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Posted: 13 years ago
Man all these lives are just so eventful!!
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loved it..thanks for the pm...:)
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i would love to see shabir instead of mystry men and really loved it
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Loved the update...def want to see Prachi with Shabbir...and want to see how you guys are going to manage that with the current plot...will be interesting...
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Link to Previous Part 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55559933

PART 17

"Kaho Na Pyar Hain"

Shabbir reached his little angry brother Kushaal who was punching the bonnet of their car. "Arre bhai itna gussa kyun ho raha hain tu?" Shabbir exclaimed looking at a fuming Kushaal. "Bade main aap se gussa nahin hoon" Kushaal shouted pointing towards the bottom of their vehicle. "Shit" Shabbir exclaimed once again after seeing that all four tyres of their car was missing. Shabbir's mischievous mind got to work, he scratched his head "Kushaal ek badiya idea hain mere bhai" he smiled. "Idea hain tho batao na jaldi Bade, time waste kyun kar rahe ho" said an irritated Kushaal. Shabbir went upto his brother and whispered something into Kushaal's ears at which Kushaal's angry face transformed into a wide smile which went broader and broader with Shabbir's every whisper. "Kya idea hain mere bhai, chal hoja shuru" said a very ecstatic Kushaal.

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Prachi came out the restaurant clad in her wet saree, she was just grateful that Barun, Gurmeet and Daadi didn't quiz her too much about why she was wet and were satisfied with her false excuse.

Prachi was lost in the thoughts of that special someone who always caused her heart to skip a beat, that special someone who made her breathing uneven, that special someone who she had upset earlier on. With that thought tears slipped out her eyes smearing her face. She rushed across the car park and sat herself in the back seat of Gurmeet's car, waiting for her brother to come out the restaurant.

Maanvi, Kushi and Dhrasti made their way out the restaurant and reached their pink scooty. "Kya khana tha Di I loved it sooo muchhh!" exaggerated a very pleased Maanvi, "haan the food was yummy Di!" Kushi joined in. Dhrasti smiled "mera treat tha tho acha hi hoga na". All three sisters laughed wholeheartedly when Maanvi caught a glimpse of her best friend Prachi seated in a car and she looked upset, "Di aap mera wait karo main apni friend se milke athi hoon, sirf ek minute please" Maanvi said pointing to the car which Prachi was sitting in. "Okay lekin jaldi karna" shouted Dhrasti behind an already running Maanvi.

Maanvi reached the car and opened the door and sat herself inside. She poked Prachi, "Kya hua Prachi?" She asked in concern. "Kuch nahin yaar bas yeh sab shaadi ki baat" Prachi replied covering up the real reason. Prachi changed the topic, "tu yahan kya kar rahi hain??" The two girls sat in the car talking when Manvi suddenly shouted, "mera bracelet kaha gaya!!" she started dramatically crying and explaining the importance of that bracelet and how precious it was to her. "Bas kar Maanvi!" Prachi spoke "chal dhoondte hain, yahi par hoga". Both Manvi and Prachi started looking for the bracelet on the floor of the car.

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Shabbir looked around the car park and said with pride, "aaj iss se kaam chala lete hain kyun Kushaal" he pointed at a car which looked really expensive and luxurious, "haan Bade ye acha hain, kal sorry note bhej dhenge kyun". Both brothers laughed and walked with full style towards the car which Shabbir had selected. Shabbir fished into his pockets and got out a thin piece of metal. He fiddled with it at the door and it opened, "Bade darwaza pehle se unlocked hain" laughed Kushaal who had opened the door without any hassle straight away. Shabbir just nodded his head and sat in the driving seat with Kushaal sitting beside him. Shabbir got his metal piece out once again and started the car.
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Gurmeet just came out the restaurant with Daadi and Barun walking alongside him when he noticed his car zoom past him in high speed. "Bhai yeh aap ki car hain" Barun spoke in shock, looking at the sight in front of him, "haan Barun mujhe pata hain yeh meri car hain" spoke Gurmeet in sheer anger. "Meri Prachi tho uss car pe betne gayi thi" yelped a very upset Daadi. Gurmeet clenched his fists "Gurmeet Sobti Chaudhry ki behan aur car ko lekar bhagna mushkil hi nahin namumkin hain" "Bhai let's go!" Said Barun making his way to his car.
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"Oyee ruk, helllooo" Dhrasti and Kushi yelled in union and looked at each other in utter shock as they saw the car in which Maanvi was sitting in fade away. "Kushi chal uss car ka peecha karte hain, Maanvi ko patha nahin kaun kahan lekar chala gaya, kidnap tho nahin ho gayi woh" Dhrasti blurted worried and concerned for her little sister, "Haan Di jaldi chalo" Kushi spoke starting the scooty.

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Shabbir and Kushaal sat peacefully in the car not aware of the not so peaceful girls sitting behind them.

