Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 - Page 14

it was a great part! continue soon

hey guys!! i came back frm arizona yday! it was amazing!! esp. the grand canyon! wow! well here's the nxt part. i rilly hope u like it!
Part 15:
so it was after college and angad was in his room practicing his guitar and then aaliya came in
Aa: hey bhai
A: get out
Aa: calm down, im not here to hang out with u or annoy u
A: thank God
Aa: shut up! mom wants u to get ready we have to go 2 the airport and pick up daddy
A: why do we hav to pick him up? cant he jus come home hinself?
Aa: yea...but we wanna go greet him at the airport...dont you?
A: sure
Aa: why dun u like dad?
A: its no like i dun like him...i just dont love him like crazy he's not around tht much 2 get attached to him
Aa: yea tht is true. he's always on some business trip. i dont understand why mom agreed to marry him. who wud want a husband thts not even there
A: exactly
N: well if i didn t marry yur dad u wudnt be here
N was listening to their convo outside the room and then she came in
A&Aa: Mom?!?
A: mom we're really -
N: ok whatever...are u 2 reaady...we have to leave
they got ready and they sat in the car
Angad saw N's upset face
A: mom we're rilly sorry
Aa: yea we are plz dun be sad
N: aww u 2...i love you so much....its ok...sumtime i think the same also. thts wht makes me upset. but at the end of the day im very happy cuz i have my 2 beautiful children always by my side.
Aa: awww...mama i love you 2!
A: uhh...yeaa...i love u 3
N: (laughs) oh angad
A: wht?
Angads cell rang
A: hey josh!
Aa: omg! josh! tell him i said hi!!
N: huh...wht?
Aa: oh sry...um..i dunno wht im saying
N: aaliyah!!
A: um..josh..i think i hav to go now...mother-daughter drama..this looks like sumthing i wana watch..bye (hangs up)
N: aaliyah?? are u crushing on josh!!
Aa: no
N: o plz...i wasnt born yesterday!
Aa: then why did u ask if u knew?
N: ok..im not gona be tht strict on u...but plz dun crush on a guy like josh...tht flirt playboy jerk...crush on a guy like prithvi!!
A&Aa: Ewwwww!!!!!
N: relax...i said a guy like him...id nvr accept the actual pritvhi going out with my daughter
A: and id nvr accept tht guy going out with my sister
Aa: and id nvr accept tht guy as my bf!! eww!....but mom...whts wrong with josh?
N: eww..everytime i see tht guy he's always romancing with a different girl
A: its not his fault..all the girls are after him
N: so? all the girl are after u...but are u always with one girl after another?
Aa: well thts cuz he's busy with kripa!!
A: aaliyah!!
N: kripa? avi's niece?
A: yea...
N: u like her?
A: mom
N: does she like u back?
Aa: yep! theyve bin on 2 dates together!!
N: wht??? wow!!! angad...why didnt u tell me this b4??
A: mom...stop...a guy nvr tells his mom abt this stuf
N: awww...angad dont be shy sweeti....u can always talk to me
A: umm...ok mom...
N: so do u rilly love her?
A: mom!!...i dunno...im not like totally in love love with her. its just tht there's sumthing abt her...i dunno wht...but there is...
N: oh...angad...no wonder yu've bin so happy l8ly....im so happy for u!!
A: but mom...plz dun tell avi aunty abt this
N: o yea..i understand...dun worry
A: thanks mom...thank u so much
the 3 reached the airport and went to tht waiting area place
Aa: look its dad!
Dilip: hi aaliya! (hug) hows my lil angel doing?
Aa: im good
D: angad my son (hug)
A: hey dad...
D: hi naina darling how r u (hug)
N: im good thanks...how was yur trip?
D: it was ok...u now the regular business stuff and all...and i got u all some gifts
Aa: ohh! wht did u get me??
D: lets go home and well see
the 4 all went home...

