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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Why this FF is not popular.This is so nice.such a variety story.Do u update ur popular ffs regularly?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Why this FF is not popular.This is so nice.such a variety story.Do u update ur popular ffs regularly?


This is the only FF I wrote but got so less response

So I thought of writing Manveer OS instead of an FF!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: panchaali


Thank you Jasmine 😊

but my this FF is not that popular 😭

That's why I don't get the courage to update 😔

u should try to write it in geet forum may be u get more likes...as there r more active members...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: dona86

u should try to write it in geet forum may be u get more likes...as there r more active members...


Okay but I have already started it here, in the fan fiction forum now how will I post it in the different place?

Actually I started it a long ago, at that time I didn't know much about the India forums and had no idea about the Geet forum...
Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
u go 2 d Geet foum.Click new topic n post it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it
pl addd me in
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

u go 2 d Geet foum.Click new topic n post it


I know how to post the new topic in the forum now...

But I did not know it back then when I have started it...

But as I have started it here, how can I post it in the forum now?

As far as I know posting duplicate story is forbidden in India Forums...😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Chapter 3

When Geet opened her eyes she smiled feeling the morning sun's warm touch on her face, but then turning at the other side of the bed when she remembered the last day and the day before yesterday; her eyes filled with tears again. Geet couldn't remember when she fell asleep while crying. She came out of the bed and found out that the pulp of the diary page is still there on the ground. She took it and went to throw it out with frustration, but some unknown handwriting on it stopped her.

She opened the page properly and saw after her writing there was something written by somebody else. Any girl would think she is being stalked by someone. But the beautiful handwriting made her read those words.

Dear Misti friend,

"I don't know your name; I don't even know who you are, so naming you Misti out of my own imagination".

Geet looked out of the window here and there, thinking that the letter must be from a real stalker, but then her eyes caught the very next sentence...

"Don't worry my friend, I am no stalker, I don't even know where you live. Last evening when I was alone in my room then this paper came inside out of nowhere. And I don't know why I am writing back to you because we are twenty first century people; we don't write we e-mail that too with a recognized mail-id. And here I am writing to a person, whom I don't know, whose address is also unknown to me. I don't even have the idea you will get my words or not. But still writing with a hope, hope that my words will reach to you, the way your words came to me!!!

His words are so relying that Geet immediately lost into it. She cannot think for a single second that the person could be lying or playing some bad joke. She went on reading.

"I can understand your pain. It's not very easy to say to a person," that I understand your pain". But in this case I really do. Like you I also have lost someone; someone very close to my heart. Like you I also have felt alone, miserable, lonely. But then I looked at the wide sky, saw it is all alone still so happy and so wide. You must be thinking it has the sun on its chest during the whole day and beautiful stars and moon adorns it throughout the whole night. But you know it is still alone; because no one is touching its heart. But our loves, our emotions always stays with us, it never leaves us. Then why should I yearn for someone who still exists in my heart. May be I won't see my love smiling everyday but I feel her smile, whenever I smile. So this stranger friend of yours request you to look at the sun (if it's morning) who is alone but gorges and is smiling only for you, or look the beautiful moon (if its night), so forlorn but still there to calm you; to sooth you. Are you still feeling lonely my friend!!! Then feel about the person who is not with you how much it'll sting to him, whenever he feels that he is the cause of your pain".

Tears rolled from Geet's eyes but this time not out of sorrow but out of relief. She cried again to relieve herself completely, and then read his last sentence.

"At last I pray to the mighty wind so that it carries my words to you and if my words really become success to heal you I will feel it in my heart."

The letter finished here. He did not write about his identity, he did not even mention his address. He wants her to smile, he wants her to become herself, and he doesn't want anything in return. She read his last sentence for several times, specially, "If my words really become success to heal you I will feel it in my heart."

"How will you? You don't know me actualy!!! Then how do you know me so well? How can you stop my tears so easily!!!" She thought, "Then you must be a very nice person Mr. Nice!" And unknowingly a wide smile touched her lips while thinking about this Mr.Nice.

...

"Wake up buddy! Math's test is knocking at the door and you are sleeping like an animal!!" The hate birds also jumped hearing the girl's scream.

"Hmmm, this girl's brain is full of nightmare, in fact she is a nightmare lover and dream hater like us!!!" Vikram whispered to Nayantara.

"Don't get so overwhelmed Vikram, if she is a true nightmare lover then what she is doing in this Dream Villa and why she is so close with the girl whose brain is full of dreams!!!" Nayantara whispered back.

"You are right black beauty!! Relationships in this world are odd. Human brains are totally crazy; I mean how anyone could think about romancing with a vampire!!! Our Chivalrous vampire Avay Raichand is suffering only for these silly human brains!!!" Vikram uttered, Nayantara nodded her head.

The girl with dream filled brain is still in deep sleep.

"Come on Pari, stop dreaming about our Math professor Stefan Salvatore. He is gonna throw you out of the class if you don't pass this test."

The girl named Pari smiled in her sleep answered her friend in a dream filled voice, " Misha Stefan is my dreamy, he will never do that."