Manvi and Prachi were searching for the bracelet and were ducked down so weren't visible to Shabbir and Kushaal and when the car started moving the ever so easily scared Prachi remained ducked and held onto Maanvi to stay in that position too so that they don't fall into trouble.

"Bade kya speed hain car ki" Kushaal spoke as he opened the car window. Shabbir spoke with pride "haan achi hain lekin mera car tho isse bhi fast hain" "haan Bade aap ki car tho world best hain" Kushaal teased. "Yeh chor ki baatien bhi kitni funny hain na Prachi" spoke a very frustrated Manvi who found these robbers funny. "Chup" whispered Prachi to silent Maanvi, "Prachi tu ek number ki daurpok hain samjhi" Manvi said angrily.

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Gurmeet snatched Barun's car keys from his hands and ran to the white Lamborghini. He sat himself down and shouted from the open windows, "main Prachi ko lekar atha hoon aur uss chor ko bhi sabak sikhaunga, Barun you go home with Daadi." Before Barun could reply Gurmeet had speeded past him in trail of his own car. Barun kicked the ground beneath him, he wanted to go after the car too, not sit idle at home like a stupid girl, "damn it!" He shouted. "Daadi aap andhar jaake bhetiye main aap ko lene aunga car ki intezaam karke" Barun spoke calmly to his Daadi managing to convince her to sit inside the restaurant. "I'll be back Daadi but only after finding Prachi Di" he whispered in his mind.

He came out the restaurant once again and looked around to find some sort of transport as soon as possible when he noticed that crazy Khushi with her sister Dhrasti struggling to start their pink scooty. He was walking pass them when he heard a part of their conversation, "'Di yeh kambhakt scooty bhi start nahi ho raha woh gunde patha nahin Manvi ko kaha lekar jayenge, zaroor yeh Manvi ki amir dost Prachi ke peeche the woh bechaari khamaka phas gayi."

Barun stopped in his tracks, "Di" he whispered. "Di tumhaari behan ke saath hain?" He spoke in a rather calm tone unlike his usual manner. Kushi looked up and was shocked to see the owner of the calm voice was Barun. She stared at him in disbelief and continued to look at him in complete awe, she noticed Barun had some sort of pain in his eyes. She blinked not being able to absorb the intensity. Barun asked once again, "Mere Di tumhari behan ke saath hain?" Dhrasti decided to speak, "Haan Prachi aur Maanvi ek saath the car main aur koi gunda ne unka kidnap kar liya, lekin tum fikar math karo hum unhe dhoond lenge aur uss gunde ko bhi achi sabak sikhayenge, you don't worry you go home" Barun looked at her in utter shock, all these sisters are crazy "crazy" he mumbled "kuch kaha?" Dhrasti asked. "No no, I just'" Barun was cut short by Khushi, "Di, aap bhi na, ye larki thodi hain jo ghar pe jaa kar bete ga, woh bhi apni Di ko dhoondna chatha hoga, lift maangne main sharma raha hain shayad" Kushi smiled. "No no'" Was all Barun managed to say when he was cut short once again, "theek hain Kushi tu peeche bait jaa inke saath aur main scooty chala thi hoon, tujhse tho fast main hoon na" Dhrasti spoke.

The two sisters decided Baruns fate without even letting him speak a word, Barun can never agree to sit in a pink scooty with two girls, no way but then he thought of his sister Prachi and thought this late at night perhaps this was the best option he had.

All three tried to sit them self down on the scooter but they didn't manage to, "Di, what shall we do now? We are too many and the scooter is too small? Asked a confused Kushi biting on to her nail. "Don't worry Kushi, we will Manage" claimed Dharasti climbing on the scooter first and comfortably sitting down, then she asked Barun to sit behind her. Barun sat down with out a hassle. "abb main, where shall I sit??" stumped Kushi. "Yaha ji" said Dharasti pointing at Barun's lap which was positioned like a seat made specially to comfort Kushi. "nahi di! What are you saying, main aur waha NO WAY!" she shouted.

Barun also got shocked after listening to Dharasti's bright idea standing back up rather quickly. "abb tumhe kya hoon?" asked Dharasti looking at Barun "why are you blushing?" she teased. "Main and blushing?" spoke Barun in his rough voice looking into the mirror to check if his face has really gone red. To his disbelief, he noticed his face was really getting red and he couldn't let his male ego fall loose therefore he sat back down on the scooter behind Dharasti, swaying his long arms around Kushi's rounded hips and pulling her towards him placing her full body weight on top of him sitting her down.

Kushi was shocked, she had lost her balance, and she found herself sitting on top of Barun and in a matter of seconds Dharasti started the scooter riding away.

The fast speed, the blowing wind, the dancing tree branch, the falling pink leaves all formed a completely different scenario for Kushi and Barun. Kushi looked at Barun's face, he looked away from her as he didn't want her to know he felt shy and nervous with her sitting on top of him. A whole different sensation was getting synchronized in both of them which neither he understood and neither did she.

