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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene436 Karan prank on Arjun

Arjun is crying even more not crying literally sobbing now. His Karan who is 8 years younger than him like a son to him is advising him like a concerned parent and then saying sorry also after showing so much concern. which brother will not cry? If he had got such advice so much love in childhood who would have become a criminal who would have gone in wrong path not him for sure. How much love and concern his brother has for a stranger a friend whom he knows for 3 months only also?

Karan has no clue how to make sobbing elders to stop. kids is easy tell jokes or stories and cuddle them and kiss them and tickle them in their stomach like he does for his baby. He looks at Arjun cuddling him is out of question imagine 130 Kg Karan trying to cuddle 80KG Arjun bad idea. Karan shakes his head bad idea.
Karan: Stop crying Arjun? I am sorry

Arjun not stopping.

Karan threatens: If you do not stop crying in next one minute I will start tickling you in stomach like I do to chutki

Arjun looks shocked at Karan. Karan takes his hand to his stomach. Arjun has a smile and then cannot control his laughter and literally holds his stomach and laughs. Karan smiles OK trick worked. Now Arjun cannot stop his laughter at all. He is turning red laughing so much.
How to make him stop simple? With Gunjan its lizard and with Arjun its Cockroach

Karan : Cockroach

Arjun stops and screams: Cockroach where where?

Arjun jumps on bed and stands and looks around in fear.

He has forgotten all pain in leg, all advice from Karan full focus on cockroach.

Karan gets excited: Fooled you buddy fooled you buddy he laughs clapping his hands like a small kid very happy

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
aww! karan is such a sweetheart!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene437 Arjun-Karan's boy play

Arjun has never ever seen Karan acting his age he always acts serious like a 50 year old. But today he atlast is acting his age.

Arjun stares at him: How dare someone fool him that too his own baby brother?

Arjun reaches for his throat first. You you are fooling me and then holds his hands and wrestles him on the bed. Fooling your bhaiddyyy haan. I will show you what it is to scare me haaan.
Arjun pulls Karan on bed and tickles him so much that Karan has tears laughing. Leave me sorry sorry leave me Arjun leave me buddy he begs. Atlast Arjun leaves him.
Karan is still laughing with tears in his eyes. He has turned tomato red on cheeks. He coughs and keeps laughing with tears now flowing from his eyes non stop. Karan has never laughed so much for ages.

Arjun thinks his tears are because he laughed so much but Karan knows its something else that brought tears in his eyes. Karan sits on bed and holds Arjun's hand. He is choking on his tears.

Karan gets up: Bathroom

Arjun shows the direction

Karan runs into the bathroom locks it and breaks down crying. Second time in front of Arjun he let go off his guard and his inner turmoil came out in form of tears. But Arjun did not recognize his tears felt they were tears from laughing thank GOD. After 5 minutes he comes back washing his face.

Arjun holds his hand: Thanks a lot Karan. I love you very much and kisses him on his cheek

Karan pushes him off: I have seen how much you love me. This is last time I am helping you OK. Next time I will only go and tell police to arrest my mad friend and throw key in sea so that he never comes out else he will keep risking his life for family, friends and strangers also

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 438 Karan's idea to bring Arjun to correct path

Arjun: OK Sir, I will keep quiet. You scold me how much ever you want

Karan: Am I your nursery school teacher to scold you? I am telling you as a well wisher. So till now whatever I told you thought scolding and forgot

Arjun murmuring: My nursery school teacher and all other teachers together also never took so much class for me in life

Karan: I heard that

Arjun: Oh sorry. Your ears are very sharp.

Karan stares at him: You need a mother like my mom who will keep tabs on you and punish you if you do mistakes. And who holds your ears and twists them till they go blood red and give you two three slaps once in a while. Then you will become fine.
Arjun curious: Really. How does your mom do show me?
Karan holds his ears and shows him how Yashodhara twists his ears as punishment

Arjun: Ouch Karan leave my ears. Its paining I may go deaf

Karan: My mom twists it more badly. I am doing it lightly
Arjun: This is only so painful. More bad than this I may start crying. How did you not go deaf till now? Mom must be doing it very rarely for you.

Karan: Rarely. She does it once a week or more.

Arjun: How else she punishes you?

Karan: Do not ask buddy. slaps, push ups, no dinners, uthak baithak, run around stadium a

Arjun: Enough enough. I am getting scared of your mom. No wonder you and Gunjan are so good natured

Karan smiles: And her tanas are the best part. You will regret doing a very small mistake. My dadaji and dad also get scolded by her often no one is spared in house from her strict vigil.

Arjun smiles. So mom scolds his daddy and dadaji also.

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
yashu is a strict mom... a mom arjun so desperately needs...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww loving d karan arjun bonding😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg why Karan sad n cried ?? I think Karan knows about the truth of arjun !!!!
Anyway prem again excellent
I hooked to this story please give some hint of arjun to sisodiya family cuz its really needed now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene439 Karan's fear

Karan continues: My dad says she acts like mother to dadaji and him also apart from me and chutki. She is the life and anchor of our house. (Karan lost in his mothers thoughts)

Arjun thinking: Yes Karan, I have never had a real mother. But I can understand a house with a mother can never be sad and children who have mothers as nice as ours can never go wrong.

Arjun shakes his hand: Karan Karan

Karan comes out of thoughts: Yes

Arjun: You love your mother a lot na

Karan smiles

Arjun: I understand having a mother around house brings so much happiness and peace and love. And with a mother as loving as yours children can never go in wrong path. They will become great people like you and Gunjan

Karan smiles: If I do something wrong I get more scared to answer mom than GOD and law. How will I face her?

Karan thinking: And I know what I did yesterday night is a big crime. How shall I meet my mother's eyes after going back home? Hope she never comes in front else I will not be able to meet her eyes. Why why did my heart want to save Arjun? He is just a friend I know from 3 months. Yet the thought of him going to jail made me commit a big mistake very big sin. Why did my heart fear and mind tell me to save him from police why? May be because he saved chutki his karz ka bhoj made me do something unlawful for him to hide from police the fact that I know he was present at that place of gang war.
Arjun: Karan Karan what are you thinking?

Karan: Nothing

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene440 Arjun's promise

After sometime

Karan: Arjun promise me you will not do anything unlawful ever again for your family

Arjun looks at Karan with wet eyes. Karan is truly a sweet heart.

Arjun with wet eyes: Promise

Karan: Not like that. My mom usually takes promise on her. She says children never break promise if they make promise on mother. So you also promise on your mother

Arjun thinking: my mother is already dead and gone

Arjun remembers Yashodhara.

Arjun in tears: Promise on my mother

Karan: See if you break promise something will happen to your mother

Arjun in tears thinking: My mother is your mother baby. I will never do anything that will endanger our mother's life promise.

Karan: Now why are you crying?

Arjun: Nothing

Karan: Tell me no

Arjun: I miss my mother

Karan: Go and meet her no. She is in Chandigarh only no

Arjun: Yes (thinking-but she does not know I am her son)

Karan thinking: Very sorry God, mom and dad. I have went against your values and teachings today second time in life for a friend. Very sorry.

Arjun: What happened Karan? You look upset

Karan: Nothing

Arjun: Tell no please

Karan: Nothing Arjun

Door bell rings and Rocky, Raj and Reshma have come back.

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nic updates...waiting for the next part!!!😊

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