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Posted: 13 years ago
haha i nvr lyked it cos i nvr red it yet nd i will nw nd i still wnt lyk it mwahahaha haha evil laf time MWAHAHA 🤣
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Link to Previous Part 15: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55496511

PART 16
"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"
"Aap!!" shouts a concerned Dharasti who believes her honour is at risk positioning her arms over her chest protecting herself from Gurmeet's laser eyes. His large bulky body on top of her, dried her clothes in a matter of seconds from the heat gushing out of him.

Thinking the worst of him in her blunt loud voice she starts to scream "rape! rape!" when Gurmeet places his thick skinned hands over her soft skinned juicy lips to shut her up. "Chup!" He speaks looking directly into her eyes. "Tumne bahut bol diya, aur maine bahut sun liya!"

Dharasti feels the need to save her from Gurmeet who looked no less then Ranjeet from the hit 90s bollywood flicks therefore she picks herself up from the rounded toilet seat and pushes him backwards making him crash onto the door of the cubicle making it shut with a BANG! Dhrasti steps backwards and screams "aaah!" "Chup! Bilkul Chup!" Shouts back a mean green Gurmeet who was like a poisonous snake ready to sting Dhrasti for all her mistakes.

Both Gurmeet and Dhrasti stood in silence in the mini rectangular cubicle which was painted blue which was the contrast to the colour of Gurmeet's face which was red displaying his hate and frustration towards Dhrasti. Gurmeet picked up a tissue from the tiled floor and pointed it at Dhrasti's face "yeh kya hain?" He screamed rubbing the tissue roughly on Dhrasti's face. The rubbing caused a tinge of pain in Dhrasti's face, she smacked his hands away from her face, "Yeh tissue hain, aap ko dhikaye nahin dehta kya?" She spit back. Gurmeet started clapping loudly, "aap ka shukriya jo aap ne mujhe bataya yeh kya hain ab yeh bhi bata di jiye ki iss tissue ki pankh kaise nikal aya jo woh oor ke uss cubicle main kaise gira' Ek bhaar nahin' Lekin baar baar! Baar baar baar baar" he shouted making his voice echo all around the room. He thumped the door hard with his fists not being able to control his anger any further.

Dhrasti bit her tongue "ooops" she whispered realising that it was her mistake. "Babaji yeh maine kya kardiya iss Dhust ko ek aur mauka mil gaya mujhe daatne ka" she started complaining cutely looking up at the ceiling. Gurmeet looked at her and rolled his eyes he realised that this stupid girl is just wasting his valuable time and that he should be with his family now not with her.

Dhrasti opened her mouth to explain the situation to Gurmeet but he just turned around saying "mujhe tumhaari bakwaas sune main koi dilchaspi nahin hain". He grabbed the handle of the door and tried pulling it but it was of no avail as the door was jammed and all credit goes to the macho hero Gurmeet who seemed as if he was strongly inspired by Sunny Deol as all his thumping and banging on the door had caused the door to be blocked.

Gurmeet pulled at the door with all the strength he possesses but it was of no use, the door didn't budge a tiny bit. Dhrasti peered over his shoulder "yeh aap ne kya kiya?!" She screamed in his ear realising that the door was jammed. "Maine?! Maine kya kiya? Yeh sab tumhaari galti hain samjhi pagal ladki" he erupted with his loud vocals pressing his long index finger into her forehead several times.

Dharasti wasn't going to be pressed on like as if she was a telephone, she also pulled out her index finger and started pressing into Gurmeet's white face in a circular pattern. For some weird reason Gurmeet didn't react to this annoying stupidity Dharasti was doing but he was rather calm and subtle thinking of his own mischief, he quickly shifts his head to a position so Dharasti's long finger can end up in his wide open mouth. "Ouch!" Dharasti screams feeling a bite on her finger. "Aapne yeh kya kiya?" she moans putting her finger in her mouth.

Even Gurmeet didn't know what he was doing, biting into her finger was unusual from him but when Dharasti was around the child within him awakens that he buried deep within him.

