Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 - Page 13

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: angadlover<3

heyyy!!....i read ur part where u went to hersey's park!!...tht was funni!!..and ur part was funni too!!....fantastic job!!..continue soon!!!



hey!! thank you soo much!! lol, yea hershey park was very funny too
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guys!! here's part 13!!! hope u like it!!
Part 13:
College:
K: hey simran
S: hey kripa
K: have u seen angad?
S raised her eyebrow at kripa
K: ...or mishti?
S no i didnt see mishti here yet.
K: o ok..
S: so did u get yur cell back?
K: no..if i did id be with angad rite now
S: kripa!
K: wht?
S: seriously dont get too involved with angad..
K: why not...he's so cute!!
S: yea yea i know he is..every single girl here wants to be his gf!but jus cuz he comes frm a rich, famous,beautiful family...doesnt mean he's everything...
K: wht do u mean? he comes frm a very nice family...and he's rilly nice too
S: kripa..i dunno...jus dont plz..do u even no abt his past?
K: past? wht do u mean by tht?
S: i dunno...but u jus have to know him very well b4 u say...u love him
K: whtever
S: o - here comes mishti
K: ok...im going...
S: wht? where?'
K: hello, me and mishti are in a fite remember?
S: umm...hello, you and mishti wanna get this fite over with remember?
K: hey!
S: come on
K: wht...i jus think mishti shud talk first
S: omg...and she thinks u shud talk first...jus come on..
S pulled K and walked towards mishti
S: hey mishti!
M: hey simran! ..hey...kripa...
K: hi
.....
S: o come on u 2...jus say sorry and hug already!
K: mmmmm....
M: ok...kripa...listen im rily rilly sry abt wht i said...i guess i jus got a lil carried away...i didnt mean wht i said...im rily sry
K: o...well im sry too...if i ever did anything to hurt yur feelings....friends again?
M: definitly
K and M both hugged
K: and i promise tht ill always be there for you...yur one of my very best friends and one of the most important ppl in my life! nvr think tht im not there...cuz u can always talk 2 me
M: (smiles) thanks...yur also very important to me...and im gonna support everything u do...everything..
K: (smiled) thanks mishti
S: yay now we're all friends again!
K: (laughs) ok..now lets go to class...
M: o wait..i have to go to the library...my assignment is on the comp and i need to print it out...u 2 go ahead.
S: ok
M went to the library...S and K were heading to their class
S: so...u happy?
K: yea..im glad it was jus sumthing little...hav u seen angad?
S: o god
K: wht...i didnt see him at all today...and i need to tell him abt wht happend sat nite.
S: u are so crazy!
K: i no crazy abt him!
S: why are u paying so much attention to him?
K: whts rong? y is everyone saying tht he's not good? like mishti, at first she was so excited abt me and him..and now she thinks i shud back off...and u think so too!!! theres sumthing abt angad tht i dont know...and i need to know.
S: well i dunno angad tht well...so yea....but u know yur aunt is telling u for yur own good....but if u rilly rilly like angad then i guess u cud still go out with him...but jus dont get all obsessed with him...u no wht i mean
K: yea...i guess..
S and K entered class and they saw prithvi
K: omg its pritvhi!
S: (whispers) omg its prithvi!
K: uh..i no thts wht i jus said...
K was walking towards prithvi
K: hey prithvi
P: hey kripa
K: can me and simran sit next to you?
P: sure why not
S: (whispers) kripa..can we sit sumwhere else...plz
K: why?
S: cuz
K: its ok...dun wry...prithvi doesnt have cooties r nething
S: shut up!
K: well im sitting here
K sat down
S: uh...fine
S sat down 2
P: hey simran
S: (nervous) uhhh..hey...prithvi
K: omg
P&S: wht?
K: nothing
P: ok....so how was yur weekend simran?
S: it was good..i was jus at home studying for my exam thts cuming up wednesday
P: yea..same here...the exam is gona be rilly rily hard
K: ok can we talk abt sumthing tht i can talk abt too
P: well u jus wanna talk abt boys and shopping
K: o shut up...omg..did u see angad
P: see yur talking abt angad a boy
K: then wht to talk abt? girls? idiot! did u see angad?
P: well i heard wht happend saturday nite..when yur aunt found out...how did it go
K: she doesnt want me to go out with him...but whtever i am!
P: ok then
K: yea...but i didnt get to talk to him at all after sat nite...o i hope he's not mad at me!!
P: dun wry...why wud he be mad at u..everything will be ok...rite, simran?
S: huh..yea..every..thing..will be..fine, kripa
P: (whispers to kripa) why does she stammer alot
K: well she only does it when yur around...so now u no why
P: no....i dont
K: o prithvi..jus-
M came in the room and sat infront of PKS
M: hey i saw angad and josh in the library
K: o did he say nething?
M: angad was asking me abt u...he told u to meet him after 1st period class at his locker
K: ok
the late bell rang and then the whole class stared.

