NEWFF MAANEET MERE HUMSAFAR THRD 7 Upd pt69 pg127 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG so horrified
after all was wonderful superb update
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thrilling update
waiting for more
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow luvd da twist
plzzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey piya
fantasic part
sachi agar jo tumne likha hai waisa agar onscreen portray karte to main to wahi dher ho jati... Hai...
Jab tak next part atta hai main ise dreamily visualise karti hu.;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...
omg wht a twist...
hope maneet are fine...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Action packed update with apt pictures!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey Piya...finally am here...actually wasn't at home for 2 days...can u imagine it??? how much i missed u...n then was at the beach the whole day today...hihi...


ok...update now...geet keeps a diary...awww...never knew about this...i wonder whether this diary will play something in their lives later on...coz tumhaara kuch nnahi kehsakte...i mean u r an on the spot writer...i would really love this though...after all it's only for special ones likes geet said...not aire gaire...


waise...maan;s badla...i wonder what will it be...i guess it will be his kisses...hihi...kyunke aaj kal maan is being very shararati...hihi...kisses k aage usse kuch soojhta hi nahi...lol...


oops...maan losing geet from his sight...bad signal...kuch boora to zaroor hone waala hain...but kya...me wondering...ayr upar se...geet in isolated place...this isnt good sign at all...


oh no...geet witnessed a murder...it must have been a definite trauma for her...i mean seeing someone killing another person...my poor baby...maan kahaan hain yaar...poor soul...ab she will be so dari dari all the time...aisa mere ko lagta hain...only maan is her saviour now...


thnk god maan came at the right moment...not that i was doubting it...but still...n then maan with his tai chi rocked...i loved the fight sequence...poor geet...she still seems frightened...


ab kya hoga...SIRF PIYA HI JAANE...hihih...


continue soon darling...me wanna read more now...haha...i know am being greedy...but kya karen...u r keeping me hooked on to it now...


continue soon n thnxxx...

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Posted: 13 years ago
piya awesome update
but very scary . just
can't wait now next
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was SUPER DHAMAKEDAR ACTION PACKED THRILLING UPDATE yaar...
Maan ko fight karte hue imagine karke mazaa aa gaya...thanks for d awsome action part dear...
ab start se...
maan geet ko tease karne ka ek chance nahin chhod sakta by god...uff iski sharartein, jhooti arrogance n their nok jhok...SO CUTE!!!!!!😊😆😆
luved every bit of it...😃
kar di na gadbad geet ko tease krne k chakkar mein khuranaji lo ab madam naraz aur challenge kar diya pakadne ko...
oh god yaar itna brutal murder bechari geet ka masoom dil kaise jhel payega...but ye maan ke pyaar ka asar hai ki a bit of her mind was still working n she ran to save herself for her maan...
itne shock mein bhi geet maan ko nahin bhooli n she shouted his name for help...dat bit was truly touching dear...
maan in action was really hot yaar i just luv seeing guru in action n upar se ur awsome description aisa laga nazron ke saamne dekh rahi hoon...thank u sooo much for d bit pihu...luved it sachchi...
i luved dat maan decided to run for his geet's safety...dat was really caring gesture of his...
superbly written update dear d whole murder bit geet shocked den running maan coming n fighting everything was fabulously described...👏👏👏
HATS OFF for writing such an intriguing part sweety...luv u dear...eagerly waiting for d nxt...


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