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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

                        LOVE ALWAYS WINS...
recap:
amarnath's operation becomes successful and will be back home after 2 days of his surgery.aadi calls maan and informs him about the interviews they have to conduct the next day but maan asks aadi to handle the intervies by himself...

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frnds iam introducing the new character in this part..

meera kapoor:

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she is friend of geet and studies with her in same college..there is something about her identity and it will be revealed as the story moves forward..

                          part-6
nupur,mayank,sid,geet and s.d assembles at dining table..

s.d: ye nakul kaha chale gaye..
         humein tho unkeliye juice bhijwana tha.koi baath hum khud le
         jaathe hai..

geet: rukhiye aunty..mein hoon na aapko jaane ki kya zaroorat hai..
            aap muje dedijiye mein uncle ko dekar aathi hoon..

s.d: teek hai bete..aur ha jaldi aayiye warna khana tanda hojayega..

geet: ji..mein yu gayi aur yu aayi..

meanwhile,sid gets a message on his mobile..as soon as he reads it a smile appears on his face..nupur notices this...

nupur:(teasingly) lagtha hai kisi khaas ka msg tha..

mayank understands nupur's intentions...

mayank:ha nupur aisa hi lagtha hai tabhi tho sale saheb ka chehra itna khil raha hai...kyun sid sahi kaha ne mein ne..

saying so he hits sid's hand with his..

sid:nahi jiju aisi koi baath nahi hai...

nupur:ooo...sacchi?

sid:nupur tu chup kar aur jiju aap bhi iske saath milke muje ched rahe ho?

mayank:are sid mein tho ye hi keh reh tha ki tum hara koi khaas dost ka msg hoga is liye o msg padthe hi tumhare chehre pe smile aagaya..shayad riddhima ka hoga..hai na nupur..

he winks to nupur while saying this..

nupur:ha..ha waise bhai kya hai msg mein?zara hame bhi tho dikhayiye..

mayank and nupur smiles by seeing each other..

sid: nupur ab chup raho warna maar khayegi..

s.d:ofo..kya hai ye sab?aap log bilkul bacche ki tarah kyun lad rahe ho?kuch der chup nahi reh sakthe.

sid: mom dekhiye na kese ched rahe hai a dono muje..

nupur: nahi maa hum tho bus pooch rahe the ki msg kiska tha.ismein ched ne wali koun si baath hai?

sid:mom..dekha..

s.d:nahi bete humein is mein involve mat kijiye..hume ap logo ke jagde mein padkar paagal nahi ban na hai..
hum tho ja rahe hai maan ko bhulane..

nupur gives victorious smile and sid makes baby face..

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geet enters amarnath's room and she notices that amarnath is in deep thinking...

geet:kya hua uncle?kya soch rahe the aap?
         aisi koun si baath hai jiski soch mein padkar aap mera andar aana bhi notice nahi kiya..

amarnath: nahi bete aisi koi baath nahi hai..bus aise hi..

geet: accha...tho ab aap mujse chupane ki koshish kar rahe hai..

amarnath:ha bete chupa rahe hai..bilkul usi tarah jis tarah aap hum sab se chupayi hai..

geet with puzzled expression asks..

mein ne?mein ne kya chupayi..?

amarnath: aapke aasu.
                    humne aapko dekha hai bete jab hum hospital mein the
                    tab aap sabko himmat di aur sabko sambhala par andar
                    hi andar aap ro rahi thi.. bhale hi hum kamzor the aur hamari haalat teek nahi thii lekin bete hum itni bhi kamzoor bhi nahi the ki apni bachon ke aasu bhi nahi dek sake...

geet had already tears in her eyes...

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                   aapne ne sabke saamne himmat se rahi aur sabko sambhala hai khaas kar s.d aur nupur ko..hume aap par naaz hai bete...

geet hugs him..

geet:pata hai uncle mein ne hamesha aap mein apni papa ko dekha hai aur jab aapko attach aayi thi na mein bahuth dar gayi thi..

he caresses her head..
ha uncle bilkul sahi kaha aapne..mein ne sabse se tho chupa payi lekin aapse nahi chupa paayi..

savitri devi who is listening all this wipes her tears and inturrepts ...

s.d:ye kya baat hui bete..aap ne hum sab ko rone se mana kiya hai na phir aap hi..ye tho galat baat hai na..

geet wipes her tears and smiles..
she touches geet's cheek lovingly and says..

hamari beti bahuth bahadur hai..

she hugs geet...

aur ha kabardar aap phir se hume aunty pukara tho...aaj se aap hume mama bulayenge..

amarnath:aur hume papa..

three of them smiles...

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geet:aunty..oops!mama bhook lagi ab khana khane chale..

s.d:ha bete aap chaliye hum inhe dawayi dekar aathi hai..

geet:ji..

s.d:aur ha bete aap zara maan ko bhulayiye khane ke liye..

geet:ji

geet is searching fo maan..

geet: pata nahi janab kaha hai?

mean while she hears maan's voice who is on phone...

maan:ha mr.chopra muje aapki project ke details bhej diya hai aadi ne bus do dino ke baad hum designs finalize karenge..

mr.chopra:ji mr.khurana jaisa aap kahe.waise humne suna hai ki aap ke papa ke tabiyat teek nahi hai..ab kese hai wo?

maan:he is fn nw

chopra: ok mr.khurana..then we'll meet after 2 days..

when maan turns he finds geet standing in front of him...

