd he

Little girl comes inside with fear of entering a strange house.

Kriyansh: Arrey Tanya , Andar aayo Daro mat

Kria: Kitni pyaari bachi he Aayo beta tum khaana khaaloThe girl (around 4 years old) nods her head And all of them start to have lunch

Rey: Beta tumhara naam kya he???

Small Girl: Mera naam he Tanya

Kria: Beta tum kaha rehti ho

Tanya: me Malad me rehti hoon. Mujhe lene mere papa aate hi honge unhe me bata ke aayi hoon

Kria: arrey waah ye toh bahut achi baat he!!!

Rey: Beta tumhara Poora naam kya he??

Tanya : Mera poora naam he Tanya Swayam Shekhawat.

Kria And rey are stunned..😲






Part-4


Kria: Kya???

Kria holds Rey's hand and takes him inside kitchen

Rey: Ab kya kare????

Kria: Universeji ye sab kaisa khel he??? Abhi Itne Saalo baad ab kya hoga???


Rey: Dont worry Kria

Kria: Jo hona he woh toh ab ho kar hi rahega

And then there is screetching sound of Car
Both Kria and rey run towards window to see


Posh Car door opens
Black Polished Shoes, And Nice Business suit
Wearing Black Shades
ANd its SWayam who walks towards door

Kria: arrey Sharon kaha he???

Swayam Rings the Door Bell

Tanya opens the door and hugs his Dad

Tanya: Dad aap aa gaye
Tanya who is Daddy's girl

Swayam: Acha toh ye tumhara friend he

Kriyansh: yes uncle hum tuition me bahut masti karte he

Swayam: Aur tumhare mummy pappa kaha he

Kriyansh runs inside home and holds their fingers

Kriyansh: Mummy pappa chalo

Both Kria and Rey come outside

SWayam Fully surprised 😲

Swayam: Tum?????

Swayam: Rey ,Kria

Rey: basss Ab aur nahi


Rey comes near Swayam and hugs him

Swayam Is fully in tears

Swayam: Yaar tum Kaise ho aur ye tumhare pyaara bacha wow bahut cute he

Meanwhile Sharon enters home

And She is shocked to see Swayam And Rey hugging


Sharon Claps her hand

Sharon: Wow Saalo puraani Dosti toh Yaad aa Gayi Lekin Bachpan ki Dosti toh bhool hi Gaye


Rey sees Sharon Wearing A sareee and he is Shocked 😲


Sharon: Ohhh Miss Kripa Behanji ke Saath Shaadi toh Karli Lekin Mein Iss baat ko Kabhi nahi Bhool Sakti Ki woh meri Dushman he 😡

Kria: Oh Acha!!! Bhool Nahi Sakti !!! Kaise Bhool paaogi mujhe Sharon Rai Prakash!!!! Aur tumne Kya kiya tumne bhi toh Swayam ke saath hi Shaadi Ki Tab tumhe kya problem he Mere aur Rey se

Sharon: I cant stand it anymore Tanya!!!!!! Lets Go home !!!!!!

Part -5

Tanya: par mom he is my frnd

Sharon: Beta frndship kiske saath karni he kiske saath nahi karni he ye tumhe abhi seekhna he

Swayam: Sharon !!! please stop it

Sharon: (in tears) me jaa rahi hoon

Sharon goes out and sits in Car

Swayam and Tanya follow her and get inside car

Swayam: ab kitne saal ho gaye sab bhool bhi jaao

Sharon: bhool jau ?? aur tum kya apna waada bhool gaye

Sharon and Swayam go in flash back

Sharon: Mujhe abhi bhi yaad he who din jab maine tumse humare pyaar ki baat ki thi

Meanwhile Tanya runs back to see kriyansh

Swayam looks at Sharon and smiles

Swayam: wo pal kaise bhool sakta hoon main

Sharon: BAhut sataya tha maine tumhe par tumhara pyaar samajh paayi toh college khatam hone ke baad hi

Swayam: woh toh bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukr he ki tum mujhe phir se mili pappake business party me

