Love, Lies and Deceit-Thread 2 Part 39 pg 64 9/12 - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hello DIDI...
see i am so shameless that i cant stop myself from coming here,, reading ur updates and commenting on them and voice out the random things going on in my brain...
u know, i am thinking about ur ff, having my law book in my hand...my mom is happy thinking i am thinking about some case study and racking my brains, lest she knows i am racking my brains over what the hell is happening in ur ff and will happen in ur ff...

i feel u have to work double hard on ur update as u have to script ur update in such a way that u dont give away the suspense or any clues that will spoil the story's USP that is mystery...

the self talks of maan was very tricky acc to me as i felt i cudnt make out whether he is talking of sunny or geet...especially he loving her...it was difficult to decode whether its geet or sunny...well that def gives u a hint that i am still hoping for maneet...

i read some of ur readers comments that says they feel prob logic is being compromised for the sake of maintaining the suspense, which i strongly feel is absurd...i am sure that u r not a person who takes creative liberties to tease ur readers with the mystery...u def have the entire plot laid out in ur mind...and u r doing a fab job with the way u play with words...its just that we are not able to figure out the mystery which itself is a great complement to a write that she has managed to keep a tight hold over the curiosity of her readers right till the end

i even started doubting dev thinking prob this is all planned by dev and he is not a saint as he portrayed himself...i am simply going bonkers😆

maan loving cherie, the girl from his office and then the group of girls visiting KM, geet or sunny...i feel in the end u will tie all the loose ends and give us mindblowing and befitting end...
the ff is gonna end in 5 parts...well i sort of feel depressed as i simply cannot get enough of ur ff

hopefully u will come up with an equally engaging story...
keep writing and dont get discouraged by the comments, coz i am sure ur readers simply want u to be the best and dont want u to disappoint them...

love u

and yes waiting for the next update...so dont keep us waiting for long
muahhh

reva

hello DIDI...
see i am so shameless that i cant stop myself from coming here,, reading ur updates and commenting on them and voice out the random things going on in my brain...

u know, i am thinking about ur ff, having my law book in my hand...my mom is happy thinking i am thinking about some case study and racking my brains, lest she knows i am racking my brains over what the hell is happening in ur ff and will happen in ur ff...

😡😡naughty naughty girl😡😡 making fool of moma
u should seriously contentrate of ur studies dear ur exams r near
u can always read the ffs later
first studies and then other things(please)
(dekho maine apna badi didi hone ka farz pura kiya😉)

i feel u have to work double hard on ur update as u have to script ur update in such a way that u dont give away the suspense or any clues that will spoil the story's USP that is mystery...
i will tr to come up to ur expectations dear😊

the self talks of maan was very tricky acc to me as i felt i cudnt make out whether he is talking of sunny or geet...especially he loving her...it was difficult to decode whether its geet or sunny...well that def gives u a hint that i am still hoping for maneet...
keep on hoping dear😉... i feel the comment made by sunny about bed partner does not tell whether the relationship the have is of friends only or something more...in itself the words the words r ambiguous

i read some of ur readers comments that says they feel prob logic is being compromised for the sake of maintaining the suspense, which i strongly feel is absurd...i am sure that u r not a person who takes creative liberties to tease ur readers with the mystery...u def have the entire plot laid out in ur mind...and u r doing a fab job with the way u play with words...its just that we are not able to figure out the mystery which itself is a great complement to a write that she has managed to keep a tight hold over the curiosity of her readers right till the end
thank u dear for u words r the encouragement i need. i only wish i can come up to ur expectaions dear (kahin end aate aate sab kuch fuuss na ho jaye)

i even started doubting dev thinking prob this is all planned by dev and he is not a saint as he portrayed himself...i am simply going bonkers😆
Dev...the next part is of dev only..let's see what happen in that(though i myself don't know what to write😭)

maan loving cherie, the girl from his office and then the group of girls visiting KM, geet or sunny...i feel in the end u will tie all the loose ends and give us mindblowing and befitting end...
.plz don't keep so much expectations...i am scared i might fall flat on my face
the ff is gonna end in 5 parts...well i sort of feel depressed as i simply cannot get enough of ur ff
i dont know waht to do? so many r asking y in 5 parts?y so soon?

hopefully u will come up with an equally engaging story...
keep writing and dont get discouraged by the comments, coz i am sure ur readers simply want u to be the best and dont want u to disappoint them...
let's see

love u
me too

and yes waiting for the next update...so dont keep us waiting for long
i will try dear.
muahhh
a very big🤗to u
reva
(i had to type the ans to u comments three times Reva...i tried posting some smileys and each time i tried the ans got deleted😭😭😭)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice concept...😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

finally dadima has forgiven Geet... and Maan and Sunny are back together.. then how come u can finish this in 5 updates??😡

not acceptable...

Maan and sunny have their own story to tell...don't u want me to finish the story?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandymore

Nice prt,nt happy 4 geet,do smthng 4 her she too desrve happiness

thanks dear...geet will have her own story to tell(cryptic na😉)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9staroneserials

Nice concept...😳😳😳😳😳

Welcome to the ff...thank u so much😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rose 🤗...sorry for the late comment ...was busy with Thanksgiving holidays...thank u for the awesome update and PM...so Sunny is Maan's bed partner and he loves her 😲...u are so wicked 😡 ...u thought i will fall for your tease 😛...i am really impressed with the way u maintained the suspense so far...superb job my dear ⭐️...how u are going to clear all the doubts in 5 more updates is another mystery 😆...plz continue...love uuu...TC 😊

Edited by PerfectYaRav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just came across ur ff... Although I haven't read every part from the story, I have read a few n from all those discussions I must say girl u have patience n the guts to write (from what it seems a until now non maaneet story with maaneet:p) lol anyways from what I have read I have a feeling maan was the one whom geet got intimate with n geet is his "cheri" n rahul is sunny's actual partner in bed... This is a completely random guess ;) but must say wow on keeping the suspense!!!
Edited by Maaneet099 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PerfectYaRav

Rose 🤗...sorry for the late comment ...was busy with Thanksgiving holidays...thank u for the awesome update and PM...so Sunny is Maan's bed partner and he loves her 😲...u are so wicked 😡 ...u thought i will fall for your tease 😛...i am really impressed with the way u maintained the suspense so far...superb job my dear ⭐️...how u are going to clear all the doubts in 5 more updates is another mystery 😆...plz continue...love uuu...TC 😊


first of all a very big thank u for the lovely scarp😊😃😊😃😊😃😊
its ok dear...no problem comment when u r able to...but plz do comment...late commenting is ok...no commenting is not
sunny,maan,geet,dev...😉??????? i am not commenting on this😆😆😉
i hope u still will be impressed by the next update...ha...ha...ha...
5 updates and solving the whole mystery...will be difficult but i think i will be able to manage.😎
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

Just came across ur ff... Although I haven't read every part from the story, I have read a few n from all those discussions I must say girl u have patience n the guts to write (from what it seems a until now non maaneet story with maaneet:p) lol anyways from what I have read I have a feeling maan was the one whom geet got intimate with n geet is his "cheri" n rahul is sunny's actual partner in bed... This is a completely random guess ;) but must say wow on keeping the suspense!!!

welcome to the ff dear...thanks for appreciating my guts dear...i am in need for that😆(as i keep on getting the rotten tomatoes, rotten eggs and jhotis🤢😆)...maan, geet, dev, or somone else...that u will only be able to find out in the end dear)...tahnks dear for liking the suspense...hope i will be able to maintain that till the end😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i see ur topic updated as pg 30 part 35 but i dont see it!!

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