MG FF:Love Start With Lie and fear #1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

nice part love the way maan reacted...

Quote

SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

awesome part

i loved it

plz add me in ur pm list

continue soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

CONTINUE SOON
EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART

Quote

Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

interesting...
Maan is a rowdy college boy...
thanks for the pm...

Quote

Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

part 1
nice part...
Sameera thinks too high of herself...
Vicky was so funny when he said about Sameera...
Geet is so naive and beautiful...
hope Sameera doesnt Geet in jealousy...
cont soon...

Quote

hepzi

@honey_doll

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

thank u very much for ur precious commend and likes

Quote

Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

can u plz post the direct links at the first page also?
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2208947/mg-ff-love-start-with-lie-and-fear-1?pn=3

Quote

hepzi

@honey_doll

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

PART 2:

geet and pinky looks at sameera

pinky:geet i think they were calling us😲

geet:pinky i m scared

pinky: geet don't worry even i am scared lets go ... i am here with u na...

both walk towards sameera.geet hands were shivering with fear

maan was busy in admiring in her beautiful&innocent eyes, her pinky cheeks,shivering lips(maan brain:maan no dnt admire the girl this rule not in your book)

sameera:whats ur name?(sameera ask geet)

pinky: pinky

sameera:we dnt ask ur name,whts ur name?(again sameera ask to geet)

pinky: she s geet.(maan was angry about pinky answer bcoz he want to hear geet melodies voice)

sameera(laugh):oh miss geet plz sing a geet for us

maan interrupts

maan:(angrly)we are ask to her not to you.is she is dumb?why she is nt replying...??😡

geet staring at maan with fear pinky saw geet she was totally shivering with fear of sudden question from maan.pinky dont like this gang so she want save geet from futher question so she thinks 4r some time ...& says

pinky:yes! she is dumb.she join under physically challenged

note:any one did't noticed geet and pinky's conversation.so they believed pinky's lie😉)

sameera:(tease)pinky i hear if any people be dumb they cont able to hear na,then how she gng to stdy in dis clge

pinky:but geet is different she hear everything but she cnt speak

sameera:pinky bu

maan interrupt

maan:(angly)sameera stop dis.ohhh hhmm sorry... sorry geet

adi,vicky and sameera they con't able to belive there ears

" maan singh khurana was saying sorry to a girl"

geet head was spinning about pinky lie and her body was shivering.

pinky hold her hand tightly & with their permission they went away from tat place

after hearing pinky words maan heart was broken into million pieces"he curses god 4r doing thz to geet "[maan u dont believe in god na then y u curse god]😕😳

here geet shouts at pinky.

geet:what s dis pinky?y do u lie to them? wat if they found i am nt dumb ?he surely kills us... nw geet was very terrified...

pinky:relax geet nothing is going to happen.if i did't sat like tat then i am sure they dont leave untill rag u

geet:no pinky its wrong if they found true then...??

pinky:i am with you na then y ur afraid

geet:ur with me tats y i am scared...😡

pinky:relax geet nothing will happen as u think nw take a chill pill babies... actually u should be very happy & proud

geet:&tats 4r wat...????

pinky:bcoz we are the 1st juniors ragging our seniors hehehe.no no

we r the 1st to rag the great MAAN SINGH KHURANA & his gang...😆😆

hai frnds how s it?

frnds when you finsh read this part what ever come to ur mind

negative or positive plz commend frnd

bcoz dis s my 1st ff so i m very afraid

dont forget press like button😊

PART 3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2208947/mg-ff-love-start-with-lie-and-fear-1?pn=14

Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago

127

Quote

hepzi

@honey_doll

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111
*Edited*

Wow Dear! it was truly amazing... though it was Short but i loved it totally... i just hate dis Sameera... Loved vicky wen he was making fun of her

m eagerly waiting for Geet nd Sameera encounter nd ofcourse Maaneet encounter too😉

Pls Pls Pls update d next part soon nd ya dis tym pls try to make it a bit long one pls..

sry frnd part 2 also small one next time i surely try dear

Quote

hepzi

@honey_doll

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: spvd
can u plz post the direct links at the first page also?
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2208947/mg-ff-love-start-with-lie-and-fear-1?pn=3

thank u some much dear

Quote

1 ... 3 4 5 6 7 ... 84

MG FF:Love Start With Lie and fear #1 - Page 5

Related Topics

Explore Topics