SS..Pyar ka anokha safar updated part 4

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

I am so excited to read another story by you!:)

continue soon!

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krati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

i love d prologue... i don't knw d story so cn't be close to choose d title but wht abt "bubbles of happiness"... well 4m my point of view i dn't knw wht it contains... whthr it'll be happy or sad... but they r married nd dn't knw each-other... at d strtng time she thinks nw her life is gng to be full of happiness.. as evry gal will think.. so does it remains so or ws an illusion... i dn't knw d content of story through prologur i just come up wd ds thought... sry if its inappropriate... nywys continue soon... nd thnks 4 pm

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shweta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

luv the last part.intro of maan😊

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

this looks sweet

she already likes his name

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SONU_29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

great start👏

interesting ss

plz continue soon

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Angel..Drashti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

part 1

both maan and geet sitting in the car after geet's bidayi.they went to maan's house.both are alone in the car.other's were coming from different car.

poor girl kitni ro rahi thi..it's going hard na to leave your parents and try to live with a differecircumustances.i should console her..i m her husband.wo shayad expect kar rahi hogi..but how to ask her.why i m like this god...mujhe apni baat khulke bolna kyu nahi aata...why i m not able to show my emotion...
ek kam karta hu baat shuru karne ki try karta hu...

umm..r u feeling cold...?AC off krdu...?

God main bolne kya gayi tha aur kya bol raha hu...now sure she will think that i m fool..

uff ye to kuch bol hi nahi rahe hai...kahi ye bol inko bolna nahi aata..god why u do that with me..aab main kaise baat shuru karu...waise bhi mujhe itni rona aa rahi hai...he didn't even try to console me or try to talk with me..aur aab bole bhi to kya...ac off kardu...mujhe thand kyu lagegi..itni heavy jwellary and cloths pehnke meri garmi se dum nikal rahi hai...uff..gadha kahi ka...

nahi main thik hu...i said with irritation.

ohh..actualy i was trying to ask that u r fine...?i know it's hard to leave your parents and lived with a stranger...i said with a little hesitant .pata nahi how she react.

wow ye to utni bhi bura nahi hai..he is trying to console me...
yes..i m fine..i feel sad but it's natural for every girl...i said with little smile.

wow..she looked so sweet when she smile and that dimple made my herat beat fast.i just stared towards her as if im in trance.this is my wife i can't belief the fact.she is so beautiful.

why he looking at me like this.i am feeling goosebumps.i try to look everywhere except her.but my gaze unwantedly went towards him and our eye's lock.

their eyelock broke at the jerk of the car.it stopped in front of khurana mansion.they both try to hide their flushed face from each long other.

love
saki

Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago