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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Hauuu yeh haisa ending hua dii...U left with a cliffhanger...
So wat ws their story...she got him at last or not...
It ws wonderfully written yet im feeling really sad...They met after so many years but there happened nothing...He just told abt his life and then she came back...
He's still unmarried na...goshh dnt know wat wud hav happened later...
Dii why u rushed it here...it shud get atleast 2 more parts...
But sighh guess that ws bound to end like this...
Write more dii...

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shreya

@AblazedEnigma..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

It was a nice part bt u should write one more part of epilogue yaar
m much eager to knw wat happend nxt,mean dey r together or nt...
it'll lyk weird cz mayu-nupz r as teacher student in FF bt fir b in case of mayur,m curious to d extent
lol,,feel like dis part should nt end,,,,

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

i couldn't asked more than such a perfect ending ..its more than perfect dear...

specially the line at the letter...
wonderful, practical, realistic stroy and so as ending..

very well written and a lovly ff...
keep it up

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

omg!!!!!!!!

wat an awesome ending diii

i loved it

2 the coreee

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

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Irum.

@Irum.

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Ruchi update ws asusal nice bt u eneded it.I know its ur FF and u can do anyhing with it.Bt don't why I m having the feeling that something is missing and incomplete.Yes u r rite that they were teacher and student bt they WERE.I know u r very busy in ur studied and studied should should b always a priority bt phir b agr kabhi future main time miley to ek part or update kr dene like cherry on cake.

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Mayank mil gaya to kya gunjan bhi mil jayegi..wo gayi...😆
waise bhi jo ek baar gaya wo phir nahi milta aage ki kahani...pta nahi..I was feeling weird to write a love story of Mayur in this FF as they were teacher-student once so imagine urself😉

we know that once they had shred a teacher student relation..

but still

this fiction..

it is not real...

please do something...