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Posted: 13 years ago
Congratulations on the 100.
The start of the date was so beautiful and sweet.
Both of them in their own sweet selves were enjoying a meal together.
But at the day end things were so sour.
Maan and his baseless assumptions and bitter talk hurt Geet so much that may be she will stop feeling anything.
I wonder why Prachi gets to be dragged between these two again and again.
Geet's talks to Prachi dont seem to make much sense to anybody but geet i suppose.
Karan again 😲.
Wonder whats going to come up now
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Geet & armaan spoke to prachi, especially on her continuouls avoiding Maan. Not that armaan cared a bit.. but well when Geet was involved he had to show interest.
Geet ' prachi tu Maan ko aisen kyun avoid kar rahi hain
prachi ' nahi aisen koi baat nahi hain
Geet ' we all r seeing
armaan just nodded.
Prachi ' someone seem to be spending more time with Maan now days
Geet just got up to leave, yes she did !!! even more guilty now.. may be its all wrong to have something to do with him.. a lot to do with him actually. But I guess she had to stop it especially if it was getting between them.
Armaan dropped his head sadly & shook it leaving prachi alone to think wat she just said. was she actually feeling odd about maan & geet together??? why should she .. when there was nothing between them at the first place!!!!

Next day Geet actually went out with Karan. Maan was totally taken a back with her ignorance. He kind of knew she was just being mean because she was hurt. But then going out with someone in anger .. common.. he knows her .. its not like her.
he gave in to her anger. He went behind her..
karan off course had that proud look having her next to him. Maan flinched at the sight first & then .. looked helplessly at Geet. She looked at him like nothing happened.
Geet ' hi Maan Sir.. she insisted on the sir bit
he looked away & then looked back at her ' we need to talk
she smiled.. haan kaho
Maan looked at karan & then her
karan ' do u want me to leave
she looked at Maan.. & answered ' I guess there is nothing so personal between us. Its ok u can be here. Waisen bhi it is getting late for me
Maan ' I know u r angry
she didn't want to hear any of that crap.. she just turned to leave..
Maan pulled her back.. muffling back his anger jaantha hoo naraz ho
lekin iska matlab yeh nahi
.. he just glanced at karan
she snapped out his grip pretending to be super cool... why should I be angry at u.
Geet .. Geet meri baat suno
karan grinned leading her to his car. She suggested they could walk to the cafe. Don't know why she just couldn't sit with him in his car.

Maan looked down caressing his forehead, it pinched his heart. How can she just be so indifferent & yet make a difference. He closed his eyes & dropped his head his world seemed to doom again. why does she always do this to him.. its so easy for her to ignore him & push him away, liuke there is nothing between them.

It was strange it was just a day with her being like this, he didn't know how to explain wat he felt, it felt like ages have apssed by.. days & nights sunken... He consoled himself .. she is just angry with him. Uff kitna gussa karti hain. He made all kind of faces.
Geet made up her mind not to stress herself too much into all that. she prefered not thing abt him..if that was possible.
Prachi called in said sorry.
Geet coldly suggested her its her life & her relation with Maan, nothing much she could do abt it.
Prachi knew it was her mistake to run away from him, may be she was scared of her on feelings.

Next day Maan knew he had to make it upto her atleast today.. or he may just collapse.. he went behind Geet trying to talk to her.. while she was walking out with karan.
karan warned maan.
maan cared a dam with karan he said... or thought.. & continued to talk to her.
She snapped back.. yelling don't u get it.. My BF doesn't like this ..
wat
he asked blankly..
she looked away
u always interfering, just leave us alone. We hardly get time with each other, it will be nice if u could leave us alone.
Nothing.. just nothing of her word mattered.. he knew she was just blabbering
at least thats wat he loved to believe. Or did he knew it deep with in. he still tried to hold her back.. when he was stopped by some one holding him back.. he snapped in anger only to see prachi holding his hand.
He sighed & looked at her & then Geet.
geet took the chance & let her hand away from him
Geet smiled at prachi ' hi prachi
then looked at Maan.. I guess u need some time alone now & winked naughtily.
He felt like a slap on his face. All this while he thought she was angry at him.. but wat is also this..he knew she was angry at him for wat happened on sunday but .. !!
well is that she wants..
he getting close to prachi.. is all this abt that.. he angrily looked away from her & put his hand around prachi.. hain
Geet walked away catching just a glance of their togetherness.. cursing herself to stop caring he is just there holding her right infront of her.. exactly the way they used to be.
Karan asked in concern ' r u alright
she looked away warning herself to stop crying with in ... remembering 'us'
why did he say that then..
karan knew there was something wrong.. least could he expect anything between her & Maan but lately they have been behaving in a way he could easily read the signals but well now she was with him & he won't let her go away. not for a loser like maan.

