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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: manesha76

Nice Part 😛

thanx dear😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

thank u sooo much for ur love and support guys..keep supporting me in the same way plzzz i need ur support...
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-mona

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

                         LOVE ALWAYS WINS..

               PART-10

maan,mayank and sid discuss about their plan for geet's surprise bday party...then they have dinner together...
maan and sid leaves to k.m.

s.d: bete aap log aagaye...
waise itni der lagadi aane mein?

maan: ha mom hum log nupur ke ghar gaye the isliye thodi der hogayi...

s.d: accha teek hai..ab chaliye khana khalijiye...bahuth der hogayi hai..

maan:o mom actually hum khana kha chuke hai nupur ke ghar par.
           waise mom papa so gaye kya?

s.d:ha bete abhi abhi sogaye...
aur aap log bhi tak gaye honge jaa kar aaram kijiye..

sid: ha mom sach mein aaj mein bahuth tired hoon aur neend bhi aarahi hai(yawns).mein jaa raha hoon sone...

he greets gud night to maan and s.d and moves to his room...
maan also goes to his room..
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hey friends iam introducing two new characters in this update...
shashank modi:

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               he is father of riddhima..very kind hearted and loves his daugther to the core...he is a successful bussiness man.

sameera chopra:

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         she is riddhima's friend.she is wicked lady and always think about her own benefit and can go to any extent for the thing she wants to get...

     riddhima arrives home and notices her dad in the living room..she goes and sits besides him...

ridz:good evening papa..

shashank:gud evening nahi gud night(stresses)kaho..kyun ki ab raat ke 9 bhaj rahi hai..(showing his wrist watch)

ridz:(making innocent face)sorry papa...wo kya hai na hospital mein...

shashank:bas..bas ab hospital ki kahani shuru mat karo...aur waise bhi muje nahi sunna hai tumhari bahane..(showing fake anger he turns his face)

ridz:(by holding ears with baby face) sorry papa...sorry

he smiles and hugs her...

shashank:ridz guess karo aaj humare ghar koun aaye o bhi aapse milne...

she gives puzzled expression...

meanwhile,a girl comes and stands in front of them with folded hands...

hey ridz...

ridz:(with huge smile..)sameera...

she instantly hugs her...
breaks the hug..

ridz:sam wat a pleasant surprise...tu kab aayi...aur muje inform tak nahi kiya ki tu aaj aarahi hai...

sam:surprise..

ridz:(smiles)accha ye batao ki sab kese chal raha hai aur...

shashank interrupts..

shashank:ab batein to hote rahenge...pehle khana khale..?o kya haina buk ke maare meri jaan ja rahi hai..is liye plz...

ridz:o sorry papa..chaliye...
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next day at k.m:
s.d notices geet and meera at door while she is heading towards kitchen..

s.d:are geet bete aap log itni subah subah...

geet comes and hugs her..geet and meera greets her..

s.d:gud mrng bete.waise aap itni excited kyun hai...koi khaas baat?

geet:hmmm...kuch aisa hi hai...aapko thodi der mein pata chaljayega..
         aap bus muje aashirwaad dijiye ki jis kaam ke liye mein jaa rahi
          hoon usmein khamiyab ho jao..

s.d:hamara aashirwad tho hamesha aapke saath hai bete...aap zaroor
      khamiyaab honge..

geet and meera takes her blessings...

geet:accha mama ab hume chalna chahiye..

s.d:are naasta tho karke jaayiye..

geet nods in no..

meera:nahi aunty pehle se hi hum late ho rahe hai...ab hume jaana chahiye...

geet:ha mama..mein aakar khana khalungi..aur ha aap mere liye kheer banadogi na..

s.d:(smiles)ha bete zaroor

geet says bye to her and runs from there holding meera's hand as she is already getting late...

meanwhile,maan comes down from his room..

s.d:ye geet bhi na...(smiles with nodding )

maan:geet...?(excitedly)geet aayi thi kya?

s.d:ha par aap itni excited kyun ho rahe ho?

