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SONU_29

@SONU_29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

I agree wid u anu.
Plz jaldi update dena yaar.
Me dying 2 read next part.

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Anupama

@anupm04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Thnx for the note
Waiting for update

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

thanx a lot for the note...

waiting!!!!

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Sneha

@sneha137

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

superb update dear...😛😛😛😛😛
feeling soo sad for maan...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
its high tym geet should realize his love for her...😊😊😊😊😊
poor soul he was not able to answer neone...😭😭😭😭😭😭
thanks for the update nd pm...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
waitinf for more...😉😉😉😉😉
😊

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

i know Anu, i trust you waiting for an update soon 😊

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

Anu, u r updating 2day na?

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#567

loved it

maan is so hurt bcoz of the questions

n poor geet she doesnt know anything only

n precap is awesome plz update soon

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#568

Obviously Maan needs to be punished for what he has done...
Though, it hurts but he deserves that...and he himself has expected this...yeah, readers are finding it a bit slow coz they hardly share any words with each other...but then what will they talk abt...and specially Geet...she is so much scared of the changes in Maan...she was broken...how can we expect that she will change overnight...???

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#569

Lovely update.
Intresting precap, waiting 4 it.

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#570

The way you are treating the story and the characters is just perfect.

People get impatient cuz they want to see Maan Geet together, and for that they sometimes pressurize the author to bend the story. I hope you keep to your plot , and pacing the way you want to.

The hurt and humiliation that Maan gave Geet and the way he broke her confidence , her trust, will need a lot more of his giving and opening himself before she can even think of opening herself up before him.

I , for one, love the sensitivity with which you have carved these characters , and have them responding to the different situations. Of all your FFs , this is one is my favorite.:)

Edited by ninand - 13 years ago

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