Avita SS-'Dil Ibaadat' Updtd Part 2 on pg 8

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: chista
Good concept prashu
Avdesh with smoke & drink... must be interesting as di said we saw him drunk before but seriously he was the hottest drunk that i have ever seen 😳 na?
Continue dear & i m sure you will be a successful writer 👍🏼
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rightly said, that particular scene was so well executed...I have never seen such expression, at one hand he was hurt and angry and at the same time cannot see Arpita going through pain, indeed that serial was the best

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

@ Prashu...pls continue with the story, am eagerly waiting

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joliefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Oye Mrs.Thakur you find Name for it hun
Nice haan "Dil Ibadat"
good now it will be more interesting to read

Update soon Ok

luv yaa🤗

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joliefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jes_jade
Prashu !!🤗🤗🤗

Lovely Intro Sis !!!!!👏👏

OMG !! Why did u have to post such a hawt pic of Ashish !! 😍😍

U r causing me to do bewafai to my Syao-kun !!😆😆 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Priyaaa Dai tu to gaiii hehehe🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Cont soon..I am waiting for it !!!😃😃

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Yoga priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I dnt care whom my saku-chan is drooling b'coz at the end Saku-Chan is Mine 😛 😉

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PrashT

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Amit_Mehra
nice one di..continue soon.

Sure Amitwa...😳

Ill continue sooon

Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago

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cscs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

its nice n different😊..

pls do continue..

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sharan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

hey c2
my prashu dear
story seems interesting...and i m sure
actually damn sure that this one is mindblasting as previous one
continue
keep it up
just love all the characters

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PrashT

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: chatterbox
interesting concept.. avdesh smokes and drinks

haa my mind went to gkd story only but we saw him drinking twice or thrice

u can continue but dear not sure if i would be able to read all the story

u know me na i cant make head or tail out of ffs

but u continue i wud pop in now and then

Hiiee Di😳😳😳

Yep he smokes and drinks too... he is not exactly same like avdhesh of gkd.. bt he does has a soft side...

Di... dont worry this is an SS .. it wont b long😉

thnk u fr ur support di...😳

Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago