MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 57

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Awesome update!!!!!! loved it... w8ing 4 maans surprise nd geets reaction loved d banner tooo loved geets antics... plzzz cont soon w8ing

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chapter 19:

Maan decided to give surprise to geet. He requested di that we all go for bombay for outing. So maan, geet, karthik, krishna, sudha started their packing. Yash told he will join the next day. They all went to airport n boarded the flight. Maan n geet sat in on one side n other 3 on the other side. They boarded 7 pm flight they reach bombay at 9:30 pm. Its time to take off of flight they tightened their seat belts. Geet holded maan's hand tightly. She is afraid of flights she dont see outside during the journey. Maan side hugged her n told her to close the eyes. Geet did the same. Once the flight taken off they loosened their seat belt but due to sudden plan n packing, booking all r feeling very tired. As it is a two n half hour journey they decided to rest.

Geet kept her head on maan's shoulder n hugged him tight. Maan caressed her hair n asked

kya hua geet? Tak gayi ho?

Hmm replied geet.

Thik hain thodi der so jao. I will wake u up when we reach bombay.

Ok maan n she cuddled more to maan. He kept his hand on her shoulder n kissed her forehead. He was just staring at her n after sometime he too dossed off. Krishna n sudha saw them n smiled seeing love birds. Karthik saw them smiling n asked

y u r smiling?

They both eyed to maan n geet. He followed their gaze n saw them n turned to krishna n di

what happened? They r sleeping na

they both rolled their eyes n said

u r a big buddhu.

Karthik made a weired face n told arey kuch tho batao?

They both want to bang his head somewhere but controlled n asked

tumko kya lagta hain unn dono ko dekhkar. Asked di

Kisi ko bhi kya lagta hain they both r sleeping.

Now they literally banged their heads.

Karthik tum itne buddhu ho yaar told krishna.

Mera taareef karna band karo aur bolo kya baat hain bro.

Ha isiliye kal engagement party mein he was drolling over shanti. Ek baar baat tak nahi kiya.

Karthik was shocked to listen this

di wo.. wo.. mein.. mein..

mein mein kya aage bolo.

wo.. di.. mein.. kuch kuch nahi di. Aap aaram kijiye.

But di is in no mood to leave him she got a good chance to tease her brothers. Yesterday maan n today karthik. She is enjoying see their plight.

arey arey batao kya baat hain said in a teasing voice.

Krishna too joined her arey karthik batao batao.

He just glared at them but they didnt care. With no other option he took a deep breath n told

di n bro I love shanti.

Oyyy hoyee mera bhai sachi??? asked krishna

karthik smiled shyly.

Omg.. karthik u r blushing asked di.

Stop it yaar. Plz requested karthik.

Waise first talk to her nicely. Sharmana band karo n try to propose her. Learn something from ur bro yaar told krishna.

Learn from bro? Matlab?

How u r doing MBBS? Huh!! geet teri bhabhi banne wali hain.

oh... WHAT???? shouted karthik.

Shhh dont shout.

Really? Sachi?

Hey really n sachi both r same n yes they both love each other. Maan planned surprise for geet.

Karthik is very very happy. His best friend geet is his would be bhabhi. He just turned to them n smiled.

Karthik (st) : wow bro n geet I am very happy for u both. Yay.. now I can take some tips from u. first I should tell geet that I love shanti. What will be bro's n geet's reaction muje abi se darr lag raga hain. Cool karthik cool delhi jaane ke baad yeh sab socho. Now u enjoy. Waise bro main aapse bohot naraz hu aapne muje nahi bataya. Thik wo bhi dekhti hu.

After 2 hours they reached bombay. Maan tried to wake up geet

geet utho. See we reached bombay.

Geet stried a little.

Geetu utho na.

Ummm slowly she opened her eyes.

Geet seat belt tight karo.

They landed in bombay airport. Took their luggage n came out of the airport. They were searching for the car as it is very crowded. Suddenly they a voice from back

want lift??

they all turned back.

Yash... shouted sudha.

She went n hugged him. She is very happy seeing him here. They broke the hug n sudha asked

u told that u will come tomorrow.

Hmmm u sounded so sad n muje bura laga so I came. Saying so he hugged her.