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maan smiles at her but geet didnot..she looks at him with irritated face..

maan:kya hua?tum muje aisa kyun dek rahi ho?

geet:kyun nahi deku?aap itna handsome jo hai..

maan understnds that geet is in irritated mood..

maan:ha geet...o tho mein hoon..

geet smirks..and beats him with fake anger.

geet:mein pichle 5 min se yaha khadi hoon aur aap ka wait kar rahi hoon par aapko tho phone se fursat hi mil nahi rahi thi..aur tho aur muje notice hi nahi kiya aapne...
hey babaji!koi itna ignorant kaisa ho saktha hai..ye bhi nahi dekthe ki aas paas koi hai ki nahi..

maan:geet..geet..ek minute..mein tho sirf itna poocha kya hua hai.tumne tho phir se shuru hogayi..kitni bak bak karthi ho tum.tak nahi jaathi kya?

geet makes baby face with her mouth opened..

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geet:mein bak bak karthi hoon?
         chaddo..muje aapse koi baath nahi karni hai.

she turns a side with fake anger..
maan hugs her from back..

maan:bolthi tho bahuth hai lekin accha lagtha hai..pata hai mishty jab tum shekle banathi ho na tab kitni cute lagthi ho..
geet smiles...

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geet:accha ji..

maan:haan ji..

he kisses her cheek..

maan:thank u

geet:kisliye?

maan:hmmm..kya karu babaji meri mishty tho sab kuch samajthi hai phir bhi natak karti hai..

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tho teek hai mein hi batata hoon..thank u isliye kyun ki usdin hospital mein..

before maan could say anything geet turns towards maan and closes his mouth with her hand..
she encircles her hands around maan's neck..

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geet:iski koi zaroorat nahi..aap kabse muje thanq,sorry kehne lage..waise bhi mein ne o sab apne liye ki hai..

maan:matlab?

geet: matlab ye hai ki agar mere maan jinhe mein apni zindagi..sabkuch maanthi hoon..jab woh dooki hai tho mein chain se kese reh sakthii hoon..maan ke saath hamesha rahegi geet tho mushkil gadi mein apne maan ke saath geet na ho aisa ho saktha hai kya?
aur ha ye mat bhuliye ye hum dono ka parivar hai..

ab samji mr.khurana..

maan smiles..
both get lost in each other's eyes..

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at dining table...

nupur:by god..ye geet aur bhai kaha reh gaye...yaha bhook ke mare meri jaan nikaal ja rahi hai..aur ye dono aane ka naam hi nahi le rahe hai..

mayank:waise di hai kaha?

s.d:o..bete humne une maan ko bhulane ke liye bheja pata nahi kaha reh gayi..

sid:o... tho aaj hum khana nahi khane wale shayad

mayank:ha yaar muje bhi aisa hi lag raha hai.

nupur:in dono ke chakkar mein hume bhooki rehna padega kya?

s.d:kuch kaha aapne?
mayank signalls nupur to be calm..

mayank:kuch nahi maa..bus nupur ko ye hi keh raha tha ki apni bhook ko zara control karo..

nupur:maa muje bahuth bhook lag rahi hai..mayank tum jao na jaakar bhai aur geet ko bhulao.

mayank:nupur tum doosro ke liye wait karna kkab seekhogi?thoda control karna seekho..

nupur's face turns red with this word..

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nupur:kya kaha tumne?mein kisi ke kiye wait nahi karti..

mayank dekho pehle se hi bhook ki wajah se mera sar dukh raha hai tum muje aur irritate mat karo..warna mein..

sid interrupts..

nupur tum tho bura maan gayi..jiju tho bus mazak kar raha tha..
kyun jiju?

mayank:(teasingly)ha sid..sahi kaha tumne.ek tum hi tho ho jo muje samajthe ho.tumhari behen ko deko har baath seriously lethi hai..

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nupur:mayank dekho..

s.d:bus bus ab baccho ki tarah ladna band karo..aur nupur aap jaake un dono ko bhula layiye..

nupur smugs and gives a angry look to mayank and then to sid saying...jiju ke chamche..mein tho tumhe baad mein dekhlungi

maan and geet are still lost in each other...

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PRECAP:kya pakde jayenge maaneet?

hey frnds thanks for all ur encourage ment till oe and plz do continue it...

press like button and do comment which means a lot to me either positive or negative and tell me whether iam going very slow..iam doing so becoz iam trying to give nokjhoks and their masti..plz let me know ur opinion..and ha iam sorry for mistakes as iam typing in hurry..

non hindi readers plz forgive me this time for not giving english translations as iam in hurry now..next time i'll definitely give them.so plz forgive me and comment this time..

love u all...
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MONA


link to part7:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2181062/maneet-ff-love-always-wins?pn=31

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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Anusha

@..AnushaGeet..

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Awesome part..! 👍🏼

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

awesome update..
continue soon..

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 13 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Maaneet & Mayur r superb

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

wow!luvd the affectionate reln b/w maan's dad and geet...

update was a cute romantic one..

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

lovely update...i loved every bit of it...especially maaneet's part...n then sid n mayank teasing nupur...awesome...continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...