College:
K: omg. mishti. angad nvr asked me out date after tht whole issue thingy
M: aww..dun wry he will...he's prolly jus busy this weekend or sumthing
Angad came up behind kripa
A: hey ..whts going on
M: kripa is sad cuz u didnt plan a date this wknd
A: wht?
K: mishti!!
A: ok then- lets plan now...wht do u wana do
K:um..i dunn...wht do u wana do
A: whtever u wana do
K: (giggles) i wana do whtever u wana do
M: (getting sick of all this) o god...im going
A: good...its not like we wanted u here
M: uh...how mean (goes away)
K: (laughs) angad! so wht do u wana do...see another movie?
A: sure...u can decide the movie and look up the timings and then tell me
K: huh
A: well u no im not up to date with all the desi movies
K: u wana see a hindi movie? we can see a english movie is u want
A: no its ok
K: ok fine then
A: wait...cna we see a english movie?
K: (laughs) yeah
A: sure?
K: yes angad! i decided last time you decide this time
A: ok
one of angad's friends called him over
A: hey i gtg cya
they both hugged and angad went
k sighed and just stared at him
M came
M: soooo...
K: mishti??! you heard everything?
M: yea...so wht nothing extremlety romantic happend
K: yea...unfortunatly
M: dun worry it will happen...somtime...soon
K: hopefully
M: i jus have one question
K: yea
M: wht abt yuur aunt?
K: ill lie to her...ill jus make up some excuse..
M: yea but remember wht happend last time..and arnt u sorta grounded...u think she'll let u go out anywhere?
K: shoot...yur rite....i totally forgot...now wht?
M: i dunno...lemme think
the bell rang
Kand M went to the first class
T: so i graded the tests...most of the scores were pretty good...and the rest were just...u no..
T started passing the tests out she came to kripa
T: kripa..i was rilly dissapointed
she gave the test to kripa...she basically failed...lol
T: kripa...this isnt you...i really didnt expect this frm you
K: ok...sry..ill do better nxt time
T walked away
M: u ok?
K: yeah...whtever..its just a dumb grade...

to be cont..
will kripa be able to lie to avi again and go out with angad with out being caught???
plz comment soon!!!!!
~*Pari*~

great part....loved it....i dont think kripa will lie this time.....continue soon

hey this is cool............plz continue soon
i'll be waiting!!!!!!!

i love it!! finally got to catch up!!

Part 16:
K's house
M came home with K
Av: hi kripa...hey mishti..how r u?
M: im good aunty...how abt u?
Av: im doing fine...thank you..do u guys want somthing to eat?
M: no thanks..im ok
K: yea same
Av: ok... hey kripa...um..here u can yur fone back
K: wht? omg! thanks! thank u so much!! im really sru abt the whole going out and lieing thing...i promise i wont do tht again
M: (rolls eyes...yeah rite!)
Av: (smiles) thanks
K: umm..i was wondering tomorrow my friends r going out for a movie...i was wondering..
Av: if u cud go with them?
K: yea..
Av:....
K: mishti will be there
M: yea aunty..its jus me and a few other girls
Av: ok...
K: can i plz go tho plz plz plz!!
Av: .....
K: plz!!!
Av: ok
K: plz plz plz
Av: i said ok..
K: o..omg!!thank u so muhc!!
K was jumping and huggged avi
K: i love you!!
Av: i love u 2 kripa

