**High School**~UPDATED! p 79 LAST PART!! - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
that was soooooo goooood!!! cont soon!!! and HAPPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!! blow out the candles!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
happy birthday and continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
yaar!! where are you??? btw that was an awesome prt!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
HappyBirthday!!!! and plz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
i just read da whole thing n itz awesome!!!!!!

happy b-day!!

plz continue!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part... sorta reminds me abt the first stage show angad did in the real KYPH... she had a similar makeover... continue soon...

Kayla~
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guyz!

well, i wanna say thank u for the bday wishes!

im sry i didint cntinue....i dunt get time on the weekends so i said in my first post tat i wont cnitinue on the weekends....

anywayz...my next part wil be up in say abt 30 mins...
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Posted: 19 years ago

OK- well, i just read ur update areej and i m so honoured!! THANX SO Much! so...to say thank u im once again gona dedicate this part to AREEJ!

RECAP:
KAN- Kripa I think I know how u can get him. 😉

K- (excited) HOW HOW??? 😛

KAN- Its time for u to get a makeover! 😊

K (groans) NOOOOO!!!!😕

KAN- u want him right? 😃

K- fine!

They leave after drinking the coffee and shop. We see Kripa trying on many clothes and Kanika Didi shaking her head all the time. Then we only c the door open and then we c Kanika Didi's face and she nods. 😊

Then they head to the salon, get Kripa's hair done. All this time we only c Kanika Didi's face. Then, Kanika didi gives Kripa a lesson on make-up and we c Kripa hand moving around the make-up and applying (we don't get to c her whole face however).
😊
Then, after she puts on her make-up, Kripa puts on her clothes and is about to step out…… 😛

TODAYZ UPDATE:

She steps out and everyone staring at Kripa with their mouths hanging open. 😉

KAN- WOWWW!! 😃

Kripa blushes. 😳

K- (Meekly) can we go? 😳

Kanika Didi manages to nod and they leave. As they walk on the street, all the teenage and even some old, fat men stare at Kripa. A few girls give Kripa an envious look. Kripa just smiles at them and walks on.

(One thing u guys should know-Kripa is wearing high heels and she doesn't have much practice with heels.) As Kripa walks, she stumbles and falls right into the arms of a cute boy (played by Ejaz Khan. In my fan fic he's 16). 😳He keeps staring at her and she starts blushing. Seeing her blush he puts her on her feet. 😳


K- (Stammers) umm….i…um…I'm really sorry…😳

Cute Boy- I'm not. 😉

Kripa gets really embarrassed and looks at her high heels. 😳😳

Cute Boy- Hi! Im Dan Vaidya. 😊

Kripa- Hi im Kripa Sharma. 😳

Just then Kanika Didi screams.

KAN- OMG! Are YOU Dan? Sahil's brother? 😃

D- Ya! Do u know him? 😊

KAN- yes. He's Ankit's best friend! 😊

D- Ankit Bhaiya? How do u know him? 😊

KAN- he's my boyfriend. 😳

D- O kewl… 😃

Dan then turns to Kripa.

D- Wat about you Kripa? Do you have a boyfriend? 😉

Kripa shakes her head embarrassed like hell. 😳

Dan just grins. 😊

Just then Kanika Didi's phone rings and its none other than Ankit. They talk for about a minute. The phone call ends and Kanika Didi turns to Kripa and Dan.😊

KAN- hey im really sorry but I have to leave! 😛

K- But what am I supposed to do??😕

D- Ill take u wherever u want! 😉

Kripa blushes. (She's doin a lot of blushin!) 😳

Kanika Didi hesitates but remembers how Ankit always says that Dan was the most decent guy he met. 😊

KAN- OK! Here Kripa…this is 100 pounds for your shopping and food and transportation. If u need more than just call me up. 😊

K- Ok. 😛

Kanika Didi leaves after saying good bye. 😊

D- So…where do u wanna go?😃

Kripa just shrugs. 😊

D- Ok…so well just go to……..umm…how about Madame Tussads? 😊

K- Ok.😊

Dan puts out his hand and Kripa takes it after a little bit of hesitation. 😳

PREVIEW: Hook-ups and Break-ups.

NOTES:

Kripa and her whole family (as wel as extended family) are rich.

And wenever u c words or senteces in blue- tat means that this is an important thing that i added on.

And wenever u c words/sentences in red (like right now!) it means that those words are my comments.

K- well, i hope this part was gud.....i wil cninue soon!😊



Edited by prakriti - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
great continue very soon...cuz im dying to read more!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesme part! I bet angads gonna fall in luv with her new look! lol. cont soon!

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