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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#551

anu r u upating pls update na dear can't wait for next part

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renjini263

@renjini263

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Awesome update...luved it plzzz continue soon w8ig 4 d nxt update

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Sorry dear if you get hurted by whatever i will write but that is what i think am writing. At first i was very interested in the story line but now i am i feel that you are stretching this FF. I so wanted to see somthing happening between maaneet but nothing is working out. I feel am loosing focus on it. Sorry if i have hurted you but dint like this part.

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kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

awesome update dear but want maaneet problems to end now ...hope to get maaneet moments soon 😊

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saswati_2008

@saswati_2008

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Dear Anshra,

I have read this ff of yours and now completely addicted to it. Dont stop writing as the show is ending as we can relieve maneet moments only though fanfictions. Kindly add me to your PM list.

With love
Sas

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: seemamary
Sorry dear if you get hurted by whatever i will write but that is what i think am writing. At first i was very interested in the story line but now i am i feel that you are stretching this FF. I so wanted to see somthing happening between maaneet but nothing is working out. I feel am loosing focus on it. Sorry if i have hurted you but dint like this part.

THIS IS FOR ALL READERS

Hi Dear... please don't be sorry.. frank views are real guide but please trust me that I am not streching this part... I am actually trying my best to escape this part as fast as possible but I have already said that I am a slow writer... I cannot finish things unless I am myself satisfied with it...

Story really needed to show Maan's repent other wise it would be superficial... along with that I have tried to show how Geet is melting everyday... she has already accept her defeat within but is only holding herself infront of him... she has also started caring for him... everything will come step by step... after going thru pain of so many years how can she at once trust him completely... by his just few acts of softness... she is now also herself thinking of her act...

She went to yash's party... she is not aware that maan has a launch party and he wanted her their... she is following his rule only as not to get involved in his professional life...

Just wait and watch... I already gave in precap the hint that geet is standing by Maan... how you will see in next update...

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meena..

@meena..

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

thanks for note
waiting for next update

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#558

thanks for note dear but pls update soon can't wait more yaar aisa lag raha hai jaise arsa ho gaya hai pls contine soon

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pritm

@pritm

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

it is going at correct direction acording to me
maan gave her that much pain which can't be vanish in few days
geet is also melting slowly
she is also trying to give all her best to ralation
but doesn't want to get heart in return
so she is behaving as she doesn't care in front of maan
maan is now totally understand pain which he give to her
so his efforts are appriciable
precap is curious
really waiting to know what geet does to show she is with maan