Nxt day...well evening:
AKJMP all met at the movie theater at 6.45 then kripa and angad went to see the omen and josh mishti and pritvi went to see..um..click..
K: angad is this rilly scary?
A: duh its a horror movie
K: angad..horror movies scare me!
A: well thts wht there supposed to do!
K: angad!
A: i asked u if u wanted to see this movie and u said yes
K: ugh
A: well we can always go see anoter dumb hindi movie
K: hey! when i asked u if u were cool with seeing a hindi movie u said yes. and i-
A: hey kripa..im joking jus chill!
the movie started and kripa was screaming the whole time and hiding here face in angad's arm...anngad was enjoying both kripa and the movie...lol
the movie was then over...they both were leaving the theater
K: wht? wht kinda ending was tht? the boy didnt die!
A: yea...i guess there making a sequel..tht wht happend with the old version
K: oic..but tht was so scary. im gonna get nightmares for the rest of my life
A: (laughs)
AK were waitng for JMP
K: where are they?
A: well theyre movie did start half an hr after ours
K: yea..omg i still cant get tht movie outta my head...it was so extremly scary..uh
A: yea tht was one mad movie
K: u liked it?
A: it was ok
K: i hated it!
A: (laughs)
K: tht lil boy was so beautiful and the he turned out to be a devil!!
A: (laughs) hey you know when i was a lil kid all the aunties used to say i was so beautiful and i thought tht was rilly wierd of them
K: (scared) angad..dont mind me asking...but...are u adopted?
A: i dunno...my parents nvr said nething..but u nvr no they mite be keeping it a secret..
K: rite..
A: omg!
K: wht???!!
A: look...there's 666 on my arm!!
K: AHHH!! stay away frm me!! go away!! dun kill me plz!!
A: (bursts out laughing) im jus joking around...u shud have seen u scream!! it was so funny
K: huh? angad!! (crying) you scared me so much!! omg!! tht is so not funny!! i hate u i hate u i hate u!!
A: (laughing) ok ok ok im sry...im rilly sry
K: no yur not - yur laughing
A: (still laughing) no im not
K: shut up! i h8 u! (mad)
A: (serious) hey listen im rilly rilly sry (looks into K's eyes)
They were all quiet and leaned closer to eachother
J: Angad!!
JMP came out of the theater
J: tht was sucha funy movie!!
how was yur movie?
A: great
M: (to kripa) how was it?
K: it was ok...rilly scary tho...i was screaming like crazy!
A: yea..it was funny tho!
K: shut up!
P: hey guys lets go for icecream..
They all started walking to the icecream shop tht was nearby
K: hey mishti...omg...it was so awesome...i was always clutching on to him...sumtimes i did on purpose
M: omg...u crazy girl!
K: (laughs) so how was yur movie?
M: it was pretty funny
K: no i meant like u and josh
M: kripa!
K: wht? just minus prithvi and everything wud be perfect!
M: correction..jus minus prithvi and add likeness for me frm josh then everything wud be perfect
K: o come on...u no maube after college josh will change.. like his flirting habits and all..then u 2 can get married, have cute kids, and live happily ever after!
M: kripa stop it!
K: wht? u no u love him
M: i know..but he doesnt love me
P: hey wht are u to whispering abt??
K: oh nothing
K went up to A and started walking beside him...
A: so u ok...are u still scared?
K: angad!
A: wht? im serious...u'll be ok rite?
K: (smiles) yes..i will..thanks.. (thinking to herself: he is so sweet!)
angad held kripa's hand...and k jus smiled again
the 5 all got icecream and they sat outside eating it and were jus goofing around...being there regular selves
then after a while they walked back to theater parking lot to get their cars and go home
A: here ill walk u to mishti's car
K: ohh..thanks angad
they both turned around and saw tht josh,mishti and pritvi were talking with eachother way behind
A: so..
K: so...
A:..
K: umm...i had a nice time tonite..
A: same here...well i always have a nice time when im with u
K: (blushing) really?
A: really
K: o wow...thts so sweet..umm..so i guess i will see you soon..
A: yea..ok see ya
they both looked eachtother in eye..they slowly came closer and closer...and then they kissed for a few seconds
K: angad...(blushing)...uuhhh...Mishti! come on i have to go home...
M: coming!!
K: sry i have to go..my aunt is prolly waiting for me..i promised her i wudnt stay out too late
A: o yea rite...dont want her to get mad...so um ill ttyl
K: yea yea...bye...umm...love u
A: luv u 2
M came
M: u ready kripa
K: yea..
K and M sat in the car and angad went to his

In the car:
K: (thinking) omg..tht was so amazing! omg! i cant believe it! omg
M: hey kripa u ok??
K: huh?? yea..
M: ok
K: mishti..angad and i...we..we kissed
M: wht?! omg! when??!
K: jus rite before we left...it was so great
M: aww..kripa! u 2 are so cute!
K: thanks!
tht nite angad and kripa went to bed thinking abt eachother
A: (thinking) there's rilly sumthing abt her..she's always on my mind....

to be cont..
i hope u guys liked it!!!
i tried to make it cute/romantic...sry if i didnt to good...cuz i dunno how to rite romantic stuff!! lol
well i hope u like it newayz!!
omg i was taking to my aunt in india today!!! she said tht she was at this cafe in bandra the other day and she saw iqbal khan and sneha there!!! omg!! i wish i was there!!!!!
newayz...plz comment!!!
~*Pari*~

ok guys...kripa's older girl cuzin is gonna be coming in the story....
who do u want the older cuzin to be played by?? plz post yur suggestions!!! and the older cuzin is a married girl...so she cant be so extremly young. lol. plz post yur suggestions!! thanks!!!
~*Pari*~

omg ur aunt is so lucky haha...n brilliant part it was soo cute..cont soon pari

Originally posted by: Pooja922

omg ur aunt is so lucky haha...n brilliant part it was soo cute..cont soon pari

lol...thanks!!! do u have any suggestion abt who shud play kripa's cuz??

Originally posted by: pari786

lol...thanks!!! do u have any suggestion abt who shud play kripa's cuz??

ummm you can have shama sikhander play...lol