All others smiled seeing them n happy for both of them.

Oyy romance baad mein karna n yeh tho public place hain teased geet.

They broke the hug n sudha blushed. Yash told

saali ji u wont leave a single chance to tease us rite?

Yeh saali ka haq hain apni jiju ko tease karna.

Ha ha dont worry geet we too will get chance told di.

Tab dekhte hain di. Abi se kyun?

Maan thought sirf ek din geet.

Di smiled at her n told very soon geet.

They all left from there n went to the hotel. They booked 6 rooms.2 Attached rooms for maan-geet, yash-sudha so that they sneak to others room at any time. For krishna n karthik seperate rooms.

They all went to their respective rooms n freahen up. After some time all went to dinner. They enjoyed a lot cracking jokes, pulling each others leg. They r having full hangama. All of them ordered their food. After dinner all bid good night n had a sound sleep. As all r very tired they dossed off immediately.

Next day morning better say afternoon they all woke up at 1 pm. (sach mein sab log kumbakaran hain.. ufff kitne soote hain.. ) when they all got ready its already 2 pm. So they decided to have breakfast/lunch. In the evening girls (geet n sudha) went for shopping. Bechara boys just follwed them holding their shopping bags. But their shopping never come to an end so they dragged both of them out of the mall. When they r coming back in one of the mall maan saw a beautiful red saree. He imagined geet in that saree. Immediately he went to that mall n bought that saree. Its almost 6 in the evening all r in the garden of that hotel n having fun but maan is missing. Just then geet got a msg to her mobile. She opened the msg it was from maan

mishty go to ur room. There is a surprise for u.

geet smiled reading that msg.

Guys I am very tired I will go n rest.

Others just nodded but they know whats the reason except yash.

Geet went to her room but found nothing. She was disappointed but her eyes caught a packet on the table. She excitingly took the packet n there is a letter in that

dear mishty,

wear this saree n be ready by 8 pm. Come to the entrance of the hotel a car will be waiting for u. he will drop u to the destination. Dont be tensed to come alone I will be watching u. waiting for u mishty

with love,

ur maan.

She carassed the 'ur maan' a smile automatically crept on her lips. She opened the packet n saw a beautiful red saree. She loved the saree. Immediately without wasting time she went to washroom had a bath. She came out wearing bathrobe n took the saree. She is feeling very shy wearing the saree because it is a backless blouse only supported with one string. But somehow she wore the saree. She left her neck bare n a matching earrings n a little makeup n a baby pink colour lipgloss. She left her hair open. Small strings of hair r teasing on her face. Even with the little makeup she is looking like an angel. She sat on the bed feeling nervous. She dont know why maan gave her to wear this saree n a surprise (guys geet dont know that maan too loves her so she is confused.. ). she checked herself once again in the mirror n setting her saree once again.

(this is geet's saree)

Main thik tho lag rahi hu na thought geet.

She saw the time only 5 min more for 8pm.

Sirf 5 min hain ab muje jaana hoga.

As it is a backless blouse n a bit revealing so she tugged shawl around her n went towards the entrance.

She saw a car waiting for her. Geet got into the car n driver started. The drive was silent n she is nervous. After 1 hour she reached the destination. The driver stooped the car n opened the door. Geet got down from the car. She once again checked herself n due to nervousness n the area is so dark she started cluching her pallu. She heard the sounds of waves which r so pleasant. Then she understood that she is in beach. But when she turned around she expected people around in the beach but to her surprise there r no one there she is alone standing there. Even maan is also not visible. But she doesnt know that maan is watching her.

When she got down from the car maan saw her from the other side n mesmeried by her beauty. She is looking like an angel in the moon light. He is observing her each n every move. Cluching her pallu, shivering lips due to nervousness, a smile formed when she understood that she is in beach. Maan is just staring at her.

On the other hand yash asked sudha for a date. She happily agreed for this. He booked a hall in the hotel. Sudha wore beautiful baby pink saree n yash is in his casuals but looking hot. When sudha entered the hall it was very dark. She reached the middle of the hall suddenly the lights r on. She was surprised by seeing the hall.

Precap: hmmm I think u all can guess. 😳

Hi friends here is part 19. hope u all like it.

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