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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one
geet will be shattered wen she will learn truth
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part 17
nice part...
now its picking up speed...
Jai is disgusting...
the precap is interesting...
hope Sonia/Geet sees through her new family and goes back to Maan and Ammy and her loving family...
cont soon...

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Part 17 is very interesting...till now don't understand what is jai's plan...precap sounds very interesting...waiting to know the next...
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Part 18

Sameera was crying continuously when Sonia left to office. Maan and others were trying to control her tears but she was not stopping her tears. Sameera was really hurt when Sonia showed her unfriendly attitude. She was happy when Maan told that Geet is not dead but alive at New York but now she confirmed that this is not her Geet. Maan then thought that Geet doesn't remember anything and she is having another partial amnesia.

Sonia when she reached car started weeping quietly thinking how she hurted her Sameera didi but then Jai's word flashed which made her strong and wipe her tears. When she reached her office cabin, a pair if strong arms snaked around her waist. She knew Ron was back and was happy. She turned around and hugged and kissed him. Ron was surprised feeling her kissing him aggressively but then thought that his absence made her wilder. He grinned and took her to bedroom attached to her cabin with naughty thoughts.

Jai at the meanwhile was planning to break MSK. He knew that by now MSK knew who Sonia was . Jai wanted to use this chance to make him break down in such a way that he'll never recover. For that, he e that Maan have completely fallen for Sonia and knew Sonia is Geet. He was planning something big and dirty using Geet as his puppet.

2 weeks later

Maan didn't see Geet after she left that day from home. Whenever he calls office or reaches her office to meet her, Sasha told him that she didn't come to office. He tried to ask her reason; only answer he got back was "Ron sir is back that's the reason for Madam's absence." He doesn't know who is Ron but knew he is someone close to Geet but the question in his mind was "WHO?"

Once Maan was going to a hotel for meeting, he suddenly saw his Geet with another Man kissing and hugging. His heart was shattered to see his Love in another man's arm. He stood there numb. Ron and Geet broke the kiss to see MSK looking at them with hurt expression. Geet and Ron didn't understand why Maan was hurt. She even didn't understand why Ammy was calling her mama too. Geet suddenly felt an unknown guilty but she didn't know why she was feeling that. She introduced Maan to Ron and Ron to Maan. Maan came to know that Ron was Geet's Love but when she told him that Ron is her Boyfriend there was no spark or love in her eyes. He then saw no glow in her eyes that she had for Maan during her pregnancy time. He knew that Geet's heart still love him but Geet's brain is not accepting as it believes Ron is her Love.

2 days later

Geet went to meet Jai for discussing what she has to do next. After discussing she was about to go but suddenly she felt dizziness and was about to fall down but before she reaches ground Jai holds her. He seeing her pale face was scared and rushed to hospital with her. Doctor informed Jai that Geet is pregnant. Geet was having mixed feelings like happy, sad, etc. She called Ron and asked him to come to XXX hospital. Ron rushed to hospital with fear-stricken face but when Geet informed him that she was pregnant, he was on cloud nine. He informed Neel and Siya even Abhi and Reva too. Seeing him behaving like a kid, Geet giggled. Jai was the only one who was unhappy. His entire plan got ruined as Doctor advised Geet for a complete bed rest.

Neel demanded that it's time for Ron and Geet to get married to which they agreed. Siya was happy that Geet is going to give a waaris to Raichand family. Neel was happy to become a grandfather. Jai was planning to kill Geet's baby which was a hurdle to his entire plan.

1 month later

Siya and Ron came back from shopping for the wedding. Geet was in office with Neel as they had to discuss about the wedding planning and about Geet's health. Neel who didn't like Sonz was now always with her. He now loved and cared her more. Geet did her shopping with Neel while Ron and Siya were together for his shopping. Neel & Siya were really excited about the wedding and also about the baby. Siya and Ron came back home early from shopping as Siya was feeling really tired. They were walking towards dinning room but suddenly they heard Jai's voice which made them shock.

Jai : I want everything to be perfect. Tomorrow before the wedding Ron and Mom will go together to meet Abhi Bhai & Reva Bhabhi. But I don't want them to reach there. Before they reach that place kill them.

He switched off the mobile and turned around to see a shocked Siya and Ron. Ron was about to punch Jai but Jai's men caught him. They tied him & Siya to chair. Jai was laughing at them.

Siya : Jai I'm ur mom. How could you think of killing me? (Shocked)

Jai : C'mon mom stop this melo drama. I want to kill you both especially Ron because hearing this news Sonz will have an abortion.

Ron : What? (Shocked)

Jai : Yes you heard me clear Ron. I want Sonz to have abortion so that my plan will work properly.

Ron : Don't you dare. I'll kill you if anything happen to my Sonz and baby. (Angry)

Siya : You want to kill the baby? But why? It was you who introduced her to us and was supporting her relationship with Ron but all of a sudden what happen?(Shocked)

Jai : well I kidnapped her for using her as a weapon against MSK.

