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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

when will karan know he is his brother?don't take story round and round at least disclose the truth to karan or rps it is now time to revel the truth.

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

karan's heart knows arjun is more than a friend... he is his brother... no matter how much you are angry at your siblings you can't hate them or see harm come to them...

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Scene441 Three muskuteers

Karan opens door.

Karan: Ooo OHhh you both do not walk all over me

Raj and Blacky jump right on Karan and Blacky is standing on his hind legs on Karan and Raj wants to be lifted by Karan. Both forget Arjun when they are in company of Karan. Because Karan has a child like innocence and he plays with them going down to their level. He never scolds them for injuring him or hurting him. He becomes a kid with them and they both can be carefree in his company.

Arjun looks and smiles at them. What a cute picture the three make. Add to that Gunjan and you have the three musketeers and the dog team.

Karan lifts Raj and Blacky and gets them to Arjun's room. Both refuse to get down from his hands and want him to hold them in his hands longer. Blacky is busy licking Karan's face.

Arjun laughs: Blacky and Raj like you very much and do not want to leave you it seems

Raj: Uncle stay in our house no we will play

Karan: Not today Raj. I have some work.

Raj sad. Karan promises him to come next time and play at his house.

Karan smiles: I am leaving. Raj take care of your father OK. And call me if he or you need anything

Raj: Ok Uncle

Arjun: Have breakfast and go

Karan: No thanks. Mom is waiting for me. Thanks and Bye all of you and leaves

Karan upset he realized what a grave crime he had done by helping save Arjun.

Karan returns home and the security incharge person Eshan comes in front. Karan bends his head feeling guilty of yesterday night lies.

Security incharge: Karan Karan beta

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Scene442 Karan's guilty conscience

Karan goes to him bend eyes: Yes yes uncle

Security incharge: Why did you tell such a big lie to police yesterday?

Karan: Sorry very sorry uncle. I

Security incharge: No we understand, Arjun helped Gunjan a lot you wanted to return the favour right

Karan: Yes, buttt I am feeling bad about it very bad uncle.

Security incharge: Do not worry God knows you did not do it with bad intentions.

Karan starts thinking: Uncle is right but I lied knowingly to police, I must do penance then only my mind will be at peace. But what penance shall I do? What I did yesterday was a crime not a simple lie? How shall I absolve myself of this grave crime?

Yashu is busy dressing up: Karan, you came

Karan nervous in fear: Yes mom

Yashu: Sorry baby, yesterday I was a bit tired and slept off before you came home. Did you have dinner I had kept on table?

Karan: No mama was not hungry

Yashu:Where did you go after conference yesterday?

Karan bends his eyes not able to meet his mother's eyes: I went with friends

Yashu: OK, Vikram told you had left with Arjun and told your security and others to leave without you. So did you enjoy with friends?

Karan: Hmmm

Yashu: Be careful beta when you go out with friends in clubs and party OK.

Karan: Ok mom

Yashu: And just check how your friends are, many have dark past but do not reveal because they want to get close to you as you are rich and royal. As much as possible do not reveal to others your identity. World is very bad outside look at those Ahluwaliah's.

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Good update prem - pls continue

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Scene 443 Yashu's punishment for Karan

Karan feels terribly guilty first he hid that Arohi was Arjun's wife, now he has done an even bigger crime by saving Arjun from police by lying.

Karan kneels in front of his mother and touches her feet with his hands: Sorry mama

Yashu surprised: Why?

Karan thinking: I went against your values, yesterday night I committed the biggest sin of my life not even sin a grave crime by saving Arjun from police. I have sinned against you mama. I am feeling guilty and terrible since that moment that I betrayed your trust

Karan: I I because I I and takes his mother's hands and slaps himself hard twice-thrice

Yashu withdraws her hand shocked: Karan, what are you doing?

Karan keeps head on his mother's lap and in tears: I am a very bad son mama, I should be punished

Yashu caresses his hair: Why beta?

Karan: Because Because

Yashu tensed: Because

Karan grumbling: I do not listen to you, I am very bad sonnn

Yashu smiles: Mad boy, that's all is it. I got scared what you had done?

Karan in tears: Punish me mama, pleaseee I am not at all good

Yashu: Stop joking beta, get up

Karan: No mama, please I am feeling guilty in my heart. Punish me

Yashu assumes strict tone: Hmmm, you have to be punished and badlyyy

Karan looks at her. Yes, he has done a big crime, his mother should punish him badlyyy. Then only his guilt will reduce.

Yashu: Let me thinkkk may be I must take your dadaji's chaadi and hit youuu, no noo what about kneeling down full day outside in hottt sunnn, no nooo what about no food full dayyy, Orrr

Yashu: Yesss, you do 1000 push ups in hot sunnn that's a good punishment for disobeying your mama what do you say? And laughs

Gunjan comes running inside: Mamaaa breakfasttt my stomach is growling

Karan wipes his tears and looks at Gunjan

Gunjan: Mamaaa, you again punished Baaa with kneel down very bad very bad poor Baaa looks to be crying also. I will call dad and tell mama punishing Ba and Baa is cryinggg

Karan holds her hand: No chutki, I wanted to just sleep on mama's lap so I kneel down. Then I remembered childhood and got tears in eyes. Mama did not punish meee

Gunjan: OK, then lets go for breakfast come and pulls Karan for breakfast

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Scene444 Karan punishing himself

Its 1pm lunch break. Karan not to be seen around in his room or with Gunjan. Yashu sends Gunjan to go searching for him to get him for lunch. He is nowhere, finally Gunjan goes to the stadium. There in hot blistering May sun Karan is doing push ups on the track.

Gunjan runs to him: Baaa, what are you doing?

Karan gasping for breath: Push ups chutkiii

Gunjan looks at him sweating badly: Whyyy?

Karan: Nothing youuu gooo

Gunjan: But your hand is getting blistered. Stop ittt

Karan refuses to stop and continues 891, 892,

Gunjan: Did mom punish you?

Karan keeps quiet: 895, 896

Gunjan: Yes, morning mom was saying 1000 push ups in hot sun that's why you are doing?

Karan dead tired does not reply and keeps doing

Gunjan looks at his hand palms have blisters and sits and tries to pull his hand: Baaa your hand is hurt

Karan: Let it youuu gooo

Gunjan: But ma, said come for lunchhh

Karan: I will come another 15 minutes

Gunjan runs to mother: Mummy, Baaa is doing pushups in hot sun, his hand has got blisters. He is not listening to stop.

Yashu shocked: Blistersss

Yashu runs to stadium: Karannn

Karan: 957, 958

Yashu: Karan, what are you doing?

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

good one prem - please continue

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: mysticlover
what is karan doing?

Karan is brought up by family in an idealistic way and Karan feels he has done a great crime by saving Arjun. At that moment he saved Arjun by lying but now is scared and upset and wants to remove that guilt from his heart. Hence he asks advice from his security incharge and also asks his mother indirectly how to commpensate for his crime. Karan thinks that as his mother suggested by doing 1000 push ups his crime will turn to good and God will not punish him or his family for that crime that he committed knowinlgy in future

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Oh god I think if Karan feel guilt then he Thot his inner side tht arjun was wrong !! So there is no need for Karan show off love like buddy n all ,, n arjun told him tht already he save his brother n shot so why he felt guilty !!!!

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