"He bhaggu" Yelled Misha, "Okay you dream about your dreamy. You will see the real nightmare later." She left the place.

...

Geet touched her Mr.Nice's words again to feel its effect on her. Yes it really has quite an effect on her. She is still smiling and her eyes left all traces of tears. She looked at Dev's framed photo and smiled; "Now I will show you how I can manage this home alone!!! I will kill all cockroaches whoever will try to attack me! I am not a delicate princess anymore'' She was going to say more but that's not an easy task, tears again came into her eyes but she controlled it before it fell. "No, I will never cry again, not in front of you Dev. I am not alone, you are with me." And unknowingly in her mind she thought, "Mr. Nice's words are with me!"

...

When Pari in her Dream villa opened her eyes she felt like she is in a nightmare, "OMG Misha was right. If I could not pass this test then I will lose every chance to see my dreamy's face again!!! Now what will I do!!! I have to call Misha, she is good at Math." She took out her phone and dialed a number.

...

Geet kept the letter in the drawer very carefully and at that time the doorbell rang. She opened the door and saw Stefan.

"Stefan, What happened to you in this early morning!!"

Stefan came inside and gave her a brotherly hug, "Hey are you okay Geet?"

Stefan Salvatore born and brought up in Florence, Italy. He came to India after his parent's death. And after coming here he fell in love with Blossoms, took Indian citizenship and joined to Greenfield College as a Mathematics proffessor. Geet was his colleague at first, but slowly they became best friends.

"I was miserable last night, but I am fine now." He did not believe her at all.

"Have you taken your breakfast?" Stefan inquired.

"No, I was just going to make it and you came in between." Geet's face became apologetic. She usually never hides anything from her best friend. But she cannot open up the topic about the miraculous letter to Stefan. He won't believe a single word in it, and will file a police complain thinking the person is trying to stalk his best friend and sisterly girl.

"So you started lying to me now!!!"His green eyes flickered with an affectionate anger as if he is scolding a five year old kid.

"I think it's good that I still did not have it, now we could have breakfast together and talk about our good old days." Geet gave a guilty smile.

"No I will make it." He protested.

"Who wants to have boring pasta now!! I am gonna make my favorite aloo paratha with extra butter." She made a face.

He couldn't believe from where this girl got so much power!!! She lost her beloved husband just two days ago. But seeing her like this he smiled.

"As you wish! How can I forget I am talking with Mrs. Unbeatable Handa!!!" Stefan chuckled. Geet gave a proud smile, "Line pe a gaya!!"

"What?" He inquired. He always liked to know the meaning of her funny Hindi phrases as it signifies she is in a jovial mood.

Geet was just going to translate at that time his phone rang.

...

Without saying a hello Pari started, "Misha I understand I am in a grave danger, please teach me math, I cannot allow myself out of dreamy's class. Please Misha please!!!"

But instead of Misha's rough phrases a sophisticated Male voice came from the other side of the phone, "Hello miss!!"

"Dreamy!!!" Pari screamed, her phone almost fell from her hand, but she managed it somehow.

"Hello I mean sir!!!" Sorry I thought it is...

"Its okay, no need to apologize. I think I am your concerning Mathematics teacher, so I feel I can help you better than your friend." Hearing the voice of her dream she started breathing heavily and somehow managed to say, "Yes sir".

"So come to the library after the class." The line went dead. Pari started jumping on her bed I am on my first date with my Dreamy!!!

Then her eyes fell on those hate birds on her roof. She came close and looked at them with sympathy, "Oh no dear, you guys look hungry, wait for a second." She left to the kitchen.

Vikram and Nayantara were looking at her with the scariest look they could manage but seeing her reaction they got frustrated. Vikram screamed "OMG! I don't wanna end up like our vampire gateman. This girl has no fear!"

"Hey don't panic. Let her come out with her garbage, we will attack her together."

But instead of garbage Pari came out with delicious pastries, "My darling crows, your mummy is the pastry maker of this town, now attack!!"

Hearing this hate birds got scared! they looked at each other in confusion.

"Oye meri sweety crows confuse mat ho...It's really tasty my Dreamy finished one cake alone on last teacher's day." She again lost in a dream.

The delicious smell of pastry did not get unnoticed by these hate birds who only gets to eat only mudblood in their world. Their test buds immediately started reacting and Vikram was going to attack the pastry but Nayantara stopped him, "Vikram don't!! She is one of those person for whom our Lord still cannot attack the Dream World, you must not touch her food and we are crows we must eat what crows eat, those dustbin food will help us to keep our nightmare strong!"

Vikram looked at Nayantara, felt she is absolutely right, but can anyone think of garbage if he is served nice and delicious pastry by an equally nice girl!!!

"Vikram, don't look at her, let's leave." Nayantara yelled.

Seeing their constant cawing Pari got confused, she thought they want to eat more, so she left to the kitchen again.

In a second Nayantara grabbed Vikram out of the house and sat on a roof.

"Black Beauty what is this!!" Vikram yelled.