Ron : You kidnapped her? (Shocked)

Jai : Ohh well just forget the things I said to you all about her earlier because it was all a lie. She too don't know what the truth is expect me.

Siya : What truth?

Jai : Ron, Geet told you everything about her naa?

Ron : Yes, she told me everything about her.

Jai : Just delete the part which she said about her sister selling her to some men and they raping her and her in coma because that not true.

Ron : She was not raped?

Jai : Yes she was but only once and only by one man who now loves her unconditionally and wants her back which is not going to happen because I won't allow it.

Ron : I don't understand. Was Geet lying to me?

Siya : Who is this Geet?(Confused)

Jai : Sonia is Geet. And Ron, she was not lying. She told you things I made her believe.

Ron : I don't understand.

Jai : OK I will tell you.

Backstory

It was Jai who appointed a person to kill Maan. That person was following MSK everywhere. He then saw MSK with his siblings and with a girl (Geet) at a restaurant without security guards. He was about to shoot in MSK chest when Geet came in front of him to talk to him. She was shot on side of her head and MSK took her to hospital. Person told all these things to Jai who was angry at person because after this incident MSK made double security. Bur when Person told him about MSK's concern for a girl, Jai was curious. He found Jenny, who was a maid in MSK's home. She secretly was Jai's informer too unlike Gayatri who was loyal to MSK. Jenny told him what all she knows about MSK & the girl.

Jai then appointed an investigating officer to know more about MSK relation with that Geet. He then through the investigating came to know that Geet is an important part in MSK's life. He waited for right time to play his game. After few months, he came to know that Geet gave birth to MSK's baby and is in coma. He waited for the day when no Khurana or Sam-Rahul is there with Geet in hospital. When he got such chance, he kidnapped Geet and burned the whole building to make everyone believe that Geet is dead.

He took Geet to New York so that he can check her health whenever he want to. He appointed best doctors for her treatment. It took 1 year for Geet to come out of Coma. Doctor told Jai that she doesn't remember her relation with Maan as she recovered from Partial amnesia. Jai was again confused hearing it. He again appointed another person to dig into Geet's life and past. Then he came to know about Geet's accident which led to her mental instability, then her partial amnesia and everything. He was shocked to know that MSK took advantage of a mentally unstable girl. But he smirked as he can take advantage of it.

He made Geet believe that her elder sister Sameera sold her to some men for making money so that Sam can live with Ranveer peacefully. She didn't believe him but he took her to Doctor for her virginity test and when the result came she was shocked. He also told her lie that she was pregnant a baby too but Sam made her abort it for her advantage. He slowly poisoned her against her own sister and Jiju. Then he made her against Khuranas and mainly against MSK. He made her believe that he is only one she can trust. Jai slowly became her everything. He changed her from Geet to Sonia. He brought luxurious apartment for her and also made her join fashion designing course. Gave her car, money, plantinum card, etc. Slowly she started to depend on him for everything. He brought Fashion World under her name. He made her MD of it.

Then one day, Ron and Neel saw her with Jai. Neel came to know that Jai brought Fashion World under Sonia's name. Neel asked Jai to bring Sonia to their home as they wanted to know about her and her role in Jai's life. Jai told them that Sonia is like a sister to him and he helped her due to his affection for her. Neel didn't believe Jai but seeing Sonia's respect for Jai he thought may be Jai cared for someone. Ron was mesmerized by Sonia's beauty. He tried to flirt with her and get her attention but she ignored him.

Ron was stubborn for her attention and he dumped all his Girlfriends. He concentrated on Sonia only but she didn't show any interest in him. Jai asked Ron to stay away from her which made him angry. He tried many ways to go closer to her but seeing her ignorance he was more mad for getting her. One day, a drunk Ron went to her apartment and tried to force himself on her but collapsed due to over drinking. Next day, when he got up he saw a fear-stricken Sonz in corner of room. She was shivering very badly and also was unconscious. He was scared seeing her like this and called Doctor. Doctor told him that she is in shock and due to this, she is having high fever. Ron was guilty and started to take care of her. She was initially scared seeing hin in her apartment but when he apologized for his behavior , she forgave him. Slowly they started to become good friends. Ron's behavior towards her to change and slowly he started to fall in love with her.

One final day he proposed her. She cried which made him sad thinking that she rejected him but she told him about her. Her real name, her identity and also how Jai saved her from her own blood. Ron was shocked to know how much she suffered and promised her that he'll never do anything like that with her and asked her for one chance, which she gave. They started to date each other but whenever they go for any date, his ex-girlfriends or Media will come to ruin it. Fed up with all this, he announced that he and Sonia are seeing each other.

Jai was shocked, Neel was angry but Siya was happy because she liked Sonia's status and her beauty too. Siya whole-heartily welcomed her to Raichand Family. Jai didn't protest because he needed Geet to believe that he is her well-wisher. Sonia then started to live with Ron. He then became her loyal boyfriend and stayed away from other women. Sonia shifted her belongings and stuffs to RM and started to live in Ron's room. Siya accepted it but Neel was against it. Jai didn't mind it.

