Obsession : A Collection of OS' [NOTE PG 28] !!! - Page 5

omg that was superb

awesome part...loved udays dialogues...very clever...update soon

Wow..what a beautiful update :) The symbolism of Taj Mahal made it all the more deep..I love your flow of writing..continue soon :)

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wow that was amazing Riddhi just loved it!

Thank youuu, I finally had that burst of inspiration 😆

Originally posted by: tvlover92

<font color="#0033cc">I loved the way you described Manyata's Taj Mahal dream in the beginning...despite it being with Aakash😆. And then the diya signifance. Amazing.👍🏼</font>

<font color="#0033cc">Udayveer-Manyata was amazing, from his entry to his cheesy joke to their banter to their moment (😳) to her giggling at how she would haunt him🤣. I am still laughing about that part as well🤣.</font>

<font color="#0033cc">Do write one more! You are such a talented writer! :D</font>

<font color="#0033cc">TC.</font>

Hehe, thanks! Yeah, I figure she still isn't aware of her feelings but I always see her forgetting aakash once udayveer distracts her 😆 ..
I'm glad you liked my attempts at humour lol, I wanted to bring in more of that nok-jhok in my OS this time.

Originally posted by: roking_nidhi223

omg that was superb

u are a fab writer

do tell me how u get these kinds of ideas

Thankies! 😳 my ideas come randomly, I think I'm always day dreaming filler scenes when I'm bored or hoping for something to happen in the show - and then it just goes from there. I think I was reminded by the taj Mahal from the pillow decoration which udayveer had held & then it became my central point. I also write in the Sns forum, and all my stories are set in an alternate reality with a common theme. I think that trying to fit my OSs into the current DEK storyline is what makes my updates not so frequent. The aakash-eloping fiasco deff made me think "oh no, no manveer possibilities now"

Originally posted by: --ANGEL--

awesome part...loved udays dialogues...very clever...update soon

Thank you! Honestly, the thing I find super attractive about udayveer is his intelligence... He is so sharp & knows how to manage most to all situations. Plus, he gives everything a positive twist, probably because he's so self-confident) 😆

Originally posted by: ..Ananya-kmh..

Wow..what a beautiful update :) The symbolism of Taj Mahal made it all the more deep..I love your flow of writing..continue soon :)

Thank you! Glad you liked it! I'm definitely going to hope to update by this coming weekend again but I'm slightly lazy haha 😃

My GOD! You are just amazing! Loved both of your pieces. Waiting for you to write more!

P.S - The Diwali joke cracked me up real bad. It was amazing!

loved the OS...u had it all, emotions, humor...