Love, Lies and Deceit-Thread 2 Part 39 pg 64 9/12

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Mehek25
Rose i am a bit confused about Maan-Sunny's relationship.
But u are holding on to the suspense beautifully.

Pls don't get upset about negative comments and continue the story.

U are an awesome writer and I am sure u have a proper explanation for everything that has so far happened in the story.

Pls update next part soon.

Thanx for pm dear.

Thanks dear urs is the first positive commenti have read on the wall...was not upset...but was sure scared as hell by all the anger...but i still do not want to reveal the story just now...thanks dear for ur faith in my writing...will try to update as soon as possible.😊

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Mishti13
I am confused of Sunny and maans relationship
hope you reveal the truths soon

after all was good update

finally dadi forgave geet

thanks for pm

cont. soon

the confusion will get cleared soon dear

thank u so much dear

geet was forgiven by dadi

will update as soon as possible

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LadyArwen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

start revealing secrets... else i'll get real MAD...😡 nice update though... loved Geet's concern... and if Maan's "CHERI" is Geet then he has to do a lot for her to start thinking for her happiness also... she is one such soul who has lost hope for happiness... a depressed soul who is trying to hide it for others... so Maan has to do a lot of home-work for her case...

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

I loved this comment ..

Really, it seems Maan cant live without multiple women in his life - is he confused in love or is it the women who are confused - its not evident.

Rose, this is an appreciation cum feedback post.

The story is complex and I know the USP is suspense. I appreciate your story from that aspect. I am not even mentioning Maaneet parts. But the characters of the story are weak. This whole idea of Maan loving somebody in office, being with Sonalika and marrying Geet doesnt seem logical enough.

I know you havent mentioned who is the father of Sonalika's baby - everybody is assuming it to be Maan - maybe he is... maybe he isnt. But Sunny and Maan were speaking of marriage at Dev's wedding.

Geet's character portrayal is not strong. If she is a balanced individual then sacrificing for Dev was logical but marrying Maan was not - infact why did she have to marry at all. If Maan loved Sunny enough, he wouldnt have married Geet - he totally "forgot" about her in the situation!

Sunny being Maan's bed partner, her agreeing to stay in Maaneet room even after their marriage, Maan sleeping in the same bed with Geet after marriage when Sunny might be expecting his baby, Geet bringing Sunny to stay in the same room with Maan even when they are legally married, Dadima accepting these things look morally wrong from my point of view.

I agree with Rachna, its hard to digest. In order to make the story appealing, pls dont compromise with logic and integrity.

But again, its a story and I trust you will give us an interesting ending.😊

I loved this comment ..

Really, it seems Maan cant live without multiple women in his life - is he confused in love or is it the women who are confused - its not evident.

Rose, this is an appreciation cum feedback post.

u r most welcome to state ur POV😊. ur comments r most welcome.

The story is complex and I know the USP is suspense. I appreciate your story from that aspect. I am not even mentioning Maaneet parts. But the characters of the story are weak. This whole idea of Maan loving somebody in office, being with Sonalika and marrying Geet doesnt seem logical enough.

i hope it will when the suspense is revealed

I know you havent mentioned who is the father of Sonalika's baby - everybody is assuming it to be Maan - maybe he is... maybe he isnt. But Sunny and Maan were speaking of marriage at Dev's wedding.

no dear never according to my memory or in any update have i said they r to be married.

Geet's character portrayal is not strong. If she is a balanced individual then sacrificing for Dev was logical but marrying Maan was not - infact why did she have to marry at all. If Maan loved Sunny enough, he wouldnt have married Geet - he totally "forgot" about her in the situation!

but is he confessing his love for sunny...Geet assumes he loves Sunny but maan is not saying that...Maan loves only "cheri"

Sunny being Maan's bed partner, her agreeing to stay in Maaneet room even after their marriage, Maan sleeping in the same bed with Geet after marriage when Sunny might be expecting his baby, Geet bringing Sunny to stay in the same room with Maan even when they are legally married, Dadima accepting these things look morally wrong from my point of view.

If dadima would have agreed then she would not have got angry at the first place...she was vry angry with geet and somewhat with maan also that the reason they r living in the outhouse dear.

I agree with Rachna, its hard to digest. In order to make the story appealing, pls dont compromise with logic and integrity.

i dont think logic is compromised...plz have patience thats all i will ask.

But again, its a story and I trust you will give us an interesting ending.😊

i hope the ending will appese u all😊

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: preeti.1
Mera to dil hi toot gaua maan ki life ka important part sunny kese ho sakti he I m damm sure k geet k saath intimate maan hi hua he .plz itne din sse paaglop ki tarah wait kar rahi thi update ka mujhje laga tha maan geet k desicion se khush nai hoga aur geet ko akela nai chodega par yaha to maan sunny k sdaath khusdh he . Me to ro hi padi update pad k maan geet ko akela kese chod sakta he plz next update me maan ki feelingsa show karo geet k liye aur sunny aur maan k relation ka raaz bhi kholo I hope next update me heart attack mat dena sunny ko maan ki GF bata k 'yuki maan aur geet ek dusrew k liye hi bane he aur maan sirf geet se pyaar karta ho uski cherry geet hi ho . Plz next update jitna jaldi ho do I can't wait yaar

itne din sse-----dear i am updating in almost two days time...so u cant say itne din sse😊

Geet ne hi sunny ko maan ke room me bheja tha...

i will try to update as soon as possible.