"Don't you feel Vikram, we are getting trapped!! We went there to find and kill those love birds but we ended up being tempted with pastries!" Now Vikaram started thinking, "You are right, but now how will we find those birds?"

"If they are really here, we'll never find them, because we cannot penetrate Pari's brain, her dreams are too stong!" Nayantara looked scared.

"Now, don't give me that look Black beauty, it does not suit you! Okay let me think something." Vikram looked here and there and at last sounded, "Gotcha!"

"What?" Nayantara looked at him, Vikaram smirked at her helpless look, "If I tell you my plan, you are gonna thank me the way I want.

Nayantara's evil smile returned, "Done." But if your plan backfires you are gonna do the same to me.

"Anything for my Black Beauty."

...

While eating delicious aloo paratha Stefan said, "ummm mouthwatering Geet!" and she gave another proud smile.

After finishing the breakfast he said, "You are going to join Greenfield again Geet."

"Well um..." She couldn't get how she will reject him.

"I won't let you sit alone in this house and be sad throughout the whole day. Come on with me. I think our Principal will be happy to see you again." Stefan said in determined voice. Geet nodded her head.

...

Morning sun caressed his bare muscular chest. Maan looked out of his window, last evening's miraculous moments are still playing on his mind. And the rising sun with a happy smile welcomed him again.

"Yes, a new chapter has started in my life." A carefree smile crossed his lips. Then he remembered about the letter he has written last night to an unknown woman. His temples folded while thinking about her, "Has she got my words! "

Slowly it came into his mind what he had written to her; if his words are able to heal her, he will feel it in his heart.

"Is the smiling sun signifying that my Misti friend is also smiling?" The sun of course did not give any answer but an unknown calmness filled his mind.

He again looked at the sun, "Mighty sun, make my friend smile. Make her understand she is not alone."

What am I doing!! I am acting like an out of the world person." Maan thought at the very next moment. But then his eyes fell on those magical love birds on his window sill and again he forgot all the differences between magic and reality.

...

Seeing a smiling Maan Lucky uttered to Preeto, "I think I must take Geet's pain. I found you through her tears, regained my magical powers; now I must stop that from her eyes."

"You won't do anything like that!" Preeto almost ordered Lucky.

"But why?"

"Don't you feel it how much he wants his words to heal her!!!"

"You are right preeto! And both of them posses' pure heart. Then, if their heart binds together.." Lucky started almost jumping.

"Slow, think little bit slow Lucky. You mustn't hurry in love!!! Its elixir, it must spread slowly." A calming smile crossed Preeto's lips.

"My genius lady!!" Lucky kissed her.

Then he remembered something, "You know Preeto I've already kept the letter at Geet's house. But if she throws it unknowingly!!!" Lucky became tensed again.

"Don't worry she won't. At the very first touch she will feel the magic beneath it. She will keep his words at the very closest part her soul. A pure heart always recognizes its other part." She smiled.

...

Maan was lost in a deep thought. Then he felt a knock at his door.

"Come in" He uttered. When he looked back, saw his father Mohan Sing Khurana.

"Maan, I want you to join my college as a Principal."

"But Dad'"

"No if and but, that's my final decision, I want to retire now." The principal handed his son the key to his office. Maan took it and uttered slowly, "Okay dad, I will do it."

...

While leaving the room Mohan Sing Khurana looked back at his lost son again and uttered in his mind, "I can't heal you with my words Maan, I am not good at it like your mother. It is the best I can do for you son. I don't want to lose you."

...

Geet entered Greenfield again so many memories of past crept at single a moment that she forgot the little trace of her sorrow in her mind. Looking at her best friend she said, "Thanks again Stefan." He smiled, "Anything for my best buddy. Now go the principal and be my colleague again." Geet smiled back.

He left for class and Geet was moving to the principal's office slowly. She is still thinking about those words of her unknown friend. It's only his words which brought her here. Otherwise Stefan could not bring her out so easily. Today she is standing at the Greenfield's ground, only for him.

"Who are you Mr.Nice? Do you really exist? Or you are a dream!!" She uttered in her own mind.

Just then she bumped on someone and her bag, files all fell on the ground.


A/N: hi friends this time I am late because my eyes are are not well...I have grown a huge power in my glasses and computer screen is hurting my eyes 😔 If you like this update plzzz LIKE and COMMENT...


Precap:-Maaneet meets face to face 😊



Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ISAY KHETE HAI BOMBASTIC ENTERY ZABARDAST UDATE DI AAP NE DIL KHUSH HO GAYA PARH KAY GOOD JOB BUT I LIKE THINGS REALTED TO MANVEER MORE THEN ANY COUPLE BUT IT WAS VERY FANTASTIC YOU WRITE 👍🏼 IT VERY WELL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it as a surprise update.thx a lot 4 updating.Maan' words in d letter brought a huge change in geet.so happy 4 geet.Stephen's charac seems 2b gud.So Maaneet r in d university now.In d last scene that man is Maan.Rt?Waiting 4 dem 2 realize that they r d letter ones

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