maan:nahi mama bus aise hi pooch raha tha..waise o itni subah kyun aayi?

s.d:pata nahi bete..kisi jaldi mein thi..keh rahi thi ki use kahi pahunchna hai...

maan:(self thought)jaldi???kya baat ho sakthi hai?

s.d:bete aap dining table par wait kijiye hum aapke liye coffee bijwadethe hai..

maan:ji
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@k.c:

tasha:sasha...mera matlab hai ma'm..ye aadi itna tensed kyun hai aur jaldi mein bhi hai..

sasha:aaj campus selections hai na...is liye

tasha:oh...tho aap bhi ja rahi hai kya?

sasha:kyun nahi jaungi..afterall iam the manager of this company..and how can he decide himself without consulting me..

tasha:(self thought)huh..ye tho aisa keh rahi ki ye khurana constructions ki M.D hai...keh rahi hai ki zarror jayegi jab ki aadi sir ne ise inform bhi nahi kiya..)

sasha:tasha...kya hua?kaha kho gayi thi?

tasha:kuch nahi ma'm

meanwhile,aadi gets every thing ready to go for interviews..

tasha:are aadi sir aap jaa rahe ho..

aadi:ha tasha..

tasha:tho aap shasha ma'm ko bhula kyun nahi rahe ho?

aadi:sasha ko??

tasha:ha..interviews lene ja rahi hai na o bhi aapke saath..

aadi:he...he..nahi tho..mein ne kuch nahi kaha sasha se..waise bhi maan sir muje handle karne ko kaha hai..muje laga ki mein waha sambhalunga aur sasha yaha ka...koi tho hona chahiye na office mein...phir bhi sasha agar tum chalna chahti ho tho chalo...

sasha who is already annoyed with aadi's answer..

sasha:nahi...i mean muje thoda kaam hai mein thodi der mein waha pahunch thi hoon..tum pehle jao..

aadi:teek hai..

sasha:(self thought)is stupid ne tasha ke saamne meri image kharab karke raka hai...agar mein waha nahi gayi tho iske saamne aur kharab hogi meri image..
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interviews starts and aadi is taking many interviews alone..

aadi:ok mr.romeo. aap apna result ke liye wait kijiye..u can go now

romeo:ok..tanq sir

next...

aadi is surprised to see geet entering the room..and same with geet
but he wont react much as he have to complete his task of taking interviews and he is acting as professional..

aadi:take ur seat miss.geet

geet:(with huge smile)tanq bhai...sir..

she completes giving her interview and after sometime he announces the names of selected candidates..

aadi:and the candidates are...

mr.romeo,meera,lucky and...geet

four of them are over whelmed with happiness especially geet as she got the job and that too in maan's company... they congratulate each other...

geet and meera hug each other..

geet:mein ne kaha na ki hume job zaroor milegi...

meera:ha yar...iam very happy

meanwhile,aadi comes to them..

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@hospital:

sid arrives hospital..ridz comes to him..

ridz:good morning sid

sid:(smiles)gud mrng..

ridz:ab uncle kese hai?

sid:he's ok now

ridz:sorry sid mein kal uncle se milne aana chahthi thi par work load itna tha ki...

sid:hey common dear it's ok
waise bhi mein kal ghar pe nahi tha...agar tum aajathi tho bore hojathi

ridz:what??ghar pe nahi the..

sid:ha...tumhe pata hai na ki kal mein,nupur aur jiju geet ke bday ka plan karne gaye the...tho isliye mein nupur ke ghar gaya tha aur pata hai hum logo ne kya plan kiya hai wo..

ridz interrupts...

ridz:pata hai sid kal meri friend aayi thi mumbai se...tum sam ko jaanthe ho na

sid:ha pichli baar aayi thi o hi haina

ridz:hmmm

meanwhile,sid's mobile rings..
he soon finishes his call..

sid:ridz tum keh rahi thi na ki tumhe papa se milne aana tha aur kal aa nahi payi..so u can come today and along with that u can enjoy the party too..

