SS..Pyar ka anokha safar updated part 4 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
lovely update but short one😊 continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
sweet update
both trying to understand each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
awesome update 👏
i loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Maaneet monologue was cute😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys from now i will write geet and maan's monologue in red and blue to ur better understanding...

Part 2


when they reach in the khurana house they broke their gaze.they silently walked through the door.both felt a strange sensetion in their heart entering a new phase of their life.elder's open the door for their new bride with a thali in their hand for performing the rituals.geet felt strange around with strangers which are now her family.

after performing the rituals dadima took geet with her and made her sat on the sofa.she looked at the whole house and persons.dadima understood her situation.she tried to comfort her.

aao beta hum tumhe saab se milate hai..
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geet smiled warmly looking at her.

wow dadima kitni cute hai..she wants to pacify me...atleast inki dadi to thodi baat karte hai...warna ye to jaise bol hi nahi sakte hai...she looked at him.

ye mujhe aise kyu dekh rahi hai...aab maine kya kia...aab to main kuch bola bhi nahi...


their eyes locked again.dadima broke their eyelock by her talk.

geet bete ye hai maan ki chote bhai dev and behen anny...she indicated them.
geet saw a handsome man exactly opposite of maan in nature smiled at her warmly and a 18 years cute girl came towards her with her brother.she instantly like both of them.

they both introduce and greet geet.geet felt that it's like her own house.they all r so friendly and kind.her uneasyness vanish in a minute.

then anny and her friends took her to maan's room and made her sat in the bed.they all teased her sometime then went away.geet sat their alone feeling nervous and awkard.she just couldn't accept the fact even now that her life changes drastically.she now a daugter in law of a family,wife of a person.she sat their thinking about her life.

maan enter the room after a lot of hesitation.it's his room earliar now he is feeling uncomfortable entering his room.when he stepped in he saw geet sat in the bed like a red rose.he forgot everything and just kept watching her.

geet saw him entering from corner of her eyes and felt more conscious.she hide her feet inside her lehenga.maan saw it and realize that she also feel the same like him.

she is feeling nervous honi hi hai...we don't even know each other and now have to share a room and even the same bed.i should make her feel comfortable.per kaise karu..ek to mujhse kuch bola nahi jata uparse now i m more nervous.kya karu...atleast baat shuru karta hu...

umm...i was saying...i mean..dam why am i fumbling now she surely thought i hav some problem in talking.let me try again..

wo main keh raha tha k tum thak gayi hogi chao to change karlo...tumhare kapre dadima ne almari me set kardi hai...hfff..i said the whole sentence in one go...now i feel better
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he freed his breath which he caught after saying the word.geet looked at him with confused eyes.

ye kya bol rahe hain...today is our wedding night and he is saying to me that i should change and sleep.suhag raat me saab atleast ekdusre ko janne ki kosish karte hai...and we need it more but this dumbo to sone ki jaldi hai...waise mujhe kya..mujhe bhi nind arahi hai...i need sleep...

then it stuck her...

arre wo to mere lie sleep k baat kar rahe hain..he knew main thak gayi hu..baate to kal bhi kar sakte hai...
ohh maine unhe dumbo keh dia...i m such a stupid...wo kitni caring hain...wo dumbo nahio geet tu dumbo hai..
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she cursed herself and first time looked at him with admiration.

maan can't take her gaze.he feel heat in every part of body seeing feelings for him in her beautiful eyes.

after sometime they both changed and laid on the bed far from each other to give other more space.it felt awekward to both of them sharing bed with others but they also felt strange excitement.they laid facing back to each other and cherish this moment and drifted in to sleep...


Love
Saki
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesum ss
Loved maaneet. .
Edited by luv_DD - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
luving deir new safar...
missing deir convo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
so nice
one moment they think about their feeling and then they think about each other and give all the comfort
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2 is excellence... i can feel myself into it... because i am feeling the same when i think about the marriage...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
awesome😃 love love loved it...
continue soon dear!!!

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