The perfect couple (RTMC ff) (reply on page 51) - Page 36

Silence silence evry wer..

Itna sab kuch gumsum ' hmm. Finally humari charu ne aapna muak khola.. thnk god..

This silence kills' really.

They care fr each other so much' he dnt leave her in house alone.. she sends coffe fr him.. dats all is vry romantic'

Chutti time'party..

Lekin yeh kya.. kya boring log h dono.. ghar main bhaike v- games khel rhe h aur novels padd rhe h ..

O no finally aunty is no more'

Iske baad job hi hoa.. all I can say is.. it ws beautifully designed.. beautifully written.. it ws heart rendering.. simple more dan amazing..

Charu's reaction, adi tion concern.. their action.. so much real, so much sentimental'.

Her wish.. n adi's helplessness'just so over romantic

Di super ly written scene'

Merging the next ud too here in dis cmnt'

Charu fainted .. o no.. she is so much weak..

After all she loved her mother.. who does not???..

She is admitted to hospital.. adi cares fr her so much'

Lovely couple' yeh ud poora ka poora itna sentimental tha.. dis ws important fr there relation to be mature a bit.. afta that jealousy part..

But I din want her mother to actually die..critical case ho jata.. I mean admitted to ICU.. but not her death.. its to harsh on our charu..

Adi is so thoughtful her..he called ankita to home'

Why the hell he is asking fr karan.. ??

I dnt like karan.. he is mad.. he dnt deserve our charu.. evn 0.000001%..

So.. he adi has crossed all his limits to lov charu unconditionally.. he arranged her a date wid that..idiot..mindless man.

Oops! Accident ho gya..aadi ka.. shukar h,, its minor'

She ignored karan n rushed to hospital' lovd this scene'

Auto wale ko paise bad main milenge'

Hospital main jo hoa.. I feel like laghing.. thogh it ws emotional scene.. but crazy like me can laugh wid no reason to..

But d.. loved that scene.. both trying to control each other' charu easily accepting his advise to leave..

But den jo hoa.. so romantic it was.. haye.. rabne bana di Jodi h yeh tho..

But yeh autowala.. thoda wait nahi kerr sakta tha.. humme abhi tak koi kiss tho mili hi nahi'.last scene ws funny..

Come on boyzz. Tumne tho sikha hoga skul main ki we knock d door before entering.. I din expected dis frm rohan n sid..naughty boyz'

Ud soon..

Lov u for this stry.

i love your ff and also your writing skill. you are amezing .its my first comment.
i m waiting for your next update😍.

thanks for pm & updates
missing my charu adi very much
Part 15
y u ended this beautiful trip so early!!
loved this line
Like he had always been waiting for this' like it always meant to be like that' together'
end of goa trip take ur time dear but y u ended so early!
heheh tht bitch roshani appeared to surprise adi!!
n she thought they r siblings with their fights!!
loved grandma's reaction on charu's possessiveness
she is cute child still!!
well done charu u emptied water on tht bitch!!
and adi too thanks her for tht!!
ohho rose day!! adi forgot abt and result of many angry female fans!
and charu waiting for karan n she return 50 roses!!
how fool she is to asking adi to give rose to neeru!!
poor sid not getting any chance to give rose!!
and tht karan gave her rose i will kill him!!
adi was approaching to her n stop seeing tht!1
this is not done charu!! u r right!! u r a cheating wife!!
but we n adi still love u

Part 16
loved the way u described his feelings!!
poor adi couldn't tell her abt his feelings as he himself not knowing it!
we also don't like her with tht karan!!
n adi y u calling him her boyfrnd call him only his frnd
charu too not knowing wht she actually did!!

Little did she realize that she had done something to him. She had made him fall in love with her...

ohh she too started caring for him sending coffee mugs with servant on exam time and she felt pain when she saw him in pain!!
ohh wow prom night
y is this roshini bitch comming even after adi insulted her!
he couldn't bear charu with karan!!
his emotions r exploding!!
and charu herself wanted him to speak out!!
next scene was amazing!!
loved their feelings he trying to tell her tht she is only n only his
though it was shocking to him but l loved tht fact!
yes she is of his only his n he is only hers
and she too want to sooth him his pain! and loved tht fact tht she owed him!!

I discovered this FF yesterday and read it till 2.00 pm.😊 Simply loved it, loved it, loved it. 😊
But i just felt this could have been stretched further, there could have been more college scenes and especially goa trip part was abruptly ended. I think it is a fantastic FF and writer is extremely talented. If possible can you still include Goa trip in a separate chapter?? Please don't finish this FF so early. It is extremely romantic.😉😃😳

please update😭, best FF:)😊

No updates and no news, where is everyone?

i just love ur story i keep on reading this story i have read it like 5 times and i am still of statisfied with it i want read more of The perfect couple plzz update if u can

Part 17

ohh so both kept quite in their return journey!!
so our Mr. devil had hard time to sleep also
He was more annoyed at himself than anyone else. The girl wouldn't allow him a moment of peace and still he felt an indispensable urge for seeing her again. What was wrong with him? She wasn't any goddess that his day won't start without seeing her. And he could easily see her in the morning. Surely he won't go to see her. Never…

hehehe but he went to see her again!!
adi covering charu with blanket scene was cute and she smiled peaceful in reaction!!!
ohh grandma n sanjay leaving to see renuka!
so both are alone at home

"Why? You haven't eaten anything since morning." He raised his brows questioningly. How did she know that he hadn't eaten anything? But he almost smiled when she defended herself stubbornly "I wouldn't have come if grandma didn't give me the responsibility of you"
both are caring for each other but don't want to show!!
our charu is very innocent like kid so she forgave u so easily!!

why u done this!! showing renuka dead!!
we wanted her!1 i though u will show her getting improved her health!!
we too heartbroken like charu!!
all description of whole sad scene made me cry!!
i m feeling very bad for charu!!
she din't even met her once!!
"I hate you" she whispered with a fresh stream of tears. She took away her chance of being with her in her last days. How could she be so unfair to her?
its unfair with us too!!😭

Part 18
Adi consoling charu described very nicely!!
but it was very heart wrenching!!
when she saw her mother's dead body!!😭

Charu there as she fainted the very next moment she saw her mother dead. She had not even heard of such harsh realities of life leave alone facing them with her eyes. Her mother always protected her from the real world. She was too weak mentally to accept it like a mature. That is why she knew she won't be able to endure the truth.
these lines are very true 😭
No one on this earth could better know their child than the mother.
👏
liked adi cared charu n made her eat!!

ohh we miss our charu who was mischeivous, irritating to adi!!
her maa's death made her silent!!
adi is very nice person to meet anki to make charu happy
and also he asked for karan too

Adi perceived the doubt on her face and said softly "Don't worry. I won't kill him and get arrested. I love myself too much for that. I – I just want him to meet Charu."

Ankita chuckled at his excuse to hide his own emotions.

"I get you Aditya but I don't think this would work. He was just a crush of hers. I know her from school days. She lived in the world of fairies and princes."

"Ouch" he said dramatically and added, "You mean I am not a prince charming."

She chuckled again and admired the light heartedness he was capable of creating even under such grave issue.

we too know anki tht adi loves charu very much n she is very lucky!!

ohh both getting out 😃but to meet tht karan
She came out in a dark red knee length skirt and cream top. His heart skipped a beat as he saw her coming out of the room. He smiled weakly trying to hide the storm in his heart.

you love her then y u r taking her to karan😡she will be happy with you only!!
ohh he made accident!1 obviously he lost his mind for charu!!😲

In the taxi she kept on crying with an unending stream of tears. She remembered the day she had lost her mother. She cannot afford to lose anyone anymore. Though he had told her that it was a minor accident but she felt abruptly scared.

ohh out poor charu!!

loved whole hosptial scene!1
it was beautiful n romantic!!
also cute teasing of friends sid n rohan!!!
n loved taxi driver who was
"Sorry Adi, but we found this pitiable man searching for an untrustworthy girl in the hospital"

thank u so much for these beautiful updates!!
sorry for late comments!