ridz:party???

sid:ha..abhi abhi mom ka phone aaya tha unhone kaha ki aaj ghar pe choti si party i mean get together hai.. papa teek tak ghar aye hai na isi kushi mein..so be ready in the evening..mein tumhe tumhare ghar se pick kardunga..aur ha sam ko bhi keh dena

ridz:ok
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maan:aap kuch bhi kijiye par muje usi design ki chahiye..

man:par sir..

maan:mein kuch nahi sunna chahta hu.muje o design chahiye matlab chahiye..bus

man:ok sir i'll do it.

maan:(self thought)
            hmm tho ready hojao mishty mera surprise ke liye.i promise..mein tumhari ye bday itna spcl banadunga ki tumharri kushi ka koi limit nahi hogi..)
waise meri mishty hai kaha?
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aadi comes to geet and meera:

aadi:congratzzz geet

geet:(smiles)thanx bhaiyya

aadi:congratz meera

meera:(confused)thanx...
aap dono ek doosre ko pehle se jaanthe ho?

geet:ha...o ek badisi kahani hai mein tuje baad mein batadungi..

aadi:waise geet tumhe interview dene ki kya zaroorat thi..maan sir se keh diya hota ki tumhe kc ke saath kaam karna hai..

geet:bhaiyya pehli baat...
          muje pata hi nahi tha ki yaha kc interviews lene aarahi hai
          aur doosri baat muje apni talent se job haasil karni thi na ki koi
           sifaarish se..muje apni kabilyat par poora barosa hai aur dekha
            aaj usi ki wajah se muje job milgayi..haina

aadi:he..he..he u r right geet

geet:waise bhaiyya hamari babhi ji mera matlab hai pinky kesi hai?

aadi:o tho aisa hi hai jaise pehli thi humesha muje pareshan karthi rehthi hai..

geet:aap aisa kyun keh rahe ho..o tho aapse bahuth pyar karthi hai na aur kitna care karthi hai aapka..

aadi:he..he..he care?care tho tab karegi na jab use khane se fursat milti..

geet:bhaiyya...mere paas babhi ka no hai..(she shows her mobile to aadi)

aadi:are geet tum tho seriously le li mein tho mazak kar rah tha..

geet:(smirks)oh really!(meera and geet smiles looking eachother)
          accha bhaiyya ye batao ki maan ko pata hai ki muje kc mein job milgayi?

meanwhile,sasha arrives there and stops at the place where three of them were standing..

aadi:nahi geet abhi tak tho nahi pata..

geet:aur pata chalna bhi nahi chahiye...kyun ki mein maan ko...(she stops)aap samaj rahe hai na..(she winks)

aadi:he..he...samaj gaya..

sasha who overhears them
(selfthought)
o..tho geet select hui hai aur maan sir se chupane ki planning kar rahe hai..teek hai
she gives a evil smile...

ab dekna geet mein kya karthi hu...(smirks)

geet:accha bhaiyya hum chalthe hai..sabko kush kabar bhi sunana hai na..

aadi:ok bye..

precap:

maan:aadi tum abhi ke abhi geet ka appointment order cancel kardo kyun ki geet o job nahi kar rahi hai..

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HAPPY NEW YEAR FRIENDS😊

love u all..

wating for ur comments...😉😉😉

-MONA

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Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

awesome update dear...👏
thank u...
precap is confusing!!...😕
i think maan doesn't misunderstands geet...
par wo kyun aisa keha raha hey..
ho dear can't wait for next part..
continue soon...

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Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Awesome update dear.

Precap seems a bit confusing.

Thanx for pm.

Pls continue soon.

Wishing u and ur loved ones a very very happy, and fun-filled 2012 dear.

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi
awesome update dear...👏
thank u...
precap is confusing!!...😕
i think maan doesn't misunderstands geet...
par wo kyun aisa keha raha hey..
ho dear can't wait for next part..
continue soon...

thanx for ur comments dear😊
u'll come to knw y maan says like that..
will try to update soon...
love u dear