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@lalitha..

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

nice update

waiting 4 next update

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

loved it,

he used all his MSK traits to get to her .. be it her anger, annoyance or arguments

and will he go after her?

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Nazma 'Imran Khan' Majeed

@Nazmaa

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

I'm sorry to say but I'm not liking the pace of this story.
Hate seeing Maan in guilt.
Hopefully will see Maaneet together.

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

am glad taht maan is changing

n geet is speaking up

maans assumption is right

geet first needs to remove all the pain from her system

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Awesome update..loved it..maan is sweet but he needs more hard work..poor geet..confused..

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tashu_me

@tashu_me

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Loving every bit of the story... outstanding from the beginning till now...

Plzz update soon :)

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Awesome. Maza aa gaya. But MaanJi, u will have to work harD to gain her trust.

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

lovely lovely lovely . I enjoyed to d core. so, cute update .
He wanted to make her surrounding from inside and outside to be light and happy to get her out of the pain that has been built very deep within her….

loved these lines from maan . maan understood the depthness of pain he had given to her . And he also understands he is dealing with pain and distrust of geet . so, he has to do very slowly and calmly . Loved d way he trying to bring her back . just loved it and great going .