ARHI SS--THE BEST RAIN!!(part 6,page38)

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anjali

@rosette80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

omg.i am in heaven reading this os of urs...touching.to tell the truth i read the whole ss now..not in fulll.but the last part fully...it was the BEST SCENE AND PART!!!👍🏼
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kaash jaldi si show mein ek scene bilkul same to same ho jaye...pleaseee😍

loved it darling!🤗

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

The concept of Arnav and Khushi as friends is so cool! :D With their physical attraction to each other, it was never going to remain just friendship. Love how you showed all the characters. Arnav running away from his feelings first and then Khushi's jealousy and getting Drunk!!! :)
And rain is THE most romantic setting ever. Put Arnav and Khushi in that and it can never go wrong! Really nice stuff Chitu! :D

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dkapi1

@dkapi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

arnav on seeing khushi decided to tease her..below the table he took his feet and kept it on the foot which he could reach in front of him...

payal saw this..she smiled..

he moved his feet but was surprised that khushi continued her chatter..

akash "bhai..ye mera pair hai..."and burst out laughing..even payal couldnt control and both of them started rolling with laughter...

arnav had never been this embarassed...he took away his feet...and stood up hurriedly to leave faking that there was a call for him..

ROFL! ROFL

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Aww loved it so much chitvi!!!
I loved the filmy style of proposal..
Lol u were right chitvi.. you are too filmy..
I read all ur OS.. I really liked them!!
Thanks to payal and akash for.bringing then closer..

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

loved the story alot👏🤗i wish u continue it😊

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Aparna

@-aparna-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Toh baat ye hai ki i read all d parts of best rain aftr our call:D
and conttinued reading while watching todays epi too:D
whole SS is so lovely, starting fight, den some ramance d walk, party jealousy, d gussa, and cute confession in d rain :D
totally filmy lol
but yeah if i had read it b4 i wud hv found it very much filmy but now he has proposed her like that and danced too that was horrible thing :p
but i cud relate it.

Awesome work yaar
aur haa payal aur akash ko kuch jyada hi dial. Mil gaye thaaankuu:p

loved it:*

chalo aab tere kuch OSes bache hain