Gurmeet ignores Dharasti's question and smiles sitting himself down on the toilet seat. "Wah wah, bade muskura rahe hain aap? Yaha sai nikalne ka koi tarkieb nikaliye maharana toiletji" laughed Dhrasti at her own joke of referring to Gurmeet as the king of the toilet world "aap apne gadhi se utiye maharana toiletji aur koi upaye nikaliye yaha se fateh pane ke liye" Dhrasti continued in her royal language which was getting looks of disgust from Gurmeet. Gurmeet spoke with pride "main yaha se ek minute main nikal sakta hoon samji bewakoof ladki". He removed his mobile from his pocket with full arrogance and was about to dial to someone for help when he realised there was no reception. His face looked like a fully blown baloon to a burst baloon in a matter of few seconds. Dhrasti looked at him and started laughing "hahahaha" this agitated Gurmeet further he got up from the toilet seat and came charging towards Dhrasti when she screamed "idea!" Clicking her fingers.

Dhrasti makes a quick plan in her head and orders "aap waha jaake jukhiye" "kyaa?" Shouts Gurmeet "Gurmeet Sobti Chaudhry kabhi jhukta nahin woh jukaata hain" "bas mere baap main hi jhuk jaati lekin meri kandho ke liye aap thoda zyaada baari ho jayenge" Dhrasti spoke rapidly in one breath. Gurmeet realised what Dhrasti had in her mind and without further questions obeyed her order. He kneeled onto the ground and waited for Dhrasti's next step which never arrived, he looked around to see her on top of the toilet seat looking up and speaking to her Babaji "ab main kya karu babaji! Kehne main asaan tha aur karne main mushkil' Madat kijiye". Gurmeet spoke loudly,"tumhaare Babaji bhi sirf un logo ki madat karte hain jo kudh apna madat karna jaane' Ab bandh karo apna nautinki". Dhrasti made her final prayers and cursed Gurmeet before placing her legs onto Gurmeet's shoulders. She had her eyes closed and was hoping she doesn't fall off. She now was sitting on top of Gurmeet's shoulders, which was a rather uncomfortable situation for her and she felt odd, she thought it was best if she remained quiet. "Tum theek ho"came the voice of Gurmeet after sitting there waiting for her instruction, "hmm" Dhrasti replied. "Ab kya karna padega" Gurmeet barked getting impatient with this new silent Dhrasti. "Ab aap dheere dheere kara ho jaiyeh" spoke a calm Dhrasti not wanting to argue whilst she was on top of Gurmeet.

Gurmeet got up at once in a fast speed not paying heed to Dhrasti's words. The fast speed caused Dhrasti to sway on top of Gurmeet but his firm hold on her legs made sure she was stable. Dhrasti started smacking Gurmeet on his shoulders with her soft hands that didn't really have any sort of affect on him "Dheere Dheere kaha tha na maine" she screeched. "Okay okay" Gurmeet spat out, "now will you please climb into the other cubicle?".

Dhrasti held onto the wall that was dividing the cubicle's apart and Gurmeet gave her a push upwards, with a lot of pushing and climbing and barging and shouting Dhrasti finally managed to escape from the locked cubicle to the unlocked one.

Dhrasti sat on the floor and sighed a sigh of relief. She was tired from all the hard work, she just closed her eyes and sat numb on the tiled floor.

"Dhrasti! Dhrasti!" Came the loud bull like voice of Gurmeet. "Ek pal chain se jeene nahin dhega yeh dhust" she mentally cursed Gurmeet. "Tum theek tho ho na Dhrasti" came a softer voice at which Dhrasti stood up "yeh iss dhust ki awaaz hi hain na" she questioned herself clearing her ear with her finger. "Haan main theek hoon, don't worry about me" Dhrasti spoke happily. "Apni iss choti si dhimaak main bhool se bhi yeh nahin sochna ki main tumhaare liye fikar karoonga, Gurmeet Sobti Chaudhry ki itni bhi boore din nahin aye" he hissed back. Dhrasti mimicked Gurmeet outside the door and pulled various faces which would cause Gurmeet to flip if he had seen it, she went near the door and tried opening it as she didn't want any more ghastly scenes between her and him. After a little tug and push the door opened and Gurmeet was free. He walked out the cubicle with his head held high and his chest pumped up. He started walking out the washroom without a second glance at Dhrasti when he heard her claim "aap ko musibat se bachaya hain phir ek baar, pichle baar ka vaada yaad hain na?" She chirped away. Gurmeet came to a halt and turned his head "Vaada bhi yaad hain aur tumhaari karnama bhi yaad hain". "Mera karnama?" Dhrasti quizzed genuinely. "Haan tumhara' Abhi nahin' Phir kabhi fursat se samjaonga" Gurmeet spoke with a glint of his devilish persona visible in his sparkling eyes. He walked away from the washroom to the dining area of the restaurant with Dhrasti trailing behind him.