Sharon: Haan tab tum mera chehra dekhna bhi pasand nahi kar rahe the

Swayam: Maine socha tumhe abhi bhi yahi lagta tha ki mein tumhare liye acha nahi hoon

Sharon: College khatam hone ke baad bahut upset jo rahi me phir jab tum mile mujhe kareeb 6 mahine baad

Swayam: haan tumhara toh har andaaz hi badal gaya

Sharon punches him and smiles

Swayam: ouch

Sharon: tum jab washroom gaye party me tab me tumhare piche aayi

Swayam: tum humesha se aise hi ho Men's washroom me aa gayi

Sharon: karti bhi kya door lock bhi kar diya

Swayam: me bahut confused tha

Sharon: Confused toh me bhi thi lekin '

Sharon: arrey hum ye sab baad me baat karte he par me Rey ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti ki usne Kria se pyaar kiya aur wo baat mujhse apni best frnd se chupaya and I cant tolerate kria. Aur tumhe apna waada yaad he na tum kabhi peeche mud kar Kria se dosti nahi karoge isliye ab chalo please

Swayam: arrey Tanya kaha he???

Sharon: O M G abhi ke abhi use yaha lekar aao

Part-6

Swayam goes back to Kiryansh's home and sees Tanya and Kriayansh playing

Swayam: Tanya chalo !!!

Rey: Dost kabhi aate rehna

Swayam smiles and calls Tanya

Kria: Swayam!!!

Swayam: Rey Mujhe maaf kardo aur kria se kehna ki me aise mod par khada tha jaha mujhe pyaar aur dosti me ek raah chunana tha aur maine pyaar ka raah chun liya ab me Sharon se promise kar chuka hoon ki kabhi tumse nahi miloonga aur kria ke saath baat bhi nahi kar sakunga

Rey: me Samajh sakta hoon

Kria in tears

Tanya: bye kriyansh kal fir milenge

KRiyansh: bye bye Tanya bye bye uncle

Swayam smiles at kriyansh and leaves home

Swayam starts driving

Sharon: toh hum kaha the

Swayam: tum washroom me thi

Sharon : yes aur phir kab maine tumhara haath thaama tab tumne mera saath nibhaya

Swayam: yaad he uss din bahut royi thi crying baby

Sharon: tumhe toh me

And Sharon hugs him

Swayam: arrey me gaadi chala raha hoon

Tanya: mamma aap dono mujhe kab hug karoge

Sharon smiles and feels shy and leaves swayam

Swayam looks at her and smiles

At kriyansh home

Kria(in tears) and rey trying to console her

Rey: Kria pls mat roya karo mujhe acha nahi lagta

Kria: Pata nahi Sharon ko abhi bhi mujhse kya problem

Rey: Me Sharon se baat karoonga kal ok ab chup ho jao

Kria: Wo nahi manegi

Rey: Manegi wo meri baat just wait and watch kal tutition me jakar me Tanya ke saath baate karunga aur phir me Sharon ke liye wait karoonga

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Posted: 13 years ago
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he thats superb
please continue
and one request please baby ka naam change kar do i mean chottu does not go with rey and kriyas personality
what about KRIYANSH it wwill be lovely name for the baby

only if you like. its a suggestion otherwise you write very well
i love your poems
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Originally posted by: luv_arsha

he thats superb

please continue
and one request please baby ka naam change kar do i mean chottu does not go with rey and kriyas personality
what about KRIYANSH it wwill be lovely name for the baby

only if you like. its a suggestion otherwise you write very well
i love your poems


thanks for suggestion i will change the name
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWWW this is so cute !! plz continue !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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god they r so fast they got 6 yr old kid also🤣
loved it plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yup n i really liked baby boys name "kriyansh" lol n one more thing wat i felt rey kriya ko 'aap' ni 'tum' kehta h n plz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nyc 1 n kriyansh is a lvly name as deir child
do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please pm me when you will update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice cant wait foe moer and thanks for the pm
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thanks
really nice ff
plz continue 👍🏼

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