to be cont...
angad will be in the nxt part!!!
comment plz!!!
~*Pari*~
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey continue soon that was a great part....gosh kripa is so obssessed lol....hey why is everyone staring in the preview?
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja922

hey continue soon that was a great part....gosh kripa is so obssessed lol....hey why is everyone staring in the preview?



hey thank you so much!! lol yea kripa is obsessed...um i dun get yur question....
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Posted: 19 years ago
it's nice i like it
mansi sharma....,ca,usa
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Posted: 19 years ago
i just read ur whole ff anf it was g8 i loved it continue soon and kkep up te god work 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guys thanks for yur comments...im going to go to Arizona today!!! we have to leave for the airport at abt 5.00 and rite now its 12..so yea!! im rilly excited!! we're gonna be there for a week...so i wont be able to update!! sorry!!! and im also gona miss KYPH!! but i can always come back to the forum and look at the updates!!!!! i hope angad and kripa meet soon!! i cant wait till angad finds out prateek is his son!! its gonna be sooo cute!! angad is so sweet..even tho he flirts with every girl he meets...he still cares for sur and is a good daddy!! lol..here's part 14

Part 14:
class was over and kripa went to angad's locker and waited for him
K: angad!
A: hey!
the both hugged
A: i tried calling u like a million times
K: yea....i got my phone taken away
A: o..im rily sry...
K: no no no dont be...its not yur fault...im gonna get it back soon anywayz
A: ok..so how did it go...wht did u tell yur aunt and all
K: well i rilly didnnt have any other option but to tell her the truth...i told her abt u and me
A: and she was cool with it?
K: umm...not rilly...she doesnt rilly want me going out with any guy..u know..
A: ohhh..soo...
K: but i still wanna be with u..like where still together and stuff...rite?
A: yea yea...if u want 2
K: yea i want 2
A: me 2
K: (giggles) angad..yur so sweet
J: ok guys remember yur in public
K: huh....o..hey josh...
J: hey kripa...whts up?
K: not much....how abt u
J: just the usual
A: um..josh..
J: wht?
A: can u -
P then came
P: hey guys...whts up?
the bell rang for the nxt class
K: o shoot...i gtg guys...bye cya...bye angad!
K went to her class
AJ had freetime/break time
A- yo wht the hell is yur problem...im trying to talk to kripa alone..and then all u guys always but in
J- well sry man....i was jus saying hi
P: yea
A: ok whatever
J: so is kripa's aunt ok w/ u and her going out
A: uuuhhh...not rilly
J: but-
P: kripa is going bad...she's gonna disobey her aunt's words and still go out w/ angad
A: hey! she's not bad....and how do u no wht she's doing?
P: she told me
A: oh...so hows yur love life goin, pritvi?
J: (laughs) who wants to love him
P: hey shut up....well do u no this girl simran
A: sim who?
P: simran..simran...i dont no her last name -she's one of mishti and kripa's friends
J: well wht abt her
P: well i think she's kinda cute....but i think she's scared of me
J: well who wudn't...have u even looked in the mirror?
P: josh stop it!!! angad tell him!
A: wht?
P: god u 2!!!
meanwhile kripa is in class
teacher = T
T: ok everyone...hope u had a good weekend and i hope u all studyed for yur test
M: (whispers to K) how can she expect us to hav a good weekend when we had to study for her crap test?
K: haha...but wht test is she talking abt???
M: on thursday she said we're having test today...dont u remember?
K: oh yea...oh no i forgot to study all weekend
M: well it shudnt be tht bad...i mean u pay attention in class
K: uhhhh...no i dont
M: ohhh....well dont worry....its jus one test it wont tht bad...
K: yea..hopefully...(nervous)
the teacher handed out the tests
K: (whispers) mishti...i dunno any of these
M: just try yur best
K: (whines) o someday help me
T: um...do we have a problem?
K: umm...no...
T: ok then...now be quiet
K: ok sorry
kripa knew just a few answers...most of them she jus guessed or left incomplete
after some time, the bell rang
T: ok...hand in yur tests to me as u leave
all the students did so, even kripa and then left class
M: so how did it go 4 u?
K: bad! very very bad! i only knew the answers to like 5 questions! thts it!
M: oohhh...well im sure you'll do better nxt time
K: yea...but this is prolly gonna bring my average way down
M: so then study rilly hard for the other tests to come, youll get a very good grade, and then yur average will go way up
K: yea...i hope so...
M: o jus cheer up...im sure everything will work out for you..yur a rilly smart girl...u wont have tht much trouble
K: i hope not
K and M got ready for their nxt class...

to be cont..
hope you liked it!!
plz comment!!

~*Pari*~
Edited by pari786 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg!! no more comments again???????!!!! this is rilly sad!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
THAT WAS REALLY REALISTIC!!!! I hope Kripa pays more attention in class instead of with Angad!! Jus kiddin!! Loved the Part!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey!!..tht was a really nice part!!..and i hope u enjoy ur trip to arizona!!!..cont soon!!

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