IN LOVE WID MR. IMPERFECT New Note@ Pg 87/20th Jan - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
waitinggg for u too update plxx update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulations for the new ff. dear.. very nice concept and title continuee soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
hello sweeties! hope u all r doing good ok m back again to update d first part of my FF. i knw u all will be angry on me as m again ignoring my health but as i said before "Kya Karoon O Ladies Main hoon Aadat se majboor" 😆😆😆ok jokes apart but on a serious note m much better nw nd m kind of hell bored by being in bedrest so i asked my bro to leave his lappy wid me only so m updating it by being on bed only. so without wasting tym m gonna update next part hope u all r gonna like it.

next part cuming in few mins.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey gals! me back wid d first part of my FF. Thank u so much for ur overwhelming nd Warm Welcome to my new venture. i'll try my best to keep up wid ur Expectations nd will not disappoint u all. dis is d first tym m doing any such kind of experiment so just keeping my fingers crossed. O God! i really speaks a lot😆😆. ok so without any further delay m gonna update d Part 1 of my FF. hope u all r gonna like it. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it.

Part 1:

Mumbai City of Dreams. Everyday number of people comes to dis city to fulfill dere Dreams. Some are lucky enough to get succeeded in fulfilling it while others just have to taste d bitter medicine of reality where Dreams are just meant to be broken. Many people accept dis harsh reality but still dere are some people who struggle till the end to fulfill their Dreams nd gets succeeded too.

There she was sitting at d balcony of her flat holding her coffee mug watching the Sea waves. It was Sunday so dere is rush at d beach unlike any other weekday. Well Mumbai doesn't need any reason to be crowded by people. But in d crowd of 1000s people also she's alone. She saw a Group of friends running nd enjoying in d beach from her terrace, oblivious of anything nd smiled slyly. Friends; a 7 letter word in which people says whole word is covered but wats d use of dose friends who back stabs u, who just distanced themselves without any reason nd only remembers u during special occasions dat too for just formality. She's Lucky dat she dnt have any fake friends. Infact she dnt have friends at all. Nd she's happy also being alone.

Dis City of Dreams has given her everything which she had dreamt of. A good job, a good amount of salary, Recognition in Society, her fav. Car in d Parking nd a sea-facing flat; everything dat she had dreamt of except one. Nd dat is a true companion but on d second thought did she really need dat nw. may be no. she had everything in her lyf which makes her perfect. She is GEET HANDA a well known fashion designer who works in d best fashion company 'Panache'. Her work is adored in d office, her boss always remains impressed from her hard work, she havent taken any kind of shortcuts to reach to d place where she is nw, she always keeps herself busy in her work nd other activities nd wen she gets free she spend her tym alone like dis only at d terrace watching sea.


Dis was her lyf from past 5 years nd she is happy in her perfect lyf in which dere is no place for Love anymore nw. Dis was d small world dat she has created for herself where dere is no one to hurt her, where she's happy.

She once again looked at d beach watching two siblings playing wid each other nd a smile crept on her face remembering her tym wid her Brother. She closed her eyes remembering her brother who was always dere for her wenever she needs him. Who was her biggest support in fulfilling her dreams. Nd wen her every dream has been fulfilled den he's not wid her.

"Miss u Bhai" she said looking upwards silently praying dat her brother's soul rest in peace.

She closed her eyes for sometym remembering her brother wen a pair of hands covered her eyes surprising her. She smiled knowing who it was. She dnt have to guess who dis person is.

"Pari I knw its u. nw stop playing dese old Tricks of urs" she said while touching her hands which r still covering her eyes.

"Kya Di! Aap hamesha pehchaan lete ho. Kabhi to guess karne ki koshish kiya karo" Pari said wid a pouting face removing her hand from Geet's eyes, causing Geet to smile brightly. Did she just said dat she had no friends at all. Well if yes den she's wrong. She had a friend infact a only friend who knows her more den she knows herself. Her best friend Pari who is just 2 months younger den her but still her best friend. Pari had always addressed Geet as "Di" as Geet was always dere for her as an elder sister right from the first day dey met 8 years back.

"Because I know dat only one person have the duplicate key of our flat. Nd only one person can be dis much childish" Geet said while hitting her head playfully. Pari had always been wid Geet nd has adored her every act. Dey work together in 'panache' nd sharing d same flat from last 5 years. Pari is d only person who had witnessed each nd every change of Geet's lyf nd was dere by her side lyk a true friend.

Pari: ya ya I knw dat my Di is very smart. I missed u a lot Di.

She said while hugging her to which Geet too responded

Geet: I missed u too. Acha tell me hw was ur trip?

Pari: Awesome. Ah! I still couldn't take my mind off from London. U knw it was so much fun over dere. I wish u could als be dere wid me

Geet: next tym I'll definitely cum. Promise.

Pari: better be. BTW wat r u doing over here in d terrace

Geet: D same thing dat I do from last 5 years

Pari: Feeling lonely Right?

Geet: Ofcourse not. I dnt have tym to feel lonely. Wo to i was just getting bored nd having no work at all so thought of sitting over here. Anyways u must be tired na. I'll just bring a coffee for u.

She said nd goes from dere to prepare coffee for Pari but Pari knows dat dis was just an another excuse her to skip from d conversation like she's doing from last 5 years. Afterall she knows her from last 8 years.