Plz have patience

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: ammu5
ending so soon?? without mistry of sunny solved n our maaneets moments.

no dear...only after clearing the mystery will i end this...i will clear all the confusions and reveal all the suspense and then only will i end it.😊

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
great part...

Thank u dear😊

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

hello DIDI...
see i am so shameless that i cant stop myself from coming here,, reading ur updates and commenting on them and voice out the random things going on in my brain...
u know, i am thinking about ur ff, having my law book in my hand...my mom is happy thinking i am thinking about some case study and racking my brains, lest she knows i am racking my brains over what the hell is happening in ur ff and will happen in ur ff...

i feel u have to work double hard on ur update as u have to script ur update in such a way that u dont give away the suspense or any clues that will spoil the story's USP that is mystery...

the self talks of maan was very tricky acc to me as i felt i cudnt make out whether he is talking of sunny or geet...especially he loving her...it was difficult to decode whether its geet or sunny...well that def gives u a hint that i am still hoping for maneet...

i read some of ur readers comments that says they feel prob logic is being compromised for the sake of maintaining the suspense, which i strongly feel is absurd...i am sure that u r not a person who takes creative liberties to tease ur readers with the mystery...u def have the entire plot laid out in ur mind...and u r doing a fab job with the way u play with words...its just that we are not able to figure out the mystery which itself is a great complement to a write that she has managed to keep a tight hold over the curiosity of her readers right till the end

i even started doubting dev thinking prob this is all planned by dev and he is not a saint as he portrayed himself...i am simply going bonkers😆

maan loving cherie, the girl from his office and then the group of girls visiting KM, geet or sunny...i feel in the end u will tie all the loose ends and give us mindblowing and befitting end...
the ff is gonna end in 5 parts...well i sort of feel depressed as i simply cannot get enough of ur ff

hopefully u will come up with an equally engaging story...
keep writing and dont get discouraged by the comments, coz i am sure ur readers simply want u to be the best and dont want u to disappoint them...

love u

and yes waiting for the next update...so dont keep us waiting for long
muahhh

reva

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Water.
I am loving the healthy discussions here.

The character that irks me the most is Maan.

He just does not seem to flow smoothly here.

He is undecided in his heart and mind both.

If he loves Cheri, than he should not have any feelings (which are more than friendship) towards other women.

Yes, he is not sleeping (physically) with Sunny on the same bed, but how can he even think of living in the same room as her. How can he say he cannot live without her? When supposedly his heart and soul belongs to Cheri?

Does that make sense?

Why even agree to marry Geet in the first place? What is he trying to prove here. That he is all. The saviour of all women in his life. It just does not make sense.

Specially in our South Asian society...can he really live a life as such.

I mean involved with 3 women at the same time. (not in a physical sense, but emotionally)

In regards to Geet, she should have refused to marry him in the first place, since Maan's character in terms of ethics and morality is shakable. I would be able to have trust on a person like him.

Please do not take my comment as a negative comment. I am just expressing my view.

In the end, like u said...i will be waiting for maaneet to be together...but at the same time will be satisfied as a reader only when all these confusions and ethically incorrect situations will resolve.

I am loving the healthy discussions here.

even i am enjoying the discussions.😊

The character that irks me the most is Maan.He just does not seem to flow smoothly here.He is undecided in his heart and mind both.

thats bcoz Maans POV and his inner most thoughts are not revealed at all in this story. no dear i donot think so...its we who r assuming that he loves all three...only his love for cheri is known.

If he loves Cheri, than he should not have any feelings (which are more than friendship) towards other women.

no i do not agree with u...he can have friends who girls and women...and its not clear whether Sunny and Maan r having a sexual relationship...so until that is known...i dont see any problem in their freindship.

Yes, he is not sleeping (physically) with Sunny on the same bed, but how can he even think of living in the same room as her. How can he say he cannot live without her? When supposedly his heart and soul belongs to Cheri?

becoz if he has taken a resposibility he will see it through plus i feel as he did not have too many friends who r women thn his friendship with Sunny is imp. for him

Does that make sense?

do my ans make any sense?

Why even agree to marry Geet in the first place? What is he trying to prove here. That he is all. The saviour of all women in his life. It just does not make sense. Specially in our South Asian society...can he really live a life as such.

y he marreid Geet i will reveal later...and i hope my that update will make sense and ans many of ur qs.

I mean involved with 3 women at the same time. (not in a physical sense, but emotionally)

In regards to Geet, she should have refused to marry him in the first place, since Maan's character in terms of ethics and morality is shakable. I would be able to have trust on a person like him.

dub te ko tinka ka sahara bhi kafi hota hai...like that for Geet the support of Maan at that time was crucial.

Please do not take my comment as a negative comment. I am just expressing my view.

no dear...ur thoughts, ur POV r welcome...i may get scared but that will help me to write better and clearer.😊

In the end, like u said...i will be waiting for maaneet to be together...but at the same time will be satisfied as a reader only when all these confusions and ethically incorrect situations will resolve.

i will try to clear the confusions as soon as possible