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Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

👏👏tooo gud👏👏

maaja aa gay😊😊

this is the first time when i feel maan happy😉

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Awesome part.
I loved it.
Geet made pasta for maan. Also feed him.
Bt y maan said to geet k t stay handa house for 7 days??
Maan is planning to meet geet @ handa house interesting.
Waiting for geet 's reaction wen she wil see maan @ handa house.
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

awsome from two updates its really too good ut we all know ki maan ko abhi bahut kuch karna hai aur abhi bhi vo ye nahi samaz paya ki agar use geet ke dard ko kam karna hai to garment venture arrange karke vo kabhi uske kareeb nahi ja payega kyunki geet ke liye bhale hi vo uski ek dream ho par jab tak maan use ye nahi bata deta ki vo use sacha pyar karta hai geet ko maan ke ye surprise itna acha nahi lagega par i really hope ki geet ko iske baare main batane ke pahle maan ko ye sab kuch samaz aa jaye aur jitna busy vo is venture ke liye hai usko thode din side main rakh kar geet se baat karne ki kosish kare usse bata ki vo samaz gaya hai ki ussne use kitna dard diya hai varna maan tum khud jab geet ko ye surprise doge venture wala aur geet ne kuch kah doya to bardaash nahi kar paoge so pls think before taking any step continue soon dear waiting for next part eagerly

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

loved the way your going keep it up😊

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Wow u r giving us 1 more update anu. Yupieee. Thanx alot

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Hello Di

How r u?

First things first regarding ur note yes I agree with u completly ek baar trust tooth gaya toh usse dubara haasil karna kafi mushkil hai so mujhe pata hai it will take sometime

now the update

hmm... well i must say i m really impressed with maan kya soch hai yes Mr. pehle wale Khadoos singh khurana u r right tumne jitna dard aur gussa geet k dil mein bhara hai usse tumhe issi tarah bahar lana hoga once it is out then only your love can make a place in her heart

hmm... I really love the way Geet is opening up i mean gussa hi sahi kum se kum maan se baat toh kar rahi hai

but poor soul i could actually feel her pain with her self thought

It all looked like a dream, only if this was true…. She knew very well Maan was trying to wind her up in this trance world and once she was trapped he will mercilessly break this trance and she will be left completely shattered in the cruel reality….

Only if this was true it would be so perfect but she knew it was all illusion and she have to keep herself safe from falling in the illusion…. She wil have to keep away from him in any case….

ok so Maan ne geet ko keh diya k 7 dino tak yaha mat aana aww...geet ka reply don't do anything to call me here hehe dekha geet khud ki baato mein phas gayina ab maan ne tumhari dil ki chori pakad li maine kab tumhe bulaya hehe

Geet isse dil ki zaban kehthe hai u love him but u r afraid that he may once again break ur heart but the day u realize that now he has changed for real ur heart will b at peace

ohoh so Mr. Khurana geet se milne uske mayke jaayenge tab toh bda maza aayegaji

waiting for the next part Di

love u

urs Piya