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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

THIS IS FOR ALL READERS
Hi Dear... please don't be sorry.. frank views are real guide but please trust me that I am not streching this part... I am actually trying my best to escape this part as fast as possible but I have already said that I am a slow writer... I cannot finish things unless I am myself satisfied with it...
Story really needed to show Maan's repent other wise it would be superficial... along with that I have tried to show how Geet is melting everyday... she has already accept her defeat within but is only holding herself infront of him... she has also started caring for him... everything will come step by step... after going thru pain of so many years how can she at once trust him completely... by his just few acts of softness... she is now also herself thinking of her act...
She went to yash's party... she is not aware that maan has a launch party and he wanted her their... she is following his rule only as not to get involved in his professional life...
Just wait and watch... I already gave in precap the hint that geet is standing by Maan... how you will see in next update...


I love ur writing pace. Yes, Maan cannot just change overnight...he needs to repent and same with Geet...when u have been hurted so much...u just cannot forget everything instantly.
Love the way u write
pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum udpate darling.
Loved each n every part of it.
Haila...😲 ab press conference mein kya hoga
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

loved the update Anu...

Geet came to know of truth and ran to her Maan to be with him...she loves him so much...she may deny...she may steel her heart but at the end she can never see him in pain. only reason she did not melt till now was because she could not trust his words or actions
great update.
Coming to your note honey...I think in one of my comments, I had asked you to amke her melting slow. I had even asked her taht after she recognises Maan's genuine feeling and pain they should togetehr build the relationship back and it should not be a whirwind romance of a sudden. I stand by my words. For me the most beautiful part of this FF is it's pace. I love the slow and gentle way...I love how gradually bit by bit Maan broke Geet...bit by bit he realised his mistake...bit by bit he started expressing and how hopefully in future bit by bit they will come close.
I am sorry if this clashes with views of other reader. But my request will be to not accelerate the pace.


i second it, do not change the pace pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome ! It was very touching, how she realized that this time what he did wad real, what he faced was real.. I loved her sincerity , and her humility in putting all things aside and going to him, apologizing even when she was no way responsible.. aww.. I loved how she hugged him sobbing ..;(

looking forward eagerly to see the press conference ..😎

Update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.


i second it, do not change the pace pls


there is nothing wrong with the pace but...but what geet is doing isn't justified at all. what maan did was horrendous but he was rude to her for the longest b4 getting married. if maan was so mean n cunning then geet shud not have accepted maan.
well the last update was quite sober but sum of the previous ones were highly unethical on geet's behalf. i cannot picture any wife being this rude to any husband. if geet has so many issues with her self respect and maan's egotistic behavior then divorce is a simple solution.
y live with a guy whose any amounts of efforts seem fake to u? she should walk away from such a monster and if she can't then live with her choice and make the most of it.

if u'r answer is that geet has immense luv for maan in her heart then...well then so did maan but he chose to show it other wise from his actions . from her actions, geet is just taking a revenge on maan. she is doing everything that he did. i can't feel sad for such a person. first she let maan insult her...that was wrong and now whn maan is changed ..she has bcome maan. either take it or leave it with dignity.
we r always taught to nvr stoop to a level that's unacceptable to us... i think geet forgot that vital basics of ethics.
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Posted: 13 years ago
my comment about geet doesn't pertain to the last update. it was quite sweet with geet hugging maan. everything can b conquered by luv alone. u go geet 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
atleast geet came to knew about this
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Posted: 13 years ago
wondaful update
feel sowii 4 maan nw
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1


there is nothing wrong with the pace but...but what geet is doing isn't justified at all. what maan did was horrendous but he was rude to her for the longest b4 getting married. if maan was so mean n cunning then geet shud not have accepted maan.
well the last update was quite sober but sum of the previous ones were highly unethical on geet's behalf. i cannot picture any wife being this rude to any husband. if geet has so many issues with her self respect and maan's egotistic behavior then divorce is a simple solution.
y live with a guy whose any amounts of efforts seem fake to u? she should walk away from such a monster and if she can't then live with her choice and make the most of it.

if u'r answer is that geet has immense luv for maan in her heart then...well then so did maan but he chose to show it other wise from his actions . from her actions, geet is just taking a revenge on maan. she is doing everything that he did. i can't feel sad for such a person. first she let maan insult her...that was wrong and now whn maan is changed ..she has bcome maan. either take it or leave it with dignity.
we r always taught to nvr stoop to a level that's unacceptable to us... i think geet forgot that vital basics of ethics.


Basicquestion,

Did Geet have a choice in accepting Maan?

If u look at the FF from the beginning, Maan has the aura of POWER and AUTHORITY over Geet.
In front of Maan Geet lost an aspect of her self...since childhood.

She was unable to speak up to the Maan she so loved to the core of her heart.

She felt that if she would say something..it would hurt and anger him the most and that is why she became MEEK, QUIET and SUBMISSIVE.

She lived with being all of the above for so many years...many many years...that she herself did not realize when her behaviour changes just in front of her Maan...when the marriage proposal came...she was frozen and next thing she knew...she was married to him.

Even when she married him...she fulfilled all her duties and obligations ...not only as per south asian norms but also as a wife who loves her husband.

And what happened? We all know what happened! No need to indulge in that...

Geet is highly unethical - who makes the ethics? Who defines ethics? Not picturing a WIFE being so rude to her husband. Are those not just SOUTH ASIAN norms along with norms in other Asian societies? Why does a wife have go given-in in front of her husband...only because society says?

What is right and wrong? It is merely a vision from your own eye.

She has the option of walking away yes, but u have to remember that she still loves him. Deep within her heart and she is contemplating between believing him and letting her heart believe that he has changed. If she is in the midst of this contemplation where does divorce come in the picture?

She has not given up on him and her..ever...right now she is just in the process ...and it has been ONLY a few months..

It is not revenge at all. It takes time a lot of time for a person to spring back to their original being. Trust was lost here and trusting someone again is not a day, month or year process.

Life just happens. And when life happens u cannot say oh this is what the ethics say..so i have to walk this way...it is hard...

Look at her from just a human being perspective. ...she endured so much in front of her first crush, first love and her husband...

and now that he has changed 360 degree in a matter of 3 months...she is shocked...flabbergasted.

Her heart and mind just cannot seem to accept what is in front of her.

Imagine apprx. 18-20 years of knowing Maan's anger verses 3 months of Maan being a complete romantic, the most loveable guy on this planet.

what would u believe? Can u believe it.
A simple human response is NO.

sorry to say u do not feel for her..but i do...and i totally stand by her.
Love n hugs🤗


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