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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 1:
COLLEGE
adi:heey maan
maan:hii where is vicky
adi:he is flirting with 1st yrs gals
maan:(gives a deadly glare)we are waiting here 4r him&he is busy in flirting with gals😡
adi:hey yr u shouting at me ... look vicky is coming shout at him
sameera:maan you know one thing vicky come to college only for gir😆l
vicky:hai maan... hai adi...
there are many new girls has joined in our college... adi you know comparing to final year there are many beautiful girls in 1st year...
adi:so here after vicky always stand before the 1st yrs block😆
on this time geet and pinky are enter into the college all the gals in the college are wearing jeans,mini shirt.but geet wearing simple anarkali suit with matching ear ring and bangels with free hair she look very beautiful and pinky wear a white tops and black jeans.geet is totally different from all other girls.
(this is first day for geet but pinky join before one week so she well know about maan and their gangs)
pinky watch maan and their gangs siting on top of the car
pinky:geet look at the the gang whose is siting on the top of the car their are very dangerous people dont talk with them
geet:why
pinky:geet look the boy wearing blue jeans and black shirt (maan)he is the head of the gang ...yesterday i saw him beating a boy without mercy even tat boy is begging him to spare bt he was going on beating him until he faint...
geet:y
pinky:i dnt know the ybut i saw him beating
geet:pinky nw iam really scared🤢
sameera see geet and pinky
sameera:hey guys see the village gal
vicky:but she is very beautiful and simple without make up
sameera stomach started burning
vicky:you know adi if we see sameera without makeup we are surely die of fear but see the girl she look very beautiful i want to know her name.
adi imagine sameera face without make up and starts laughing loudly.
vicky:why are you laughing?
abi:nothing.i imaged sameera's face without makeup
sameera:stop it...(shouts)
maan who was untill silently listening to them raised his head&stunned wen his eyes falls on a beautiful,innocent...his entire old was stopped &keep on looking geet without blinking...
sameera want to make fun on geet &tease her bcoz of her he got insulted by vicky&adi ...
sameera:vicky you want to know her name na?
vicky:yes,what are you going to do?
maan heart also jump to know her name
sameera:wait and see
hey village gal come here...hey you both come here


hai frnds how s it?
frnds when you finsh read this part what ever come to ur mind
negative or positive plz commend frnd
dont forget press like button😊

Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
*Edited*

Wow Dear! it was truly amazing... though it was Short but i loved it totally... i just hate dis Sameera... Loved vicky wen he was making fun of her

m eagerly waiting for Geet nd Sameera encounter nd ofcourse Maaneet encounter too😉

Pls Pls Pls update d next part soon nd ya dis tym pls try to make it a bit long one pls..

Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy nyc update plzz cont ssoon nd plz PM me... offo dat sameera na😡 luvd it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice FF dear.. Thanks for PM.. Continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome 👏
hate sameera😡

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thank you very much didi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great starting...n as usual hate sameera...
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hi..
it really a superb concept...
1st update was rocking..
waiting for many more updates..
do continue..
waiting..
loved this new avtar of maan






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