Avita SS-'Dil Ibaadat' Updtd Part 2 on pg 8

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Hellooo Everyone🤗



Im starting with a Short Story here😉😉😉

Im completely a non-writer🤢 Bt still wanted to write a story on one of my favorite couple on television. I hope you would like the story😳

There could be many bloopers😆😆😆 I would try to stand on your expectations.😊😊


So here goes my story...



Summary

Avdhesh is a strong-minded yet he has negativity in him. He falls in love with Arpita. But life gives a big blow to him. Will he be able to recover from it? Can Arpita's love change him?


Introduction to Characters

Avdhesh Singh Thakur - He belongs to a very lower middle class family. He stays with his mother and sister. His father died in a car accident two years ago. Since then, his family lived on his father's pension and some few savings. After his father's death, he was depressed and fell into bad-company. His father's death made him more rude and arrogant. He started smoking, drinking with his friends about which his mother doesn't know. There is no positivity and no aim in his life. He is in third-year of BSc IT in Lucknow University. Will he able to change his attitude??



Arpita Rai- She belongs to a higher middle class family. She is simple and soft-hearted girl but a principled girl. She loves to help people. She wants to bring smile on everyone's face hence she is loved by all. He motto is to be happy in every situation. She has completed her twelfth.


Mahesh Chandra Rai- He is father of Arpita. His wife died when Arpita was five years old. He is engineer by profession. He loves his daughter very much. He is principled man. He wants her daughter to marry and daughter happily.

Neeta Thakur- Mother of Avdhesh. She wants her son to study first and then work. She loves her children. Wants her children to achieve great heights. She can do anything to keep them happy.

Other charcters are:

Shikha- Avdhesh's sister

Ranvijay- Avdhesh's friend and a small goon of the area. He is a rich-brat.

Manjari, Simple- Friends of Arpita.




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Part 1 - Page 5


Part 2 - Page 8




Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting concept.. avdesh smokes and drinks


haa my mind went to gkd story only but we saw him drinking twice or thrice


u can continue but dear not sure if i would be able to read all the story

u know me na i cant make head or tail out of ffs

but u continue i wud pop in now and then
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice n new concept nice prashu
yaaryaade taaa ho gayi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls continue, sounds interesting...and thank u for the nice pics, I'm reliving those days of GKD...am waiting for next segment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting Prashuuu...This sounds like a gangsters story,,,Continue soo...Want to see the rough side of Awdesh...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Mrs.Thakurnice intro hun
Avi with all nigativity hunn intresting ;-)
Hehe L.U student..
I think Arpi shud meet him soon hun ;)
So plz cont. Soon.
Luv yaa 4 bringin such nice SS ;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good concept prashu
Avdesh with smoke & drink... must be interesting as di said we saw him drunk before but seriously he was the hottest drunk that i have ever seen 😳 na?
Continue dear & i m sure you will be a successful writer 👍🏼
Bone chance

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gud one prashu ...continue dear ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prashu !!🤗🤗🤗

Lovely Intro Sis !!!!!👏👏

OMG !! Why did u have to post such a hawt pic of Ashish !! 😍😍

U r causing me to do bewafai to my Syao-kun !!😆😆

Cont soon..I am waiting for it !!!😃😃

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