She wondered if Geet can ever be back to same girl which she was 5 years back. will she ever be able be to d same Geet which she was 8 years back with whom she has made friendship right from d first day. She had everything in her lyf which she had dreamt of but still her biggest dream is yet to be fulfilled which she seems to be forgetten nw or pretends to be.


"Dnt worry Di! Very soon ur dat dream will also cum true which u pretend to forgot nw. i knw dere's someone who'll bring my Geet di back again" she said to herself nd goes inside to help Geet.

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On d other hand at d another corner of d City he was lyieng lazily on his bed lost in his own dream world forgetting every worries around d world. Infact to ask wen did he got worried for anything. He was d most carefree person who dnt have to worry for his future as he got everything in his lyf.

He was born having silver spoon in his mouth nd being d only heir he dnt have to worry for wat will happen in future. He is MAAN SINGH KHURANA, Heir of Khurana Empires. A Charmer among girls nd no one had left unaffected by his charm till now but yet he's single till nw as for him he haven't found any girl of his level. So until he wont find her he's happy like dis only.


He was lost in his dream world wen d loud noise of his ringtone disturbs his sleep. he decides to ignore it but d continuously ringing if d cell forced him to open his eyes nd give d caller a piece of mind.

"Hello! Who's it…" he said in his sleepy voice not interested in talking to anyone right now.

"Maan, u r still sleeping? Get up u lazy head" came a loud voice from other side causing him to open his eyes in a jerk nd he gets up instantly on his bed.


"Oh God! m so Dead nw" He thought nd puts d phone back to his ears

Maan: No Prem, who said dat m still sleeping. Wo to I was doing work out datsy couldn't pick ur call at once

Prem: Stop Ur stupid reasoning Maan because I know u from childhood nd it's not tough for me to catch ur lies.

Maan: Ok u caught me. Fine, happy now

Prem: Wats wrong wid u Maan? Did u watched d tym? Its 11 am nd U have to be here in d office nw nd u were at home doing nothing but sleeping.

Maan: oh C'mon Prem. Only boring persons like u attend offices on Sunday also while interesting people like me just enjoy my Sunday. Nd as far as my sleeping is concerned well last nite it was so much fun at Disc dat I didn't realize wen d clock struck at 4 am.

Prem: Maan grow up nw atleast! u r not here to do fun. U had many responsibilities towards lyf.

Maan: oh C'mon Prem now atleast u dnt talk like Dad yaar. Who knows wat happen tomorrow, so let us enjoy our present.

Prem: u r unbelievable Maan. Dad has given ur responsibility to me nd nw I dnt know wat should I do wid u?

Maan: Nothing. Just take a chill pill nd relax.

He said nd chuckled on his own statement only to get chided by Prem.

Prem: Shut up Maan! Not everything in lyf is a joke. God knows wat u'll do in ur future. but Just dnt forget for wat u r here for.

Prem said angrily nd disconnects d call. Maan rubbed his temples knowing d anger of his Cousin Brother Prem Juneja.

Prem is d only son of Maan's maasi nd after d death of his parents Maan's parents has adopted him nd treats him as his own son. Prem too considers Maan's family as his own nd call Maan's Father "Dad" but he didn't changed his surname nd no one even forced him also to do so. Maan nd Prem are of same age nd has shared each nd every phase of each other's lyf.

Prem wanted to make his own identity so he came to Mumbai nd nw he's a owner of well known Fashion Company 'panache' without any kind of help from anyone. Datsy Maan's Dad use to admire his each nd every work nd has given Maan's responsibility to him only as he's d only person who can show Maan a right way.


Maan nd Prem r best buddies more den just siblings therefore Maan never felt bad for his scoldings. But right now he knows dat his brother won't be pacify so easily so he has to do sumthing really big to pacify his brother nd it was not tough also. he knows wat he has to do nw.

Maan: Fine Brother. I knw hw to pacify u. So wat I left d office today but tomorrow I'll be d first one to reach at office nd den u'll be proud of me. Wow Maan u r so intelligent!

He said wid a smirk nd gets involved wid his daily routine activities.


Precap:


Wen Ms. Perfect meets Mr. Imperfect


Ok so dis is it guys! hope u all r gonna like it. i knw its a kind of short part nd moreover no Maaneet at all. but i kept it all for d next part.😉. dis was just like to get u all familiar wid d characters. sorry if i disappoint u all but i'll make it up in d next part. Pakka wala Promise. Hit d like button if u all like it nd do leave ur Comment/Criticism. its necessary


Luv Aakriti


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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
awesome update aakriti
loved it
u made geet perfect and maan imperfect
it would be fum to read this FF
continue soon
i hope u also continue ur other FF This is called love😉
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
dey r just opposite..
one is fun-loving and other one serious...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
love the update can't wait till they meet
geet will straighten him out never heard of a lazy msk sound interesting thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
wow loved it
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Loved the starting dear
waiting to see what will happen when miss perfect meets mr. imperfect
continue soon
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1:
It was osum dear...😊
Haye maan and imperfect... lolz😆 😆u can only imagine like that and make us also imagine...😉😆

Btw jokes apart... Loved the first part... wiating for the meeting of Ms.perfect with Mr.Imperfect... god knws what will happen when they will meet...😉 oops not god u will knw bcoz u r gonna right it...😆

Luv ya... ❤️

continue soon...😊

Take care...😊

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