Present

Jai : Geet is MSK's love interest. Mother of MSK's kid. He loves her.

Ron : I didn't understand.

Jai : You are dumb Ron. Just connect what she told you with this. You'll understand.

Siya was still confused but Ron was thinking. After 2 minutes he understood everything. He was shocked to know that Jai can stoop this low. He now wanted to know why Jai did all these.

Ron : Why you did all these?

Jai : To wipe my enemy MSK off from business world and also to take over Raichand business. Now enough of this question answer business. Since you came here and heard all these you should die today instead of tomorrow. Rohit, Manav, Suresh take these two and you guys know what to do right?

Siya : Jai (Shocked)

Jai : Bye mom

Ron : Are you going to kill Geet too?

Jai : No I won't kill her. I need her. She runs business smoothly and is good for being my better half. So once I finish MSK, I'll marry her saying that it was your last wish.

Ron : YOU???(Angry)

Jai : Yes Ron. I won't get anyone better than her. She is beautiful and also intelligent. She always solve problems in our illegal business too. After she stepping inside our business, our business grew higher. And I know if I say your name, she'll marry me because she loves you a lot.

Ron : I won't allow that to happen. (Angry)

Jai : Really? But before you say anything to her you'll die naa? Now bye my dear brother. See you at hell after 50 years.

Jai's men took them away. Jai was smirking evily. Jai's men shot Siya and Ron. Siya dead on the spot but Ron didn't. Before Jai's men kill him, he escaped from there. Jai's men were behind him but he somehow escaped from their eyes and went to Maan's House.

Pari screamed seeing Ron drenched in blood. Security came ans started to drag him but he was shouting for Maan. Suddenly, he said Geet's name aloud which made Rahul stop the security. Rahul asked Ron how he knew Geet. Ron told him that he needed to say something important to Maan about Geet. Rahul took him inside their house and called Maan in mobile and asked him to come home immediately. Meera was cleaning Ron's wound and took many bullets from his body. Ron's chance to survive was really low. Maan came inside and saw a wounded Ron. He came near him and sat on chair.

Maan : Mr. Raunak Raichand? What happened to you? (Shocked)

Ron : Maan, Geet' Geet is danger.

Maan : What? (Shocked)

Ron : Listen to me Maan. (He told him everything including Jai's plan) Please save her Maan. She thinks that Sam ruined her life. Actually its Jai who poisoned her mind. Please don't hate her Maan. Please save my Sonz. Please.(Begged)

Maan : I'll save her Ron. I won't leave Jai for keeping my Mishty away from me for all these years. (Maan got up to leave but was again called by Ron)

Ron : Maan, I want to tell you something important. Hearing this, sometimes you'll hate me or Sonz but believe me she is innocent. She still doesn't know that you are not her Maan Bhai but simply Maan to her.

Maan : What is it?

Ron : Geet is pregnant with my baby. I know you'll be angry and hurt hearing this but please don't hate her. Jai is planning to kill baby. I know you don't want my baby to be inside her but please save my baby too. I have money on my account, once my baby is born you can leave my baby with Abhi bhai. I mean Abijith Raichand.

Maan : He is your?

Ron : Elder brother. He'll look after my baby. But please save my baby. I'll ask Abhi bhai not to bother you with my baby but please do save my baby too. And please don't hate Geet. She doesn't know anything. Please its my last wish.

Maan : I'll save baby and Geet too. Don't worry. Meera shift him to hospital.

Ron : No Maan, I won't survive but I cam now die happily. I know you'll save them.

Maan : Nothing will happen to you Ron. Be strong.

Ron : Maan ask Abhi Bhai to name my baby Muskhaan if my baby is a girl. I know my baby will be a girl just like my Sonz.

Maan : Don't worry I'll name her Muskhaan. I'll look after her as my baby.

Ron : You will? (Happily)

Maan : Yes

Ron : Thhaanks (Closed his eyes)

Maan : No need to thank me Ron, I want to thank you as you gave my Mishti back. I'll look your baby as mine. It's a promise.

Dev : Bhai, we need to save Geet.

Maan : Yes but before rushing, we need to play back Jai's game. Geet won't believe us as Jai poisned her mind.

Rahul : What will we do?

Maan : Trap Jai.

Sameera: I can't believe that Jai told my Geetu all those dirty lies. (Crying)

Maan : Pari, take Sam to room. Where is Ammy?

NT : In your room Veerji. He is sleeping.

Maan : Hmm.

Ladies left leaving Vicky, Maan, Rahul, Veer and Dev. Maan called Adi and asked him to come home.

Pre-cap : Leap

Sorry Guys for making Geet pregnant with Ron's baby but it is important as for climax. I want to know how many of them want Geet's abortion of Ron's baby. Please do say, so I can write with little change. I'm gonna end it soon.

Edited by Ash534 - 12 years ago

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