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Posted: 13 years ago
Luvd how maan asked her ...y does it matter to her whn she was ready to talk to aunty about him n Prachi. Luvd how instead of saying the straight words... Y r u jealous? He brought this statement in :)
Waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago

nahi nahi dun giggle
me SERIOUS..
.😳 dekho mein hans rahi hoon kya????

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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry muski am not very happy with the update... not that i was expecting a romantic sunday but after so long i was expecting that story between maan and geet kuch to aage badhegi... in the sense maan isnt 18 any more... he is close to 20... so thoda maturity aata hai... he has been working with geet on project for a while now.. he knows her a bit... even teenagers slowly change perception about things and people... 2 years is enuf time that some thinking atleast change... some behavioural changes come in guys and gals but in case of Maan he hasnt learnt anything in 2 years... the story gol gol jake maan ke personal development front pe firse old point pe hi aajati hai... 2 years mein he hasnt changed even a bit..his understanding of things hasnt improved at all...
while Geet has changed totally ... from a gal who wud nvr take any shit from anyone alwas keeps her mouth shut infront of Maan... never shows him his place... never shuts him up... agreed she has fallen for him but falling for a guy who cannot think anything from anyone else's perspective but his own and she is taking all this quietly...
mujhe update mein maza nahi aaya... am very frank and open about it...
Maan geet ka romance can wait but unka age badh raha hai atleast unki maturity thodi to badhni chahiye... geet because of office and all bahut jyada matured and sehensheel ho gayi hai while maan hasnt changed 1 bit... he is like he was when he was 18...
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Posted: 13 years ago
He spoke for hours until they finally reached delhi
bus aap mujhe yanhi chod dijayen
he looked at her in shock. She had not said a word since afternoon & all she says now is chod dijayen.


All his anger suddenly vanished in thin air when he realized..she was going. Their sunday is over.. the only day he had got to be with her is going to end !! his heart just sunk... he felt choked, a sudden rush of fear.
He stopped the car in the side & sat their quietly contemplating how to stop her. He didn't want the day to end yet. She didn't say anything just opened the door & got up to leave. He held her hand, least she expected at that moment especially after all wat he told her. Her heart cried at that moment.. just wanting to be hugged .. kissed; claimed.. held by him, cuddled by him,
She so much wanted to be with him today, she had planned so many things not expecting anything in return least was getting hurt well that was unavoidable when it is him around. Well she sighed.. heavily.. had she let him hold her today...she could never be able to refuse him again. She slowly pulled back her hand .. he didn't let go..
sat next to him seemingly calm & composed. His heart raised feeling a pinch.. all he could feel she was leaving. Going away from him. He wanted the time to just stop.. stay their.. have her with him.. forever.
He could feel her some wat oddly tense that was not visible to the naked eyes.. something he could feel with in. he cursed himself to have ruined the whole day he had with her. How he wished the time could just get back to 6 in the morning when she called asking him to pick her up... a sweet smile played on his lips reminded of that moment.. & the warmth that followed.. then a sudden anger boiled in him.. as the sight of her playing shamelessly with those cheap guys flashed in his mind. He watched Geet again. She looked coiled with in.. yet calm outer self... beautiful as always .. off course he has been seeing her all day.. today..still nothing to change the impact on him now, but her moves were tense, and her expression were contradicting.
Like she read his questioning mind.. she slumped on the seat in relief although he was unsure why it felt like he had just dogged the proverbial bullet. Worried he glanced at her. Her silence & the fear she was going away instantly frustrated he felt the urge to say something just something may be even shout; yell.. just to catch her attention & was just about to do that when he saw her eyes & paused. Somehow, her eyes were different. Maan eased his tight grip on her wrist as he stared focused on her face, that he didn't feel aware of anything else. They were deep unusually deep & numb as if she was really hurt. All though rest of her seemed normal but she was really hurt & probably no one could ever notice that. She looked down & looked back at him again.. & her eyes said a different story now.
She took a deep breath.. & said I shall speak to prachi tomorrow before leaving.
He didn't know wat happened.. wat he felt that moment.. wat did he saw in those eyes, something he never seen before or never wanted to believe it could be her, so sensitive & fragile.
********
Geet reached her flat.. & dropped the key on the center able. She walked into the kitchen & got water for herself lost '
My heart beats for you only
Every moment, every hour and every day
From dawn to dusk
Heart to heart
And soul to soul

I long to be with you in your arms
I long to see my self in your eyes
I long to hold my hand in yours
Every moment, every hour and every day
From dawn to dusk
Heart to heart
And soul to soul

I wish you felt the same for me
I wish for your heart to beat for me
I want you to call me yours
I want you to hold me in your arms
I want you all for myself
Because I am yours and only yours

Alas, it can only be a wish
Because your heart beats for someone else
Who is a close friend of mine
I cannot bear to see you in your sorrow
How I wish, I can take away your pain
Soothe your heart
And calm you down

But, how can I?
When your heart beats for someone else
Who is a close friend of mine
I still wish you were mine
Only mine
Every moment, every hour and every day
From dawn to dusk
Heart to heart
And soul to soul
by rachna

She realized she just didn't want to deal with this anymore. It was too much & putting too much strain on her & her every other relationships. She couldn't even look into the eyes of anyone normally anymore. What was wrong with her. It was like she had reached some sort of limit.

She decided to speak to prachi. She wahsed her face & called armaan.
Geet & armaan spoke to prachi, especially on her continuouls avoiding Maan. Not that armaan cared a bit.. but well when Geet was involved he had to show interest.
Geet ' prachi tu Maan ko aisen kyun avoid kar rahi hain
prachi ' nahi aisen koi baat nahi hain
Geet ' we all r seeing that
armaan just nodded.
precap
😲oops Geet with karan!!!😲
-PREV PART 99 NEXT PART 101-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
let him realise how his words hurt her

let Prachi talk to him
that will knock in him some senses

hey I am the first
let me celebrate
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


nahi nahi dun giggle
me SERIOUS..
.😳 dekho mein hans rahi hoon kya????


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Posted: 13 years ago
r
di..mera gussa abhi tak kum nahi hua!!!😡
am so so so feeling bad for geet!!!😭
kitni pareshaan hain
n tht JERK didn't even relate to what happened tht she
looked so sad!!!!!😡
for this update also..
me not forgiving maan
NAHI NAHI NAHIII!!!!!


meri geet ko kya ho gaya..😭
khud mein hi ulajhti jaa rahi hain!!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dont know what to say...
I am upset.

Precap sounds scary...again Maan ka gussa...???
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Posted: 13 years ago
I have no words to describe how well you wrote the scene in the car. That he could only hold on to her wrist and look at her, only her, as if he'd thirst forever if he missed something there..

The look in those eyes , that expression, he must have seen for the first time, isnt it. Though it has been hiding there all the while.
Loved what she said at last.

The update was strangely soothing (more from Geets point of view).

too too good.

more more more...
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i have nothing to say now😒

well one doubt- din't maan realise where he picked geet from n where he droped her is the same place where once he came with prachi???
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago

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