Dhrasti reached her sisters and animatedly started narrating the adventure which she encountered at the toilet, a lot of laughter and mayhem was polluting the restaurant and the source was the three sisters.

Barun looked at the table "what the" he muttered as he witnessed the three crazy girls causing unwanted noise. He looked ahead and spotted Gurmeet "Bhai' Aap yaha?" He spoke rather surprised. "Room for one more?" Gurmeet asked hugging his Daadi and sitting himself inbetween Prachi and Barun. Everyone started eating when Prachi felt a sudden restlessness taking over her body.

Outside the tall broadly built man parked up his lavish top of the range black car.

Prachi started to breath really fast like as if the world was spinning on its axis only for her. She held on tightly to her saree in a seduced state.

He pulled out his muscular leg and walked towards the restaurant putting away his sunglasses, his stylish walking, his white face, his black attire, his manly scent classed up the restaurant to a level of its own.

Prachi felt a desperation to come out the restaurant as the feeling in her was burning her inside. She felt him, she smelt him, it must be him, her heart cannot lie to her. How can something that belongs to him, lie to her about him. How can two souls that have one heartbeat not feel the presence of the other.

The rhythm of the soothing violin sparkled a smile on his face, as he walked past the ocean blue swimming pool, the presence of Prachi also made his heart ache in love. As him without her for a second feels like a lifetime of loneliness an eternity of tears, a moment of pain, a sky without its moon.

Prachi came running out, with her saree draping by her side with only one thing running in her mind," kash woh yaha na ho".

He saw her and stood still, his face was glowing under the moonlight. A delight to see her can be seen all over him, but on Prachi's face he read something else. Behind all the feelings of passion and romance, a thin line of fear and withdrawal was
evident.

He decided not to speak to her and walked away from the direction he was coming from, he wanted her to stop him. But Prachi didn't move like as if she was glued to the floor, he looked behind with his teary eye, questioning her but not a word left her lips.

He went and sat in his car driving away, "ek naam tumaara lekar hum jeete hain marte hain' Yeh ishq nibha dhena tum' Bas guzaarish yahi karte hain"

It was like she was cursed in a spell, she could feel his pain and anguish but there was a boundary which she could never cross, not then and not now. Prachi stood still near the pool, her eyes still staring at the fading car which belonged to her true love.

Meanwhile inside the restaurant Gurmeet's third eye opened upon seeing Prachi run the way she did. He was worried that is she walking on the forbidden path once again. "Kya Prachi phir se wohi raah pe chal rahi hain, mujhe pata lagana hoga, lekin abhi Daadi ya Barun ko kuch nahin bathaunga, phichli bar bhi woh zyaada pareshaan the' Mujhe hi kari nigraani karna parega Prachi ki jab tak uski shaadi nahin hoti Kushaal ki saath" Gurmeet's worried mind thought deeply.

Shabbir was sat with Kushaal enjoying their ice cream dessert when Shabbir's phone started ringing, "Bade aap ki ganti baji" joked Kushaal to Shabbir who looked as if he was lost somewhere. "Bade!" Kushaal shouted which awoke Shabbir, who had seen Prachi running out the restaurant in a rather peculiar manner and was wondering what exactly was going on. Shabbir picked up his phone "Hello Hello'. Hello Bhaisaab aap ki awaaz nahi aa rahi" he spoke happily getting up and going outside for better reception. After he finished his call he saw a lady draped in a saree standing like a statue near the pool. Some strange force pulled him towards her and like a mouse runs to cheese he was running to her. He glanced up and saw that it was Prachi,"Kya hua Prachi tum koyi koyi dhik rahi ho" he asked her gently.

