Obsession : A Collection of OS' [NOTE PG 28] !!!

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akshada

@Vampgirl

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Amazing OS... loved it...wish to see somthing like this in DEK 😊

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Apocalypse

@WhiteNights

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

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It was fantastic Riddhi. Loved it to bits. OMG! the usage of words..how poetic!.It was like reading a beautiful poem :) So enchanting..just like the Taj Mahal :D

How do you think and translate your thoughts so beautifully.

And LOL how she kept thinking of him afterwords and thinking mischeviously about haunting him after her death😆 that was incredible.

Can't blame her though I would do the same, had I a dream Prince like Udayveer so besotted with me😆😛

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: -Mais-
My GOD! You are just amazing! Loved both of your pieces. Waiting for you to write more!

P.S - The Diwali joke cracked me up real bad. It was amazing!

haha, thanks!! i was at a family party and one of the uncles cracked this joke & i literally just could not stop laughing 😆 so i vowed to use it at least once LOL

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sparikh
loved the OS...u had it all, emotions, humor...

-Sona

thanks, sona! it means a lot to me because i want to do the layered personalities justice .. especially because its these characters who make us love DEK so much 😆

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Vampgirl
Amazing OS... loved it...wish to see somthing like this in DEK 😊

thank youuu! honestly, i wish the CVs could visit our forum and see all the things we think and write! it would be so nice 😍

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ConnectTheDots.
😍😍😍
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

It was fantastic Riddhi. Loved it to bits. OMG! the usage of words..how poetic!.It was like reading a beautiful poem :) So enchanting..just like the Taj Mahal :D

How do you think and translate your thoughts so beautifully.

And LOL how she kept thinking of him afterwords and thinking mischeviously about haunting him after her death😆 that was incredible.

Can't blame her though I would do the same, had I a dream Prince like Udayveer so besotted with me😆😛

😆 Thank you thank you! I really have no idea how all the puzzle pieces seem to fit in the end, but these thoughts just begin as little ideas & then as i write. i try putting them in order. but i try writing it all in one sitting & then revising it in the next sitting .. friday's episode helped me get how to add the finishing touches, akhir ek bhatakte hui aatma humare OS mein aaya 😉 LOL, Manyata can be so silly, and i like how she just becomes so excited by her own fantasies & UV is the best in his element .. i like how he can be a shikari on a good hunt, so witty and hot 😳

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
Lovely OS.. great job

thank you so much! i'm gathering ideas, and seeing how this week goes so i can post again soon (*fingers crossed - by this weekend!)

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Came to this Forum just today..and within minutes found your thread.

Read both the one-shots and all I can say for the moment is Wow!

Do add me to your PM list, if you do send them out.

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

This was such a lovely continuation.you described Manyata's emotions beautifully and I enjoyed the interaction between her and Uday.The Deewar dialogue was used perfectly.brought a smile to my face and that kutta comparison awww so sweet of Uday.loved that part a lot.please do update soon.sorry for the late comment.