She courageously crossed the road not wanting to remember anything, stop blaming herself. Stop thinking abt him.. having him in her mind always.. she didn't even seem to realize the screeching sound of types of the car that just stopped right in front of her.. while karan dragged her out of the way. Dam even this moment seemed to remind her only of him. How she wished, she had one off those memeory loss stuffs. She laughed at her own joke !!!.
Karan was dam sure of their uncooked story but couldn't help using her to jalawophy Maan. He had enough of his continously snubbing him & Geet was his trump card now against maan.
precap
karan challenge Maan
-PREV PART 100 NEXT PART 102-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Muskan, muskan, muskan...Kya se kya ho gaya...I was thinking all sorts of waterpark masti, swimsuit, boxers, water closeness par humare Maan ne saare armaano par paani pher diya. What to do with this ulloo... every time he opens mouth he inserts foot. That comment about her talking to prachis mom, uff, idiot, duffer, ab bhugto. Ab it is time to face a strong Geet, wonder how it will be for Maan Sir? BTW, every time you put "Maan ka gussa", me imagining a lot of kisses... he he, naughty me.Please update soon. Thanks for the updates.
CONGRATS on your century. One more to go...
Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
the portrayal of their turmoil is simply brilliant.. hurting each other to quell their own hurt. . doing things and saying things in desperation and retaliation.. both are so damn vulnerable right now !! so so vulnerable !

I liked how coldly Geet told Prachi that she is off their business now. . .
Maan has no idea that she feels exactly like him because she has never been the one to initiate anything, or respond to his initiation, infact has always tried to avoid him (cause of Prachi).. so his confusion regarding what she feels for him is justified..

But I swear, I am more hooked to this FF than ever.. love it !!

Thanks muskan, and forgive me for asking for more more more ;)
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is one total mess.
I suppose thats what happens at that age.
So much of mis understanding, mis communication jealousy and frustration.
I wonder how Maan and Geet are able to carry themselves with so many overwhelming feelings.
On a lighter side looks like there is a competition between jodis 😆.
Maan being challenged sounds super interesting
Waiting for the next part
Edited by Ramhari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear.. can't wait to read more..

please erase Prachi & karan asap 😉😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
And i thought prachi is out of picture
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Posted: 13 years ago
Scary part, if they become indifferent to each other, they r just hurting themselves. Muski give some peace to our geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
What Kind of a friend Prachi is. I hate her. How can you say something about your friend whom you have known from your child hood. I wish Armaan could have said to Prachi or at least yelled at her for saying those words to Geet.😒ya phir ek thappad hi mar deta...

Loved Geet's behavior towards Maan and specially Prachi. She deserved it. I do not Geet to forgive Prachi this time. it is high time. she always says nasty things to Geet and then comes to say sorry. Stupid Girl. Geet, please ignore Prachi from now on.

And Mr Khurana 😡 Gadha, ooloo ka paththa, Khota...khud to Geet kya kuch nahi kaha aur ab jab woh khud ko sambhal ne koshish kar rahi hai woh bhi use nahi pasand.

How can he 😡 go with Prachi...when he himself does not like Geet going away with Karan...

Ab Karan ek bhi mauka nahi chhodega Maan ko jalane ka...Sab apni soch rahe he koi Geet ke baar me nahi sochta...Maan bhi nahi...😭

Let's see what is the challenge for Maan from Karan...Muskan challenge jo bhi ho Geet ko aur mat rulana please...I want my bindas, bubbly Geet back...And send Prachi 😈to purgatory (a place between Heaven & Hell) forever...
Edited by adorableyosh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just reread it for the third time. Amazing

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