Prachi stood silently ignoring Shabbir, "mar gayi kya bhai" he thought speaking again "memsaab, ab to utt jao" fluttering his hands across her face. Prachi still stood still, lost in her own turmoil. Shabbir put his ear near her lips, "saas le rahi hain yeh maum ki gudiya". He tapped her vigorously and she fell onto the ground "yeh tho kaach ki pudiya hain bhai" he smacked her face softly several times "ankhen tho khuli hain" he stated after observing her face. "Ek hi tareeka hain iski hosh lane ka" said Shabbir scratching his head.

Shabbir picked up Prachi in his arms and without a second thought he SPLASHED her into the pool. He smiled as if he had gained a big victory "Kya baat hain Shabbir tune tho kamaal kar diya'." He was in the process of self appraisal when he heard a shriek voice shouting "Bachao Bachao!! Koi hain!" He looked down and saw it was Prachi who was screaming for help, his clever little idea had awoken her but now she was drowning. "Uff iss duniya main balai ka zamana nahi raha" he complained to God and took off his white blazer and jumped into the pool to save a drowning Prachi. Once again Prachi was in his arms, her wet saree was now clinging to her body, her hair was wet sticking onto her face and water droplets were like pearls on her face glorifying her beauty. Shabbir averted his eyes from looking at her and he climbed up the stairs of the pool and reached solid ground. "Prachi ek bath batao mujhe' Itni kam paani main bhi tum dhoob sakti ho kya?" He asked her and burst out laughing immediately. He noticed Prachi getting upset "sorry bad joke" he whispered stopping the laughter at once. "Ab tho zara muskuralo bhai" he asked her ever so nicely. Prachi still remained the same. "Theek hain" Shabbir said and he impulsively started running with Prachi in his arms shouting "choo choo! Choo choo!" Prachi couldn't help but smile at his innocent childlike antics. "so you do know how to smile" Shabir smiled back at her.

Kushaal who had waited a very long time for his brother had had enough of waiting. He came outside to see his brother holding a girl in his arms "tho Bade yaha rangeeniya kar rahe hai' Lage raho bro" he joked to himself and patted his brother on the back. Shabbir turned around instantly and smiled at his brother "yeh le mere bhai apni amanat ko tu hi samaal" he spoke and dropped Prachi onto Kushaal's arms. Kushaal was taken aback and felt uncomfortable "Bade yeh aap kya kar rahe ho" he complained with Prachi still in his arms. "Aap hi samaliye!" He shouted and dropped Prachi back in Shabbir's arms, "yeh theek nahin Kushaal, tu hi rak isse samjhe" shouted back Shabbir dropping her in Kushaal's arms once again. Kushaal just gritted his teeth "Bade!" He screamed and pushed Prachi onto Shabbir "aap ko mubarak ho!" And with that he walked away. Prachi just couldn't help but smile at the endearing relationship of the two brothers, she slipped away from Shabbir's arms and ran inside whilst Shabbir ran after his little angry brother.

Precap

Tune in to the next epi to see The eventful journey back home'.

PLEAAASSSEEE PLEAAASSSEEE PLEAAASSSEEE comment and let us know whom do you want to see Prachi with???? The mystery man or Shabbir???

STORY SO FAR can be found on:

Edited by s0phie_152 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...

loved it...

want to see prachi with shabbir...

i want all of dem in romantic mood...mainly gurmeet n drashti...plz...

continue nxt prt soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
uff .. the day continues.. hilarious
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice part
loved the nok jok between dhrasti and gurmeet
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahaaa that was indeed hilarious
and gurmeet being the king of the toilet world
drashti is amazing
what is wrong with prachi.. if she likes someone why cant she share with her family
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Posted: 13 years ago
Prachi should end up with Shabbir!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it graphics...
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Posted: 13 years ago
the first part cracked me up 🤣\
awesome update dear!! loved it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 16
nice funny part...
enjoying...
who is that MAN?
and Maan seems to know about this...
cont soon dear...

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