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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

geet ka ye kehna hi Maan sir, aap prachi ko milne aayen ho, she is gone to the canteen
maan ka ye jawaab wow him. nahi main tum se milne aaya hoon Geet

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

maan ka complaint fir shuru

I have been trying to call u he said looking directly at her
oh really!! I guess I missed ur call..

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

i love the whole scen maan snaching cell from geet pocket

he fished her pocket & pulled out the phone.. she didn't protest.. just pretended to laugh.
He pressed the missed call list & showed it to.. her..
oh.. this is ur number.. I am so sorry main abhi save karthi hoon

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

maan cutely poochna he held her arm & shook her.. why r u avoiding me?
She heart choked.. when he said that. No I am not. she maintained her composure
Phir challo meren saat he held her hand & dragged her out of the class towards the car park
muje bahut acha laga

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

highlight of the part is dono ka inner talks with their souls

He couldn't explain the turmoil in him.. the week of not seeing her was more, or her not responding to his call.. or was it her not recognizing his voice at the first place.. he had no idea wat was bothering him & above all why should it be bothering him at all.

She felt wounded & stills getting back for more..letting him close yet again, thrash her, squeeze her heart until the numb & sore.. still with a smile on.. just with a difference..that pain doesn't surface anymore.

He felt confused inside, not understanding wats like to be refused but refused of wat. Why it hurts so much that he fears to even live again.

her heart cried out loud in pain saying sorry she just can't just can't give him wat he wants anymore.. probably she doesn't know wat he want anymore. !!!

all he could do was get terrified & leave.. leave her alone.. empty.. broken heart pieces..like a chewed up toy
but did he feel more destroyed ..than ever.. though he thought he was much stronger than that!!!

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

itne din baad mile lekin itnio kamoshi

geet ka ye thinking acha laga

she knew how her heart cried to hear a word from his mouth. Ask him wat is bothering him, take him in his embrace, cry out loud.

next maan ka inner battle

Maan had planned to say so many things when he sees her..meets her. He had so many thing to ask her, tell her how its been horrible without her.. how he is not been able to sleep at nights, how his day seem to be so dead.. meaningless. He wanted to take her in his arms hug her.. feel her..but her coldness, feared him to death.. like he couldn't have taken her rejection, her denial, he would rather die million times before he sees her not want him.