Kushi couldn't understand why he was looking away, the man who always looked directly into her eyes had nothing to say to her today. "Sab kuch teek hain na?" she asked. "haan mujhe kya hua" he spoke.

Meanwhile Dharasti took a shortcut and luckily she found her elf behind the car her sister was kidnapped in shouting "rukooo rukooo manviii main agayi meri behan". "Thank God we found them before tum mera sar paka do" spoke Barun rudely to Kushi. "haye devi maya! Iss akru koh sudh budhi do!" Spoke Kushi looking up at the sky fortunately Barun wasn't listening to what she was saying.

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Shabbir and Kushaal were indulged in there conversation when Kushal heard a racket at the back coming from the back seats. "did you hear that Bade?" He asked Shabir and looked behind him. "TUM!" He shouted spotting Manvi. Shabir also looked behind at the back seat and gently spoke "tum'" after seeing Prachi.

"Haan Hum CHOR!" spoke Manvi impolitely to Kushaal. "who are you calling Chor Chorni?" come back with Kushaal. "Chor na Kushaal, yaha nahi yaar" spoke Shabbir still looking at Prachi in her wet saree, not concentrating in his driving.

Out of no where Gurmeet came out and parked his long white car on front of Shabbir and Kushaal.

Shabbir braked his car at full speed causing Prachi to slide inbetween the gap of the seats into Shabbir's lap as she didn't have her seat belt on. Shabbir was just loosing himself in Prachi when Kushaal shouted "Bade yeh kaun hain jo aap ka rasta katne ka socha hain?". Shabbir was about to remove Prachi from himself when suddenly the door of the car opened with a big thud. Maanvi just stared with big eyes at the whole scene unfolding in front of her.

The force who had opened the door was Gurmeet at his angry best. He saw Prachi seated on top of a man and was about to attack him with his 2KG hands when he noticed the man was Shabbir. He unhappily calmed himself down and spoke through gritted teeth "aap meri gari main meri behan ke saath kya kar rahe hain?" Shabbir was lost for words for the first time and was relieved when Kushaal spoke, "Woh sab meri galti hain humaara gari karaab ho gayi aur inhone humien lift de di meri hazaar manato ke baad". Shabbir smiled at his brother for covering up, "yeh gari iss Gurmeet ki hi honi thi" he cursed himself mentally. "Jhoota saala" Maanvi cursed Kushaal in her mind. Gurmeet looked at the four of them in confusion "lift bina chabi ke" he thought in his head. "Di" a voice came from behind Gurmeet, it was Barun who had just arrived in the pink scooty, "MAANVI!" Came a screeching noise from Dhrasti and Kushi, they pushed Barun and Gurmeet out their way and pulled Maanvi out the car, "Maanvi tu theek tho hain" her sisters enquired and after realising that she was in the car with Shabbir they smiled and sighed a sigh of relief, they instantly left the spot on their scooty, going home questioning Manvi on the way to what exactly happened.

Kushaal and Shabbir got out the car and apologized to Barun, Gurmeet and Prachi in a low voice and started walking away really fast. Barun just looked at them "what the'" He muttered.

The Sobti Chaudhry family finally reached home after collecting Daadi from the restaurant. They all expired to their rooms as they desperately needed rest.

Prachi stood near her window looking out into the distance. She was scared and worried, was he upset with her? She looked across to his house and saw him stood on his terrace.

The broadly built man stood firmly rooted to the ground. He loves Prachi very much but what she did today has left a scar in his heart that only she can heal with her love. Prachi had reopened the wound in his heart "Prachi re Prachi tu hi bura tujhse bura na koi kudh hi dil ka rog lagaye kudh hi beta roye" the words escaped the lips of the broadly built man after noticing Prachi crying in his love, in their love.

Precap

A new day a new journey!

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Edited by s0phie_152 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

superb part

jab ye saare milte hai toh kuch na kuch zaroor hota hai

nd yaar ye mystery man ki mystery kab open hogi???

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a amazing part . Barun on a pink scooty and Khushi on his lap ... that was something funny 😆. I could kind of imagine them like that . Do continue soon and plz pm me . Waiting for the new day's new journey . 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
FANTASTIC!!Never fails to amaze me :p
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i kept laughing throughout.. great fun!! n maan's lines...i cd soo picture him saying those

n barun..😍..yes he's got this faint sensitivity about him..aww u left him to come on a pink scooty! lool! no fair! lol lol lol..but the ride was nice..hahaha😍... cd visualise them both in a world of their own

khushaal n shabbir..lol! they're bad boys but in a mischievous way..lol

maan is a firecracker..luvd him!❤️

n dhrashti's attitude in the car park was hilarious!🤣
all the characters rock!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
This story just keeps getting more and more interesting :)
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beautiful update...


loved it...


thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

Edited by love2_soma - 13 years ago

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